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PART-103
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VIrat lossing his sense as her boddy get numb in her arms..he can feel her breath on his neck..both lost in their world with closing their eyes..they totally forget abt the plase..its their good luck that no one there to see them otherwise...aheem..
In next minute virat move his fingers from her back towards her neck nd move her hairs from her sholder to other sholder from back side..she shivered with his touch..moved her hands from his back to his sholder..her heart starts beating fast..
He bent his head down nd place gentle bt full of passion nd love..with his lips touch her skin she felt sudden currant in her body..she gasperd with his action..her eye open slightly with this..
As she open her eyes she get reality..she still in his arms..his hands on her either sides of waist holding her close to him nd his head still bend on her sholder..his lips slowly slowly nuzzing her skin with full of passion..
She felt too numb nd weak with his sweet nd loveble torture..nd also she know his desprate nd carvness for her..which can she felt with his each nd every single action..its too tough for him to controle on his desire..
She know he needed her bt this place was not right for that..they stood in mid way of wasroom where anyboby can come at any moment nd also its publice place..
M-whisper in low voice with try to puss him back-virat..
But he is too lost..nd place another kiss on her sholder..
M-close her eyes nd try to not loose her sense with her torture-virat please..again whishper in his ear bt this time little loudly..
Which make his attention on her..bt still he didnt want to stop..he pull his head back little nd move his head toards her face..he move his one hand up nd again move her hair behind her ear nd look at her with full of passion nd love..nd also lots of respect..
She looking all pink all over her face due to his action..his effect on her clearly visible..he smile at he nd pull her again close to him with one hand by her waist..with this her face come closer to him more..only 1 or 2 inches away from his face..both looking in echothers eyes..
M-vi..
She abt to stop him bt before she go ahead his action makes her stop..
M-as she said vi..his finger move from her earline to her jawline..making shiver in her spin..his fingers crassing her cheeks gently nd again making her lost in his love..she close her eyes as his finger tip touch her lips..he smile as she close her eyes..
She know now he making her loose her sense totally..his actions even not gave her chance to stop him..bt she has to do..
As she felt the space between them getting decrease her try to move back from there bt bt bt..how can she eascap from his arms easily..he didnt wann miss this chance..as he felt her moving back he pull her close nd wrap his hands around her waist tight..nd next moment..he press his lips on her..nd before she finish this kiss yet he hold her head from back..his fingers in her hair..
She has no option as his both hands holding her nd not alloqling to move inch from her place..as his lips starts moving she starts loosing her self..her hands move towards his coller to his neck..this is not hot nd passionate kiss ever bt full of love nd determination..its gentle nd soft..both lost with this..
She can feel his desparate nd desire in it..bt still he make their kiss soft nd gentle..he didnt saw hurry in his any action..he still saw care for her..with his each action..
After few minutes..maanvi puss his back with little forse bcz she need air..nd he know she gve herself at that moment when he want to kiss her..he loose his hold on her nd make her go back..bt still he is not satisfide yet..
He open his eyes nd looked at her who still closing her eyes nd try to catch her normal breath..her hands again come on his sholder..
He leaned close to her nd still looking at her with resting his forehead with her..
Like last night scene in serial...
She feel his eyes on her..she smile with her tread mark blush..
She slowly open her eyes as she hear him calling her name with full of affection nd love..
V-maanvi..
She look in his eyes with still their foreheads r joint..
V-thank u..he said with full of love..
M-smile looking at him bcz she know the reason-ab chale..
V-shook his headin no..
M-smile..
They just looking at eachother..just then they heard some foot steps coming close to them..with that they pulled back nd step back with jerk..again like in serial..
Both looked at other direction with adjusting themselves..nd found one Air-hostest come their with tray..
AH-sir...mem..need help?
V nd M-look at eachothr nd then her..no..they said togather..
V-actually..i..i just come for use wasroom..
M-nd i m done..excuse me..
She make excuse nd hurriedly walked out from there..
V-aa..excuse me..
Nd with this he hurriedly went inside wasroom nd close door behind him..
Nd AH also walked away from there..as she left virat open door nd come out from wassroom..
Both took deep breath..

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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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hope u like previous part...try to put little romance...
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PART-104
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VIRat come at his seat nd looked towards maanvi's seat nd found her looking back for him..he know she was worried for what happen there..he gave her assuring smile with blink nd smile mischiefly..
She look down with blush nd then again look at him..he smile at her nd sia on his chair..she sat on her chair properly nd starts thinking what happen before few minutes..just then she got something fall in her lap..as she look for it..she found same tissue chit which she gave to virat..she open it with confussion..
Her jaw droped as she read 2nd line..
M-sorry abhi ke liye..lekin age ka romance ghar pahochte hi complete kar dunge..
She turn in red all over her face..she gulped..look down..again she get flash backs of their last nd fresh romance..she felt something new growing inside her..some relation growing in between them..they r nor teenager at all..still she feeling same feeling..they r married from one year..almost know eachother..they went through many phases of lifes..good bad every..nd most important..they r now going to be parents soon..as this reallity touch her..she place her and on her stomach..
This journey going to be as her true journey..as she always want..from teenager..she want to be fall in love with that person who makes her love him..she always wants a simple nd typical marriage life..where she try to gave her 100% to her new family nd that person who she going to spend her rest of life..bt life didnt fulfil her wish..her dream that easily..bt noe she can clearly saw her all wishes nd dreams with her married life going to be fulfill..she has one family who care abt her a lot..nd also love her..kapoor's family who send her one another family..the vadhera's who also gave her same care nd love like her real family..she felt too lucky as she thought abt this two most loving family..
Nd now her dream comes true fully as now she got her first nd true love..her virat..her husband..who love her alot..nd she has no doubt on it..she et everything now..nd most important with this she get most beautiful gift of life..like god gave her consetion bcz of he gave her some hurtful moment in last one year nd also make her wish fulfill little late..or we can say with little dramatically..or totally filmy sylr..that extra gift of happiness is her baby..sorry their baby..which growing inside her..
She smile from heart as she remeber all this..
Nd with this she realize why her mood swings from morning..she took laptop nd starts searching for all this nd download some important precuations nd books from net nd some specialists sites...
Nd behind this..
Virat also thinking all this..he never want this kind of married life even he never want to get married..bt now in one year maanvi change his life totally..after this one year experiance..he didnt want to leave without his wife..his love..his maanvi for second..he also remember abt new upcoming happiness in their life..nd he want to be carefull nd do everything perfect..as this was their first ecxperiance with this new pjase of life he scared little bt as more confidant for his duety towards this new responsblity..he dint want to forget abt this..nd want to gave as same priority to thir baby nd maanvi..wann be god father nd husband both..
Nd with this..in whole left journey they waiting for their upcomeing happiness nd their world..with full of happiness...they nd their close ones..
After hour they reached at chandighadh airport..each nd every family members r happy nd ecxited with virmaan..dabbu again starts teasing them nd chachu-chachi also joint him..dadu also not less than them..maanvi nd virat felt to embareccing in whole journey as dabbu narratate them all holi scene nd also how maanvi get angry on him nd also how he did air-port drama..
After another half hour they reached at vadhera house..virat nd maanvi abt to entered in house when sawamini stop them nd orderd something to tarun..in few minutes tarun nd sunder come their with some stuff..maanvi smile wiedly as she saw all ghrah-pravesh stuff in their hands..
She remember how they did this all one year before..bt that was not as truth as this one..
Sb did arti of virmaan nd then KC told her to make rice-kalash fall ahead nd walk throw red-water filded tray..
Maanvi smile nd do the same..
In whole time virat holding her hand..
Afther that they went to small temple which was in corner on lft side..after praying they took blessings from all elders..
All gave them good wishes..all r happy to see their family get togather again..with more love nd un brokeble bond..
After all this they talk for sometime in hall nd then go for dinner..
At dinner maanvi try to work bt sb nd kc stop her nd make her sit with virat..nd they again spend anothet sweet nd cute happy family moment..
During all this viramman didnt miss single moment for cute romance..eyes lock..hand engered..winks..blush..smirk..smile..all..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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last part..
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PART-105
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AFter dinner shlok nd sia aks for again that garden time..like they use to before when maanvi was also there..after dinner..sweet time..bt as elders know virmaan need time for eachother nd privecy..they make excuse..nd some how its true..
Dadu told them to not for tonight..they all r tierd after todays long day out..nd other members also..they did many activeties todays..as they explain to kids virat smile happily as he also want to spend time with her..bt he get disppoint as maanvi support to kids..bt dadu can clearly saw his sad face so he didnt gave permission nd make them understoon them from tomorowwor they go as before bt not today..as he makes kids explain they understand all this nd agree..
After all this dadu ask everyone to go their repective rooms nd take rest..every one agreed nd left palce after wishing eachother good night..
As everyone left from there..only virmaan r there..she lastly wish to dabbu nd turn towards virat with smile..bt she turn in confuse smile as she saw virat looking at her with cute angry ecxpression..he looking too cute..as he stood with placing his hands on his hips..
M-kya hua?..ase kyu dekh rahi ho?..she ask normally..
V-still cute angrt like kid looking at her..he open his mouth to say something bt stop nd left from that place stroming his fits on floor angrily..he left maanvi behind him all confuse..
M-ise kya hua?..nd she shook her head nd follow him..
She come near at her room nd stop as she realize that after long time she entering in this room..she smile nd slowly open the door..as she enter in room get shock nd surprise..she smile surpriesly nd walked towards bed..
She found whole room decorated with candles nd flowers..she as rose-petals on bed nd only light of candles sprading all over in room..she felt something diffrent inside her..she realize why virat walk out from hall angrily..she look around in room for him bt he was not there..she walk ahead towards balcony bcz she know he may be there..
She move curtains aside nd entered in their balcony nd found him stood in front of her with his back faceing her..she smile nd walk near to him..he felt some wait learning on his back nd two tiny hands try to wrapping around his waist..he know who is she..bt he didnt move a bit..
M-as he didnt responce back-i m sorry..she said with full of love which is enough to melt him..woh bahot dio baad ase family ke saath..
She abt to explain her feeling bt he make her stop by turning back towards her nd wrap his arms around her..
V-hey..i know..kuch explain karne ki jarurat nahi hai..nd pull her close in hug..
Both stood there with hugging eachother..
V-maanvi..
M-humm..
V-r u happy?..i mean..ye sab..
M-raise her head towards him nd look at him-virat..ase ky puch rahe ho?
V-mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai jo tumne apni vinumaa se ek saal pahele kaha tha ki tumhe ek simple married life chahiye thi..tumhare woh dreams..kya tumhe lagta hai main woh
He cannot continue as she place her fingr on his lips..she remove herfinget place her hands around his neck..
M-starts singing..
Sajan ghar ana tha
sajan ghar aye hai..2
piya mann bhana tha
piya mann bhaye hai..
Har khushi hai ab tumhari mujhe dedo gum..
Jaaneman..jaaneman..2
she sang wih looking in his eyes with full of confidence nd love..
V-as he hear this he smile nd joint her..
Sajan ghar ana tha
sajan ghar aye tum
piya mann bhana tha
piya mann bhaye tum
har khushi hai ab tumhri mujhe dedo gum..
Jaaneman..jaaneman..2
continue with pulling her cose to him..
Jindgi me aye tum chahto k raste
kash ye raste sanam kat jaye haste haste
sone dildara tere pyar ko variya
meriya duaava sari lag jaye sariya..
M-chand ho tum chandni se bhiga jaye mann..
Jananeman..
V-took her in his arms nd walk inside bedroom-
Agosh me teri zulf sawarunga main
chaht k rango se aa mang saja du teri..
M-full of love looking in his eyes..
Mahiya ve aaj menu avey kyu ye lagda
Ashiq jo sachcha hove rup honda rab da..
V-come near to the bed ns with place her in middle of bed gently..nd also setting next to her..
Hum yaha hai tum yaha ho
hone do milan..
Nd pull her in hug..
M-move her hands around his neck..
Jaaneman...jaaneman..
Humm...humm...
Jaaneman..
Jaaneman...
Nd with this both hug eachother like no tomorrow..he buried his face in her neck nd wrap his arms around her nd pull her closer to him like didnt want to any single space between them..nd as he cruss her in his arms she tighted her hold around her neck nd gave his as equel reponce as he need..
Nd again they slip in their romentice world..which stoped in flight..;)..
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okay i think its enough..
I gve updates for last weekend also which i missed..
Now tell me what i do..?c?
I finish this story here or wann more..???
Bcz i know now days i m making u wait so long...
Sorry for that...
For now enjoy this parts...
Nd abt romence u all know i m weak in this part so co-operate with this...
Thank u for waiting...
I continue if i feel to do this...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aur hai kya ?? 😛
cant get enough of it ...triple update wowww thanx alott ya 😃
and wph bhi itne saare romance ke saath haye romancing in the flight washroom besharam but as virat sayz jine ki sharam uske phoote karam ...isi chakkar mein ek chota sa romantic moment mil gaya and chit bke with a promise to continue it later 😉
virat's concern how he thought he hurt her and then her confession of feelings abt how she felt for the amazing gift he had given her 😃
family moments alwayz special 😛
next update sooon cant wait longer ...and also plz update pain and smile 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

aur hai kya ?? 😛
cant get enough of it ...triple update wowww thanx alott ya 😃
and wph bhi itne saare romance ke saath haye romancing in the flight washroom besharam but as virat sayz jine ki sharam uske phoote karam ...isi chakkar mein ek chota sa romantic moment mil gaya and chit bke with a promise to continue it later 😉
virat's concern how he thought he hurt her and then her confession of feelings abt how she felt for the amazing gift he had given her 😃
family moments alwayz special 😛
next update sooon cant wait longer ...and also plz update pain and smile 😊


thank u...
Yeah there is one more part...
Thank for likeing...
I try to update there also...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohhh my my...romance in washroom...wowww...lolzzz...its a magic of yest scene...lagta he sab abhi bhi usi hangover me he...thnx a lot fr the 4 updt...package updts

urrr khushi dont utter a word abt DC...show waise hi band ho raha re...plzzz we r ready to wait...but dont dc any of the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 105
that was cute and romantic virmanish moment ...
finally finished the undid job :-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was awesome di...👏

4 parts... I can't ask more than this...😳

I'm really happy...😛

Virat and Manvi parts were tooo cute...😛

I loved it and pls try to continue this ff if u can...😊

Don't stop this ff... Its so close to my heart...😛

And please do the next update in Pain and Smile if you can...😉

Love you di...😛

Take care...😊
Edited by ArthyV - 12 years ago
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Awesome updates di 👏

all the parts are nice and i like most the part 102,the nonstop talking virat .⭐️

humm all other parts are so romantic 😳

but i dont know wat to say about it. if u r week in writing those,me too in reading & commenting

as u know mein tho bachcha hoon na...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mannia

<font color="#003333">Awesome updates di</font>👏</strong>

<strong><font color="#003333">all the parts are nice and i like most the part 102,the nonstop talking virat .⭐️</font>

<font color="#003333">humm all other parts are so romantic</font>😳

<font color="#003333">but i dont know wat to say about it. </font><font color="#003333">if u r week in writing those,me too in reading & commenting</font>

<font color="#003333">as u know mein tho bachcha hoon na...😆</font>


thanks for liking...
Nd week?..means...
Nd yeah u r bada bachcha...

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