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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Lovely update
Loved the naughty viren a lot
Aww liked the blushing jeevika too
The last part whr vanshika n swamini were speaking was funny. Lol
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
aww that was so cute!
Viren is so desperate!!!
its actually making me blush! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Swamini and vanshika are hilarious!!!!
SWEET UPDATE!!
UPDATE SOON!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
I m new here nd I luved ur story to the core thxx fr writing nd plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
luved ur story a lot plzz update it as soon as possible...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Brilliant update, the way u described Virika is fab! Their cute romance everything is just amazing! Wonderful! No words to describe. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
superb update...loved it
love viren's naughtiness๐Ÿ˜‰
hayee virika romance ๐Ÿ˜ณ they r so cute
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesome update
loved it
viren in romantic mood as always
liked the bit where swamini teases virika
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wowww...โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ณ
dis story is awesome!!!!
just sooo...sooo...sooo...lovely !!!! โค๏ธ
PICNIC โ˜บ๏ธ
simply so adorable!
loved it..
update soon...
plzz pm me...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Thank u guys for the comments... here's the next part... ๐Ÿ˜Š
Part 4:-
They soon reach the hotel.
Everybody takes their room keys and are heading towards their rooms when manvi decides to play a bit with virika.
Manvi: Di, I am feeling like sleeping with u...and anyways we have come on a family picnic,how about we sleeping together and these vadhera brothers sleeping together...
Viren(suddenly jerked): Nooo..
Everybody laughs. ๐Ÿ˜†
Manvi: Why jiju, why cant I sleep with di today?๐Ÿ˜‰
Viren:nahi I mean u can sleep,but I am sure Virat would like to sleep with u...
Virat:nahi bhai aisi koi baat nahi hai...vaise bhi iss sherni se ek din chutkara mile to accha hai...but I think u would like to sleep with bhabhi na,,,๐Ÿ˜›
Jeevika:nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai, mannu tu mere saath so sakti hai..
Swamini:Manvi hume lagta hai ki tum in dono ko thodi privacy de hi do..varna firse kal public places mein hi picnic manane lag jayenge jaise aaj dhabe par aur bus mein mana rahe the...
Both Virika get embarrased...
Manvi:Buaji I think u are right...lets leave them alone...meet u at dinner...and incase you both dont want to do dinner with us,its ok...u can have ur candle light romantic dinner in your room...
Viren smiles and Jeevika blushes...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Everybody leaves to their respective rooms...
Virika room:
Jeevika is unpacking the bag...Viren is just staring at her...
He then goes to her and holds her from the back..
Jeevika:Virenji,plz abhi nahi, koi aa jayega..
Viren:koi nahi aayega,dekha nahi sab kaise hamara saath de rahe hai...unhone to kaha hum room mein candle light romantic dinner bhi kar sakte hai,,
Jeevika(turns towards viren and viren still holding her):nahi virenji,hum sabke saath hi dinner karenge...hum family picnic par aaye hai,honeymoon par nahi..
Viren:haan meri jaan, par tum chaho to dinner ke baad room mein akele hum dono,main isse honeymoon bana sakta hoon..
Jeevika:main soch rahi thi ki main mannu ke saath hi so jaoon..
Viren(leaves her):jeevika ye kaisi baatein kar rahi ho tum,,,yahan main tumhare sath time spend karne ke liye mare ja raha hoon aur tum ho ki...mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karni,jaa raha hoon main virat ke paas..
Jeevika:arre virenji main to mazak kar rahi thi...bas aapko chidha rahi thi...main bhi aapke saath ye time spend karne ka besabri se intezaar kar rahi thi..
Viren(hold her again):Oh really,in that case mere saath aise mazaak karne ke liye tumhe punishment milegi...
Jeevika:nahi main aapko punishment dinner ke baad dungi,abhi nahi,,,
Viren:oh to tum meri punishment itni jaldi samjh gayi,very smart Mrs Vadhera...I'm impressed..!
Jeevika:hmm, ab chale...
she leaves to go when viren hold her hands and pulls her back.
Viren:Itni jaldi kya hai Mrs Vadhera...vaise bhi abhi 15 minute baki hai dinner lagne ko...thoda late pahunchenge toh bhi chalega,sab samajh jayenge...tab tak thodi family planning kar lete hai..
Jeevika blushes...Viren starts coming closer to her...She frees her hand,gives him a peck on his cheeks and runs away...Viren smiles at his wife and follows her..
At the dinner table..
Virika arrive.
Manvi:wow di jiju,I cant believe it..
Jeevika and Viren are surprised...
Jeevika:kya hua mannu..
Manvi:Di, u both are here to have dinner with us...I mean u removed some time out of your busy romantic schedule to have dinner with us...we are really grateful...and everybody laughs...๐Ÿ˜†
Jeevika:chup kar mannu...maine dekha tu aur virat bhi kya kar rahe the room mein,,,
Manvi(embarrased):kya dii,aapne kab dekha,kya dekha..
Viren:sab kuch,video recording bhi li as a proof..dikhao?
Manvi:nahi nahi nahi...plz jiju..
Virika start laughing...Manvi understands that they were just teasing her..
Everybody has their dinner and are leaving especially Viren who is just pulling jeevika fast which obviously does not go unnoticed by the family..
Virat:Bhai, how about going to the garden and playing something...
Viren:u mean something like pakda pakdi or hide and seek..we better go and sleep...
Virat:arre no bhai,we can sit and play as well na..
Jeevika:Yeah sure,,,kyun nahi..
Viren gives her a death glare and she winks at him...Viren then gives her an 'acha bacchu' glare and jeevika nods and smiles..
They go to the garden and the whole family decides to play passing the parcel...and dadaji is operating the music.
The whole family starts playing...Everybody gets out and gets a punishment...Finally only Virika are left..They are playing and viren winks at jeevika and kisses her in the air and nobody sees it because everybody is looking at the parcel and the music...
Jeevika is ๐Ÿ˜ฒ and gets out...Viren smirks at this..
Jeevika:Virenji aapne cheating ki..
Viren:kyun kya kiya maine..?
Jeevika: aaa aaa vo vo...kuch nahi...I am ready for the punishment,,
Virat:bhabhi,I will give u a nice punishment...U have to kiss bhai in front of everyone...
Jeevika gets shocked..
Viren:Wah mere bhai kya punishment di hai..pehle bata deta ki tu ye punishment dene wala hai to kabka jeevika ko out kar diya hota maine...koi nahi..abhi sahi..
Jeevika blushes..
Manvi:common di..
Virat:common bhabhi..
Vanshika:jeevika bete,common..
Swamini:Yes Jeevika,common..
Kadambari:haye hi,ye to ekdum salman aur madhuri wala scene ho jayega na ji..same to same...
Jeevika is shocked to hear this from everybody...so she decide to kiss viren..
She moves towards viren...Viren smiles and puts his cheek forward...
Jeevika kisses him on his cheek and blushes...Viren smiles and blushes a bit too...
Everybody claps and smiles..
Viren:I guess we should leave now...I am very sleepy and morever we need to get up early tomorrow to watch the sunrise...
Everyboody:yes we should leave..
Everbody along with virika retire to their rooms...
Precap: Some other girls on the picnic approach viren...jeevika jealous..
Thats all for today guys...
I will do the next update soon..๐Ÿ˜Š
Plz like and comment...๐Ÿ˜‰
All sorts of comments welcome...
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Edited by kryanfan1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome
loved it
virika kiss in front of family
wow jeevs jealous in precap

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