#3:VIRMAN FF*kyu DARD hai itna*PART 22*PG.135 - Page 65

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnxxx a lot for pm!
It was superb lovely
read d note too
was already cleared abt it
waiting for virats past and manvi's parents past
hope suspense s disclosed
mystery solved
waitinggg 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Loved it!!
U portrayed virat & manvi's feelings perfectly!!
Waiting 4 their past 2 b revealed!!
Plz update soon!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!!
Sorry 4 not commenting on d last update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH!!!! wrng time 2 stop.
But such a lng n fab updte. thnks a lottt...
Waitin 4 nxt...Expctin something interstinnn btw demmm😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update shilpa👏👏 but really you stopped at the wrong time 😡
this whole thing is getting damn interesting with virat kinda becoming the good one and manvi affecting him alott he caring for her thinking about her also getting seduced by her 😉😉
loving this confused virat ...😃😃
both really wanna escape the old bad memories and virat being guilty tooo proves he is a human 😆😆
and this song its my fave love it 😃
update next part soon and thanx for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
u know wat u always fulfil my needs for this update,, answer all my unasked questions... u are a rocking writer!!!
wel, virat's sudden change in mood, i mean at the backstage, vch manvi sensed as anger for not performing wel,, was ofcoz confusing me.. he was falling for her beauty, acted so wel in the ramp so y ar hyper now.. here u answered it.. he cudnt control his desire on her, so he wore his monster mask again.. even after realising, coming out of the trance from manvi's outburst, he cudnt shout at her in anger as her tears & innocence affected him... manvi has made his emotions & heart to overpower his brain these days.. well said shilpa!!! u very beautifully revealed the reasons for his changing beahaviour..

and virat is really a hot action hero.. he realised dat to drive away all these feelings for manvi, he has to stay away from her & dats not possible until his dadi is here.. so he decided to reside at farm house & he didnt forget his dadi's sudden visit.. like an action hero, he entered into some detective job & now poor sanjay wat'll happen if virat shouts at sanjay?? i hope watever dat is going to happen vl happen well & sanjay & lavi shudnt be troubled.. after all dey are true souls who vsh to see happiness back in virat's life..

and shilpa,,, the dialogues in this update are really driving me crazy!!! mahnnn dey are so rocking!!! of coz everyone's favourite must be,, "U don't need to feel uncomfortable. There's no one to see u….and if u are thinking about me, than leave it. I have seen more than that…!"
but i have to say dat he's the one who alwys creates awkwardness but shouts at her in return,,, epic monstrous behaviour!!! he always bursts at her for his mistakes,, but thats so heroic & unique to this virat,, loved it!!! and again,, he's so wrong in telling so isnt he?? now wats he trying to do to her after telling her not to worry about him seeing her so... and u know, u are such a teaser,, every ody wud be firing at u for stopping at such a place nah.. but as a writer u nailed in doing so!!!

manvi knows dat he's falling for her & she's seeking for his comfort eventhough its him the reason for all her miseries, even den she's not ready to accept her feelings for him..
she feels not to take dat emotional moment at the terrace as love or anything else... den if something like 'watever we are feeling dat u are planning' happens in next chap,, wat'll be her reaction?? wat'll be his reaction?? vl dey love each other?? vl she hate him?? vl he get back to his monster role?? vl he claim dat he has all rights on her?? vl dey separate?? vl dey forget it & move vt the same old 'u are nothing to me' feeling?? and even more & more questions are cropping in,, the story can have so many paths.. hidden secrets are yet there, now dat virat has found out dat sanjay is the one behind daadi's arrival, daadi is still dere,,, its so interesting,,, waiting to know more, discover more and get all answers in upcoming updates..

finally wishing virat's teasing words,, ''so do u want me to give u good ones..?'' to become true..

get going!!! u really are a dedicated author,, victory shall follow u!! hats off!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Can't wait for next update.cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..! Its a cliffhanger...Very bad...eager ly waiting for next...Lovely update...Good Virat is all guilty he should for ever for the deeds he has done...N Maanvi is seriously head strong even after that blow she gets every tme from him...Waitin for next n Thanks for the PM..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm...d way u write is amazing shilpa ...its fab ...u described his desires so amazingly ...y can't u open d past truth soon. ...I wana know it badly...next update horrifies me...wat is he gonna do...hope nothing bad cause I don't want d fight to happen again...plz don't make dem fight again...n plz reveal d past truth na...he shud understand its not manvis fault in deir family enimities ...hope so soon he forgives her n a new aura of love begins..well I know it vl obviously begin cause ur fab in writing...I srsly don't write such long comments but ur updates are so thrilling that I can't stop myself frm writing...neways continue d superb writing n plz update soon...vl wait eagerly :):):):):)<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow wow awesome update dear 😊
Loved it
So excited for the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOoo!! Why did you end it there >.< buri baat buri baat humko tadpa rahi ho Aap Shilpa ji :/ 😛 loved the update... The way you wrote abt both virat and Manvi's thoughts how dey feel each moment jst amazing... It satisfies me as a reader and makes me understand der characters so well... Both of them are fighting a battle.. I wud say its more tough for virat as he has good childhood memories wid her bt he is trying to be harsh on her... Jeez the end was superb how the man in him cud not keep his resolve... Hope the next update is... Ahem ahem you know 😉 Manvi ki tarah main bhi wait kar rahi hoon to know abt the past... Dadi is around or not doesnt matter for virat's feelings lol... Poor guy will curse himself for planning to cum to farm house again... Thanks for writing 🤗

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