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keerthana

@keerthu27

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

mummy superb start.but don't u think u have many stories to update wen r u gng to update???????????continue soon

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hemameenu

@hemameenu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

the concept is tooo cool dear but why u did not pm me about the new os

preeto ur an amazing writer dear

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

New OS Preity ji 😛😛😛... Wohooo .. Bhalo surprise 😉 .. Title is good!! Why do you want to change It?? 😕 Superb start.. Manvi's mom is more concerned about bread than her 😆.. Saraswati puja!! 😃 Wow!! It reminds me of my school days .. Lots of memories 😃.. Back to update, so Manvi was an over-weight girl during her college days and she was in love with Virat!! But Virat was unaware of it and he also proposed Maya .. 'Punjab track'!! 😆 Manvi's nick 😆.. At present she is a yoga teacher!! Not bad 😉.. And they met again!! But he didn't recognize her!!😒 Loved this lines " You reduced" he smiled "You gained" I retorted, to which he laughed ruffling his back hair. " 😛😛 But the good news is that Maya broke up with him .. Really eager to read the next part now.. Manvi's thoughts are very well written 👏👏👏.. Fantastic Update ⭐️⭐️.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Take care of your new crush 🤣 🤗 ❤️

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Preity lovely os...
U know when I finished reading the update, I thought ye kaise os likhi hai iss bar preity ne? Adha adhura...
I usually dont read whatever written at the end...but this time just to know you are continuing it further or that was the end...because I thought if that was the end, I will request you to write atleast one more update and finish it on a happy note...but I am happy you are going to continue it...please give next update soon dear...

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

And plzz pm me dear whenever you write os or update ur ffs or ss...itz a request...
I like your writing...

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: smileysmi
And plzz pm me dear whenever you write os or update ur ffs or ss...itz a request...
I like your writing...

Of course dear
Actually I PM little late so people thinks I don't PM, but I do PM 😉😆😳

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

pretooo am first to commenttt chal lets do jumping japack

and this update finally lots of virman ...and virat's POV was awesome ...dil khush kardiya yeh jaanke that maya was just a bet that his frends gave nothing elseand usne usko kutte se compare kiya 🤣...😆😆

and virat kinda scared of girls how cute 😃

and he was actually soo impressed with manvi she made him laugh, smile, scared and happy ...also regret that he didnt be frends with her till now 😊

soo virat is gonna join her yoga sessions thats gonna be damn fun am sooo happy 😃😃

preetoo its really getting soo damn interesting 👏👏

and mee too love the interiors😊

no doubt very well written also 😃

next part jaldi update karna 😃

Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Omg u r dragging OS hun.. 😉 Loved it.. so Virat dnt love Maya it was just a challenge nd Kuch kuch hota hai for Manvi 🤣 Fab.. continue soon..!!!!

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Wow..Virat's POV...DIl khush hogaya...Kya example hai waise...if u stay with a dog for some time to start liking it.,yaha pe 3 saal...so its inst deep...Maanvi is there naa...waise he was shocked seeing the aasan...jab us bahane se milna aya hai...so Maanvi wouldn't let him go...😆Waiting for next Preity..~!!!

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