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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
sooo sweet read part 1 and 2 together...they r amazing👍🏼
so manvi know's abt her daughter mannat that she's with virat...interesting😃
plzzz sont sooon and a little longer one tooo😉
and thanx for the pm🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
very nice concept both living seperate with one kid each- wow plz do continue soon so wanna read this 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Hey, welcome to IF ... the concept of your story is amazing yaar, I love it. Update soon, can't wait till they come face to face

❤️🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
hey nice concept...dear...👏..do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3- "Mannu,get ready fast...otherwise u will get late to school! Tere 1st day ka bharta ban jayega..."virat said. "Virat,have u gone mad? Tum hamesha bina breakfast kiye jate ho iska matlab,yeh nahi hai ki hamari princess bhi bina breakfast ke jayegi... Mannu,come have ur favourite aloo paranthas!" jeevika said. "Ya, i forgot...sorry" virat said "Chalo, aajao mannu sath mein breakfast karte hai" Hearing virat's these words all were shocked, happy and overwhelmed.After breakfast all started guiding mannat. "Chill guys,school hi toh ja rahi hoon...am not going on world war 3! Relax"Mannat said. "Issi baat ka toh darr hai ki...tu waha world war na start kar de..." viren commented and all started laughing. "Haye ni viren! Kya bak rahe ho?Kuch na kaho hamari barbie doll ko! Kadambari chachi said. "Badi ma,dekho na, bade papa mujh par joke crack kar rahe hai" mannat complained to jeevika."Virenji, aap bhi na, apologise to mannu rite now" jeevika told her husband controling her laughter."Ya, hamari gudiya, mujhe maaf kardo"viren apologised.Mannat hugged him and said,"Badese vadhera mansion mein aisi choti choti batein hoti rehti hain..." and all again started laughing.Virat was just staring at his little princess and smiling. "Now lets go" virat said and both left. "Aaj kitne saalon baad, hamare virat ne hamare sath breakfast kia...aaj mein bohot kush hoon..."vanshika said. "Oh, mom! Please dont show ur fake concern...! Noone is interested"Viren said and left angrily. **HOW IS IT? PLEASE LET ME KNOW? TRIED TO GIVE LONG UPDATE...LOVE, AMU**
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
nice update
why is viren angry on vanshika
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...its really really amazing Amu
mannat is sooo cute and all the family members too
these two dialogues cracked me...chill guyzz mai school ja rae ho world war 3 pe nae😆
and ...bedese vadhera house mai aise chote chote bate hote rehte hai😛
and why is viren rude towards vanshika maa...is she has something to do with virman's separation????
cont sooon and thanx for the pm🤗
im happy that im the first in ur buddy list😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Superb by y viren is angry On Vanshika???? Waiting 4 d next update Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
mannant is so cute and her dialogue are lit bit funny and vm is happy that virat sit for breakfast with them but viren is angry on vm what happen why they separated update soon with long update
834074 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#20
WOw!!! U have got a new reader!!! Me!!! :P
Well I loved all the 3 chapters...
But Y Viren Abgry on vanshika???
Plzz continue soon... Nd plzzz be kind enuff to send me PM's... :)

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