Virika FF- Written In My Heart (Chp 12 - Pg 9)

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kryanvirika05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

update woo!

aww loved the update!

it was nice to know how virens mind works and what hes like as a person

Holy shit, they're in big trouble with their parents 😲

update soon! need to know!

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millee18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Loved ur new style of writing !
Amazing Work :)
Cont soon

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Kays94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

yamieee!!! ur back and with a bang ❤️

i missed getting your PMs quite a lot you know 😆

this was a beautiful update!

actually really enjoyed reading it from Viren's point of view.

I especially loved the part where he talked about how Jeevika loved his six packs abs 🤣

was adorable!

do connote soon and send me a PM

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KryanVirikaLuv

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

I was laughing to no end!
This update was absolutely hilarious 😆
Loved reading from Viren's perspective
The thoughts that run thru a guy's head are so damn funny
The part where he was putting an image of his grandma in his head to get rid of his thoughts of jeevs had to be the best!
At the same time his love and care for jeevs is really sweet, that he'd put her before anyone and anything else
And im extremely curious about whats going on with her parents
Hope you clear that up soon!
Looking fwd to the next update :)

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

absolutely brilliant

totally loved it

superb

thank you

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BloomingAway

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Loved the update!

It was lovely!

It didn't look like it was hard for you to write in Viren's PoV!

Aww I loved that Viren didn't pick up Nira's call!

Don't want any problem between Virika!

Aww bless Jeevika! Virika are screwed now!

I really wonder what Jeevika's parent need to tell her!

Thanks for the pm!

Please continue soon!

Edited by Love_Family - 10 years ago

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Awee!!!
Such a cute and awesome update!!!
Tooo good, there is so many new things we have known about virika!!! Eeksss!!!
Such an
Amazing
Mindblowing
Superbb
Awesome
Loved it
Splendid
Update!!!
Tooo cute udpate and enjoyed it!!!
Cant wait for the next update!!!
Thank u for sending me pm!!!

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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

awesome update... love viren POV... how he imaging about jeevs and do all things for her is fabulous .. last part is hilarious... I wish I would watch them... update soon..