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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys.. 😊
this is my first story on this forum...hope u guys like it.. 😃
I am a big virika fan and so this will obviously be a virika story..
in my story, viren has been proved innocent by jeevika and is freed from the jail and has come back home.. 😊
So here's the index:
Part 1-Page 1
Part 2-Page 3
Part 3-Page 4
Part 4-Page 6
Part 5-Page 8
Part 6-Page 11
PART 1:-
Viren is back home..
Everybody is very happy and a bit guilty too except vanshika and jeevika who trusted viren completely...but they know viren has a heart of gold and he will definitely forgive them...
Jeevika was the happiest..her happiness knew no bounds today...she has been waiting for this day for a long time..
And finally her husband has been proved innocent..He will get all his lost glory back..What else would she want.. 😊
Viren took blessing of all the elders and then went to his room..
Jeevika who came after sometime sees him standing near the window with his back faced towards her..
She understood what he must be thinking,why all this had to happen to him..
He never thought sambhav and riya would play such a trick with him just because he once insulted sambhav in college...! 😭
Jeevika came and hugged him from behind and started singing,
Kehte hai khuda ne is jahan mein sabhi ke liye,
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye...

Viren now turned back hearing jeevika sing and looked into her eyes..
She continued singing,
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara mano,
mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye..

Viren now hugged her tightly,with his head on her shoulders and started crying...
Jeevika could feel the tears on her shoulder..she continued singing,
Kuch to hai tujhse raabta.Kuch to hai tujhse raabta...
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata,kuch to hai tujhse raabta...

she removed him from the hug,cupped his face in her hands and sang,
Tu humsafar hai,fir kya fikar hai,
Jeene ki vajah yahi hai,marna isi ke liye...
Kehte hai khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye,
kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye..

They again hugged..
They both then heard somebody singing..
They looked outside and it was virat holding his guitar and singing and manvi was there with him too...
They both had a few tears in their eyes.. 😭
They both entered and virat continued singing,
Meherbani jaate jaate mujhpe kar gaya,
Guzarta sa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya,

They both came in front of virika...jeevika was looking away because she was angry with them because they did not trust viren.
They both suddenly bent and touched the feet of their elder siblings,their way of showing how much they respect them much to the surprise of viren and jeevika because they generally never touched their feet.(or maybe virika never let them touch their feet)
Immediately,virika made them get up and hugged them...virat continued singing,
Tera nazara mila,roshan sitara mila,
Takdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila... 😊

After this they left the room giving some privacy to virika..
They were very happy that viren was back home and he forgived them too..
Jeevika continued singing,going round viren,
Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye,
Teri saubat mein duaayein hai ussi ke liye,

Viren was continuously looking at her as she was going around him...He was just thinking how lucky he is to have a wife like her... 😊
When the whole world was against him,she was with him and proved him innocent and the whole world wrong..
It is only because of her that he is here..He felt so very proud of her...
She was still singing,
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara mano,
mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye...
Kuch to hai tujhse raabta,kuch to hai tujhese raabta,
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata,
Kuch to hai tujhse raabta...

He hugged her again.
She continued singing wiping the few tears on his face,
Tu humsafar hai, fir kya fikar hai,
jeene ki vajah yahi hai,marna isi ke liye..
Kehte hai khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye,
kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye.. 😊

She then took him close and started a kiss..
He was surprised by her action because she generally never initiated a kiss...but responded back with equal love and passion..
All the while,he was just thinking that he would start a new life with jeevika now,where there would be no sorrow, no tears...
Only happiness and love... 😊
They broke the kiss, and viren lifted her up which now surprised jeevika...
She hid her head in his chest and started blushing.. 😳
He took her to bed and they made love.. 😊Precap:
The vadhera family plans a picnic to make viren feel better..


So,this was my first part..
Hope u guys like it.. 😊
plz reply and tell me I should continue or not...
All sorts of comments welcome... 😛
Edited by kryanfan1 - 12 years ago

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-Aaliya.KryAn- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story!!
really loved it..
plz do continue and pm me too..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ooh very cute loved it
That song rabtaa it reminds me of Kryan it fits perfectly
do continue and plz PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is interestinggg!
I wanna read more... Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey! Amazing story! Continue soon and pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh RABTA is my fav song
Liked the update also
Virika singing it was very nice
Continue soo n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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brilliant dear...wonderful update likes to read 😊 continues sooon n plxxx pm me tooo 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ya sure...I will update soon.. 😊
And if u want me to pm you plz add me to your buddy list... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start!
please update soon!
and im sorry i wont be able to comment for a bit becuase of my exams! but i will comment once i come back!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww such an awesome post luved it
continue soon n pm me

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