Virmaan : U hve 2 come bck-Idnm : 3rd : PART-105 + IMP NOTE-148 - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alyna1994

thanks niaksharma 4r updating it is great story and my interest is increasing day by day after reading ur parts well 1ce again gr8t update 😊


thank u dear... This means a lot for me... Thanks...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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REY ND VICKEY DANCED ON HOLI SONG...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys...
Debo again here...
Di want to gve rpl nd precap by own so she did..
Now i m going to update in some time...
I only typing her words nd updating in IF...
Bcz she is not able to do thik long one..she already wrote some parts of her story..
So... In half hour i completed my lunch nd then i updated next part...

nd
updates for all her readers... Specially that some pm girls... Myvirman... Urabiansari... Nd some others which names i forget...
Now gve me some time i will be wait..
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
First sorry for commented after so long time...
Bt u knew the reason...
All pending updates r super duped awesom...
To lovely nd to emotionals...
Loved it...
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hint looks super interesting...
Plz updated debo... Soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hint looks interesting... Plz updated soon debo...
Cannot wait...
Plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-81
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NExt morning everyone get ready for pooja first..virat also get ready just bcz of vinumaa nd RK uncle..they convey him..he agree for this na get ready for pooja in while clothes..u can imagine same clothes as they use to wear in holi epis...
Pooja held in the society garden area..whole society member use to celebrate every festival together..virat get ready nd went to pooja place..he come behind to kapoor's family..means viren's family nd stood at last near dabbu..dabbu saw him nd smile..virat hve him fake smile back nd again looked at god..all persons stood there with joint hand..all garden area decorated for holi party..colour party..all preparations r done superbly by society boys..
Maanvi stood in front line with jeevika nd viren near to her..viren saw her worried..he knew why she upsetting..he turned back for looking him..he found him stand at last with dabbu..he smile nd turned back..he bent little nd whisper in maanvi's ear..
Vn-ab arti pe dhyan de..jiske liye upset ho rahi hai woh aa gaya hai..
Hearing this maanvi imigeatly turned towards him..he smiled nd indicate her to look behind..she smile happily nd turned..her smile get wide as she saw him..his gve also fall on her..he saw her smiling at him..he like her smile like nothing more than this priceless smile..bt he remember all things again..she just feeling guilty to say all that last night..nothing else..that's what he thinking..he thought that she still hurt by him nd she can never love her nd able to happy with him..she just pretending to be happy..
He imigeatly looked away ruddly which hurts her a lot..now she feels how hurts when ur love move their face..
Vn-don't worry..abhi bahot chance mileage..
He said nd smile..maanvi smile back nd nodded..she turned back nd starts praying to god..
In whole arti virat just looking at her..he knew how he controlling himself bt he want to do this..
After arti all wish everyone happy holi..when viren come to wish maanvi she refuse..she want to coloured by virat first bcz this was her first holi with him..viren understand nd nodded with smile..here dabbu also try to put colour on virat bt he refuse rudly..
After all this vinumaa nd RK uncle went towards house after playing holi with other society members..only young ones present in garden..virat abt to go from there bt stopped as rey nd vickey come their with there group..
R-hey guys..thank god tum log gaye nahi..
Vy-yeah..plz..kya hum sab bhoola k ek nai suruat kar sakte hai?..look is baar koi outsider bhi nahi hai party me..
Virat boiling in anger bt didn't react in front of them..
Maanvi looked at viren who nodded in yes..she smile at him..virat see this..he abt to go from there bt viren stop him..
Vn-hey virat..
Hearing his name he stop nd turned..
Vn-walked near him-tum kaha ja rahe ho?
V-mujhe kuch kam hai..
Vn-apni wife se important?
V-confuse..
Vn-look..maanvi ko holi pasand hai aur agr woh inhe maaf karke sab bhool sakti hai to hum kyu nahi?..kyu?
V-nodded in yes-haa..
Vn-to fix..tum yaha rukoge party me maanvi k saath..
V-kya?
Vn-yes..waise to mujhe tumpe kuch jyada bharosa nahi hai pr use hai..aur waise bhi..jeevika is haal me yaha jyada nahi rahe sakti to bas main use ghar le ja raha hu..isliye maanvi k saath tum yaha rahe sakte ho..
Virat hearing this looked at maanvi..
Vn-kyuki yaha main use akele nahi chhod sakta..
Hearing this he looked at other boys nd girls group of society..
Vn-aur agr phir bhi tum nahi rukna chahte to maanvi akele manage kar legi..
He just complete his sentence nd virat imigeatly speak up..
V-no..main rukunga..
All smiled..
Maanvi come near to them nd say thanks bt virat looked away..
Before leaving jeevika instructed maanvi to not do some over things nd use to drink something in each small breaks..maanvi smile nd nodded..after that virika left..in way jeevika say thanks to viren for helping virmaan..
In garden area..dabbu nd virmaan stood near party area..all boys nd girls stars playing holi with colours nd atmosphere getting colourful by each passing minutes..
Its half hour passed nd maanvi waited for virat bt he just stood little away with crossing his hands against his chest nd looking away..dabbu nd maanvi talked in sign language..dabbu ask her to starts..she gulped nd go near to him bt he ignore nd move away..she feel disappointment..she tries many times to talk with him bt he ignore..
From party area rey nd vickey looking all this..they make plan nd come there with glass of bhang..they ask to maanvi to drink bt she refuse..as virat saw them together he felt jealous which can clearly see by maanvi..rey told maanvi that this is just thandai..she can drink..to makes virat more jealous she take glass nd drink whole bhang in one shote..nd actually she already thirsty..virat didn't like this..he saw after drinking that she make wired face..she blinking her eyes many times..he get worried..he imigeatly come near to her..
M-to R nd Vy-in half drunken state-ek glass aur milega?
V-no..he said loudly..
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V-come next to her nd say no with full of right on her..
V-No..
All imigeatly looked at him..dabbu,rey nd vickey smile..maanvi turned nd looked at him..
M-like kid-kyu?..pouting..
Virat make face to see her nd also bhang on her uper lips..
V-bas nahi pini hai..
M-pr mujhe pini hai..
V-tum nahi piogi..
M-think little..-okay..main nahi piyungi..lekin pahele tum meri baat sunoge..she said innocently..
V-looked away-no..
M-plz..
V-bt he ignore..
R-achchha maanvi tum ise chhodo..chalo hum holi khelne chalte hai..
Vy-yeah..come on..virat tum bhi chalo..
M-smile-yes yes yes..chalte hai..
Looked at him..go near to him..
M-virat chalo naa..baat nahi karni thik hai..pr mere saath holi khello naa plz..she said in drunken voice..
V-mujhe nahi khelni..
M-plz virat chalo na..
Bt he didn't..
Rey nd vy pass some expression nd come near to them..
Vy-hey maanvi tum to chalo..
V-looked at maanvi..
V-make sad cute face-nahi agr virat nahi to main kaise?
R-yaar maanvi tum to puri star plus ki bahu types ho gai ho..marriage k baad u change a lot..
Vy-yeah right..chalo naa..
M-looked at virat..who looked away-make angry nd sad cute kid type face nd nodded in no..
R sign to vy something nd they went towards group..
Dabbu shook his head to see virat's reaction..
M-virat..call him with full of love..
He imigeatly looked at her..
M-naraz ho?..pr main..main bas ye first holi me tumse pahela rang lagvana chahti thi..
Hearing this he feel sudden happiness inside him..yes..he also want the same that they put colour on eachother first..
Before virat could say something they heard loud music starts in front of them..nd all girls nd boys starts dancing nd jumping with colours..they all looked at direction..they saw rey nd vickey starts dancing with back dancers in front of them nd other some girls come around them..virmaan nd Dabbu looked around..dabbu nd maanvi smile to see this..nt virat..music nd colour making dancing atmosphere..as always..rey was the lead so he starts singing..they throw color in air nd starts singing with dance..u can imagine steps by own as holi dance steps wiche related to song..like in movie..
R-looking at them-
'ey-gori-3,rang de ba-choliyaan tohar jo-beera rang me..2'
he sang with dance nd lndicated towards maanvi..
Virat feel jealous nd maanvi get angry..make cute angry face..how he sang this..her virat stood with her naa..;>..she took one more glass of bhang nd drink..
R-continue...
''Laage hai aaj kyun tujhko sharam ri..
Aaj k din masti na juram ji..
Aaj harbaat ki maaf
Aaj puri aajadi
aaj tu phirse kuwari
saas sasur na koi balam hai..''
he sand with dancing with whole group nd indicated towards virat last line..
''ey-gori-3..rang de ba-choliyaan tohar jo-beera rang me..2''
he continue singing nd dancing nd with this he comes towards maanvi nd try to put colour on her bt she imigeatly slip from there nd he missed her..
He just turned back nd maanvi start pussing him back with singing...
Yes she starts singing...
How can she hear abt him..his family nd her married life..
M-pussing him back 3 times..
''Ey-chalia-3...
Nd starts dancing..other girls joint her from behind her..virat get shocked nd surprise with this he try to spot her bt dabbu stop him..rey stood with boys nd enjoying her..
M-continue..
''Ey-chaila..rang de hai choliyaan humar sajan apne hi rang me..2''
she sing two times with dancing nd point towards virat with last line..
Hear this nd her action virat smiled wildly nd feel out of world..
Maanvi gve smile bck nd continue dancing nd singing..
''laage naa aaj koyi mujhko sharam ji..
Maanu bhi na main masti ko juram ji..
Mangu main tujhse maafi
deta dil nahi gawahi
khush hu main jabse bihaayi..''
she sing all those lines indicating towards rey nd after that she come near to virat nd complete last lines..
Looking at virat nd sing lovingly with dancing..
M-
''khush hu main jabse bihaai
basein is dil mein jis din se sajan hai...''
sing with looking at virat..like she saying this to him..he cannot understand what to do..he want to jump..smile all things..
Maanvi sing all this nd abt starts dancing with others..
''ey-chalia..3 rang de ba-choliyaan humar sajan apne hi rang me..
Sajan apne hi rang me..
Sajan apne hi rang me..
She dancing with all..rey nd vickey also there..virat just looking at her..looking at both virmaan.. Dabbu,rey nd vickey feel happy..they starts dancing with others..all enjoying..just then maanvi's gaze fall on rey..she still in effect of bhang..she looks here nd there nd bring colour from side table..she tool whole plate from table nd walked towards rey nd threw whole colour from plate towards him bt..bt..imigeatly virat come in front of her..all stopped..
As all colours get clear from air maanvi's eyes gotten wide in shock..she saw virat gets all over red..plate fall from her hand..
M-tum?..tum kaha se aye?..she ask innocently..
V-smile at her..
Dabbu nd vy nd rey come nd stood next to virat..
M-looked at rey..get angry..-tum..?..abt to attack him bt get stop by virat..
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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hope u like above song..
Sorry i want to put all song with sawing dance steps bt update age bhi to badhana tha..
Hope u like..
Plz this tile gve ur view if u want early updates..
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AS maanvi moved towards rey like bhuki sherni virat come front nd hold her from back..she try to reach at rey bt she cannot..all smiled at this..virat also at her innocence action..she get more angry with this..just then she realize some grip around her waist..she looked down nd found one strong arm holding her back..she make cute angry face nd look back..virat loose hospitalize grip then she move bt still holding her..
M-like kid-virat chhodo mujhe..mujhe use sabak sikhana hai..uski himmat kaise hui mujh p colour dalne ki koshis ki..chhodo mujhe..
V-smile nd clean some colour from his sholder..due to colour his whole kurta get red..only his face left..-mujh pe ye Jo dala woh kum hai..
M-are nahi..pahele use pura colour lagake face black colour ka karna hai..tumhe pata hai..usne tumse pahele mujh pe colour dalna chaha..
She again turned nd try to go towards rey bt virat again stop him nd turned her back nd hold her by sholder..
V-maanvi..ek min min..meri baat suno pahele..tum chahti ho ki tum pe pahela colour main lagau?
M-smile widly nd nodded like kid
V-to main lagau?
M-again do the same..
Virat move nd bring some colour..red one..he open his fist in front of her nd took pinch of red colour in his hand nd put in her partition first..maanvi smiled..all also..then virat colored her cheeks also..smile looking at her..
V-ab khush?
M-bahot..open her hand widly..
M-in baby tone-ab main bhi lagau?
V-aur kitna lagaogi?
M-thoda saa..tumhare cheeks khali hai..look..
V-smile nd nodded..he bent little nd put his cheek in front of her..
M-smile nd took colour..applied on his both cheeks nd hugged him..
M-happy holi virat..
V-smile nd hugged Back-happly holi 2 maanvi..
All smiled nd jumped..
D-are yaar ab humare saath bhi holi manale..
Hearing this virat realise they r in party area..he broke the hugged nd hugged to dabbu..both apply to colour eachother nd wish eachother..maanvi who still in bhang state starts feel dizzy she steps back..nd hold side table..
Here rey nd vy also joint them nd virat say thanks to all nd wish them too..he forget all fights..all pains with her one gesture..
After this he starts looking for her..he found her near the table..he can see her condition..he shook his head..
He excuse with them nd told them that he is going to home with maanvi..all agree nd gve hi5g to eachother..he just shook his head nd leave from there..
Virat come near to maanvi nd hold her by sholder..maanvi feel his touch nd looks up..
M-smile-tum?..aa gaye?..ab na mujhe tumse baat karni hai..tumhe kuch batana hai..
V-nahi..abhi nahi..baad me..pahele chalo yaha se..
M-nahi..mujhe baat karni hai plz..
V-nahi maanvi..main ase khade rahe kar baat nahi karunga..chalo ghar chalte hai..
She looks down to her nd his feet nd then him..
M-hum khade rahe kar baat nahi kar sakte?
V-nahi..
M-thik hai to chalo..nd she try to walk bt this time due to bhang she abt to fall bt virat hold her waist..
V-maanvi..nd he picked her up in his arms..
M-placing her hands around his neck-thank u..
V-smile nd shook his head-abhi gir jati..
M-nahi..tum the naa..
V-just looking at her
M-ab chalo..she shouted..
V-kya?
M-are baba chalna shuru karo..tumne kaha tha ki khade rahe k meri baat nahi sunoge..to chalo jaldi..she said like kid..
V-smile at her behaviour-okay..nd he stars walking towards house..
M-like kid-ab bolu?
V-make face-maanvi hum baad main bhi baat kar sakte hai..
M-nahi..mujhe baat karni hai..kuch batana hai..humne bahot wait kiya hai..plz..
V-humne?
M-humm..
V-what ever..pr abhi nahi..
M-virat plz..
V-still walking-ok..go ahead..
M-smile..-take breath..nd looked at him with full of love-i love u virat...
Hear this he imigeatly stop..they r just few steps away from house..he cannot believe what she said..means..she confess now?..he turned his face towards her..
Still she is in his hand..her hands around his neck..
V-shock nd surprise-kya kaha?
M-tumne nahi suna?..make cute baby face..looked down nd then him-are baba tum to ruk gaye..ab chalo jaldi se varna main baat kaise karungi?
V-smile at her silly bhang jokes-ab kar sakti ho..
M-pakka?
V-haa..
M-to maine kaha..I LOVE U..na aaj se naa kal se aur na tab se jab tumne mujhse i love u kaha balki tab se jabse mumma-papa k baad tumne sambhala..
She said with full hearth..both just looking at eachother..virat cannot express his happiness in action..
M-ab suna na?
Virat nodded in yes..
M-smile-ab nahi jaogena Hume chhod ke?..in baby tone..
He is nt in condition to say something..he just nodded in no..she smile widly nd hugged him tightly..he hugged her back..more tightly..
M-i love u..
V-i love u 2..
They just stood there for sometime nd forget all world..
Bt after some minutes maanvi feel vomiting..she passed him away nd Rush in corner nd starts vomiting..virat rush behind her..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice updt...r u planning to give 3 updts together? Then its gr8 cant wait to read more...plz updt next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
next part update soon plzzz...

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