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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is just a scene that I always wish will happen in Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hai... its just my imagination going wild.I'm also really bad at English and punctuation and grammar.And I'm also not Indian I'm Bengali and just learning.. so if bits don't makes sense,sorry.

The scene begins in Maanvi and Virats bedroom, maanvi is sitting on her bed with a long-lost thought and disturbed expression.

Virat walks into the bedroom and notices maanvis frown and goes and sits next to her on the bed.

Virat: Kya Hua partner? Tumare chehre par bara kyun baja hua hai?

Maanvi: Mujhe tumara bakwaas sunne ki mood mein nahi hoon virat,

Virat: kyun kya hua maanvi? Mujhe nahi bataooge (he holds maanvi around his arms)

Maanvi:teek hai bathathi hoon virat lekin meri poori baat sunna.

Virat: kya hua maanvi jaldi batao (Virat gets worried)

Maanvi:Mein pregnant hoon,lekin...

Virat jumps off the bed in excitement

Virat: KYA!!! Mein papa banne vala hoon??? Yeh tho bahot achi baat hai,maanvi tum maa banogi (maanvi's tear rolls down her eyes)kya hua maanvi tum kush nahi ho kya?

Maanvi takes a deep breath in and closes her eyes tightly.

Maanvi:Mujhe yeh bachcha gidhana hoga virat.

Virat pulls maanvi off the bed and holds her tight with anger on his face.

Virat:yeh tum kya keh rahi ho maanvi? Lekin kyun? Kisse poochkar tumne itni baadhi fesla karne ki sochli?

Maanvi: samaj ne ki koshish karo virat,hum bachche keliye financially aur emotionally ready nahi hai.Mein kud ek bachcha hoon,ek maa kya hothi hai mujhe samaj nahi hai.

Virat: lekin maanvi koi bhi bachche keliye ready nahi hothe,dheere dheere sab ko aajathi hai,main bhi ready nahi hoon lekin iss baat keliye hum ek nanhe se jaan ko nahi maar sakte.

Virat looks at maanvi and realises that maanvi's tensed expression shows another story.

Virat:Maanvi mujhe kyun lagta hai ke tum mujhse kuch chuparahe ho,aur yeh fesla is baat ke liye nahi hai.

Maanvi:sunno virat yeh fesla maine soch samaj kar liya hai,agar tum mera saath dhoge tho teek hai,nahi tho...

Virat: nahi tho kya maanvi? Tum humare bachche ko mardoge? Maanvi bathao kyun,kyun tume kya hogeya tume bacho se itna lagav hai, tumara punter log?

Maanvi:Hai virat mujhe bachcho se pyaar hai lekin jeevika di...

Virat:jeevika babhi ...?

Maanvi:Haan virat! Di,di ne humesha unke badheme nahi sochke humesha mere badhreme hi sochihai.humesha ek maa ki farz poodhi ki hai aur jeevika di kabhi maa nahi bann sakthi virat,aur mein yeh bardaash nahi kar sakti... mein kaise bhool jao ke jeevika di ne meri jaan bachane keliye apne bachche ko kurbaan kardi,aur log kya kahenge,badhi behn ko ghod kaali hai aur chothi ki ghod badha,di aur jeeju ki rishte ki upar ungli utegi.

Virat:Mujhe patha hai maanvi tum apni di ko kitna chathi ho,jeevika babhi ne tumare liye jo bhi kiya hum kabhi bhi jukhana nahi payengi lekin iss ka matlab nahi hai ki hum apne bachche ko maar de,jeevika babhi yeh kabhi bhi nahi chahenge..

Maanvi:tum di ko kuch nahi bathaoge

Virat :Lekin maanvi... kya tum kabhi bhi maa nahi banna chahoge.

Maanvi: haan banna chahthi hoon,lekin di ke baad,hum koshish karenge ke jeevika di aur viren jeeju ke chothu sa munni/munna hojaye.

Virat :lekin maanvi tume patha hai ki yeh mumkin nahi hai.

Maanvi: hum jeeju aur di ko ivf treatment keliye mannalenge.

Virat:ivf kyun? Bachcha godh lena kyun nahi?

Maanvi:Kyun ki voh di ka koon nahi hoga...

Virat:Tum apne di ke bare mein aisi sochthi ho maanvi? Tumme patha hai ki babhi sab log se kitna pyaar karti hai,aur agar bachcha unki aur bhai ki nahi ho tho bhi voh itna hi pyaar karegi.

Maanvi:Mujhe patha hai virat lekin dadaji aaur swamini bua kya sochenge,aur kya bachcha ko sab se utna hi pyaar milega,phir bhi virat kya main apne bachche ko gidha sakthi hoon?

Virat does not say anything however hugs maanvi in a consoling way.

Maanvi:mujhe bhji sochne ki waqt chahiye,itne baadhi decision mein jalbaazi mein nahi karongi virat.

Maanvi walks toward the door to go and meet jeevika,however when she looked at the door,jeevika was already standing there,Maanvi looked at jeevika in shock and jeevika had a furious expression.

Maanvi:Di aap yaha??

Before receiving a reply..jeevika picked up her hand and gave maanvi a tight slap!**jeevika ran to her room.

Maanvi: JEEVIKA DII!! (maanvi shouted)..meri baat tho sunno.. (she ran towards jeevikas room)...

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kasturikas thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry i dont understand anything.. i dont undersatand hindi. if it was written in eng it wouldb have been easier for all
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kasturikas

sorry i dont understand anything.. i dont undersatand hindi. if it was written in eng it wouldb have been easier for all


agree i would've commented if i understood it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeah me too have imagined this scene😳
it goes perfect with the kind of love these two sisters have for eachother
manvi's abortion was justified and jeevs slap too on learning abt manvi's intention of aborting her baby👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my gosh i really want this scene please continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsmeee...i always wished tis...it was fab
continue soon...plzzz

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