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Manvi held the blue shirt to her face and the familiar smell immediatly struck her,an overwhelming grief knotting her stomach and pulling at her heart.Panic took over.Apart from the low hum of fridge and some sound from outside,the house was quite.SHE IS ALONE...

Virat was gone and he would never come back.That was the reality.She would never run her fingers through his soft hairs,never share a secret joke across the table at a dinner party,she would never share a bed with him again,never laugh with him so much that her stomach would ache,never fight with him about whose turn it was to get up and turn the bedroom light off.All that was left was bundle of memories, ans an image of his face that became more and more vague each day.

Their plan had been very simple: TO STAY TOGETHER FOR REST OF THEIR LIVES.They were best friends, lovers and soul mates, destined to be together.But as it happened, one day destiny greedily changed its mind.The end had come all too soon.

FLASHBACK:-

After complaining of a migraine for few days, virat decided to see his doctor.They thought the migraine was due to stress or tiredness and agreed that at the very worst he might need glasses.He needn't worried, since it turned out it wasn't his eyes that were the problem.It was the tumour growing inside his brain.

By no means wsa he the healthist man on earth, but he was healty enough to live a normal life.When he became very sick he would bravely joke about how he shouldn't have lived life so saftly.Even as he laughed about it manvi could see the regret in his eyes.Regret for the things he'd never made time to do, places he'd never seen and sorrow for the loss of future exprience.

During virat's last days manvi never left his side.She wanted to sepend every hour, every minute, every second with him.

Growing older become something he wanted desperatly to accomplish rather than merely a dreaded inevitability.Ageing was something they wanted so much to avoid.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Manvi drifted from room to room while she sobbed fat, salty tears.Her eyes were red and sore, and there seemed to be no end to this.None of the rooms in the house provided her with any solace,JUST UNWELCOMING SILENCES.

Virat would not be happy with, she thought.She took a deep breath, dried her eyes and tried to shake some sense into herself.No virat would not be pleased at all...

THE END...

i know guys this is really bad actually i m really sad today and was reading my all time fav novel so this idea came to my mind so i updated...sorry for the mistakes...plz hit like buttom and do comment...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

tune virat ko mar diya ?????/ KAISE😭
coming to the update
nishu it was fab... u knw dat
superbly written ...
emotions perfectly described... choice of words were just superb
UNWELCOMING SILENCES... perfect word
😭😭😭😭😭
love ya
ananya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very emotional...
grt way it was emoted...
luved it!!!
nd why r u sad..?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ye kya kar dia...???
virat ko maar diya... hawww...
no...!!! i m crying right now u know... cant see anything happening to my viru...
anyways well written... ** claps **
UNWELCOMING SILENCES... ufff just two words but with number of emotions...
u made me senti so not a long comment...
naina
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Emotional..!!! Lovely Thanks for the PM..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nahaananya

res
unres

tune virat ko mar diya ?????/ KAISE😭
coming to the update
nishu it was fab... u knw dat
superbly written ...
emotions perfectly described... choice of words were just superb
UNWELCOMING SILENCES... perfect word
😭
love ya
ananya


thank you so much partner

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: millee18

very emotional...
grt way it was emoted...
luved it!!!
nd why r u sad..?????


thanks you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina927

ye kya kar dia...???

virat ko maar diya... hawww...
no...!!! i m crying right now u know... cant see anything happening to my viru...
anyways well written... ** claps **
UNWELCOMING SILENCES... ufff just two words but with number of emotions...
u made me senti so not a long comment...
naina



thank you for commenting...
and sorry for making u senti...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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emotional os
nice
thanks for pm me
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A very heart-touching OS. Virat is dead 😭, you made me cry with this story, it was so well written, i couldn't find a single mistake 👍🏼. You write really well, please PM me if you write any more stories. 😊

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