virman os:without you - Page 2

tune virat ko mardiya i hate yu 😭
and without virat manvi is soo lonely i hate yu for that more 😡

amazing dear and u portray manvi emotion beautifully
do write more😃

very emotional dear
loved it 👏 👍🏼
thanks for the PM

This is so heart wrenching !!! :'(
Awesome os !!~~

Originally posted by: nimi00

A very heart-touching OS. Virat is dead 😭, you made me cry with this story, it was so well written, i couldn't find a single mistake 👍🏼. You write really well, please PM me if you write any more stories. 😊

thank u so much...I will 😊

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

nishu very welll written ...really emotional manvi's feelings and pain very well conveyed and virat's last days condition just perfectly written 👍🏼

thank u...😊

Originally posted by: alicemath

Beautiful, emotional n heart-touching...

Really felt bad for her...cud feel Manvi'z pain thru ur words...n atlast she z trying to cum out of her depression just for her Virat...😭

U made me cry a loot hun...it wz short yet really impactful...

Do cum up wid more n plz do pm me for ur future works...thanks in advance!!! 😊

thank u so much😊...ok I will...