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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Totally loved the update

Total fabulous

Loved the quote everything happens for a reason

Precap

Can't wait for Virika's meeting

Thanks for the pm please continue soon
Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
it can never get more perfect than this!!
damn good work nutty!!
brilliant write up.
loved the way you described everything!!
awesome

looking forward to read further.
continue soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Nuts nice update 😊
I like Jeevika's character alot 😉
U start ur FF so beautifully
Really amazing start
Looking forward for Virika's meeting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94


Jeevika pulled blanket over her as the beam of light reached her eyes.

Although the devastating storm had gone, but it left the city with a massive destruction and froze terror inside people. The new morning was a peaceful one .The sun had risen and was putting a little heal over wounds by spreading it rays across the sky shuffling the darkness with it glow and bringing a little satisfaction.

Manvi:-Eva ! wake up,It's quite late

Jeevika (in a drowsy voice):-I'm still sleepy

Manvi:-Eva ,Niki called you at her place

Jeevika:-Mini that freaky storm hasn't gone yet!

Manvi:-Eva ,land in this world .

Jeevika(uncovering her face from blanket):-Oh man! Ok mini I'm coming.

Manvi left the room .Jeevika took a fresh up and dressed in white and pink dress.

She held the car keys in her and left without having breakfast.

Jeevika ,Niki and Falak were three besties who always love spending time together and doing crazy stuffs.

On the other hand Viren was just about to shave ,the door bell rang.It was his friend Vicky.

Vicky waving his hand :-Hi Viro, right timing !You're leaving for airport??

Viren:-Vicks ,nops ! I 've to stay here **Orders**

Vicky:-Omg! How long you're goanna stay here?

Viren:-No idea man ! I've to supervise the upcoming loss development project.

Vicky:-Oh! That's a great responsibility ! Tu fikar na kr! Everything will get fixed.

Viren (breathing out) :-Hope so'Yar I am going to office..Tu bi chal na

Vicky:-Sure

Vicky and Viren are two closest buddies.They 're childhood friends .

Jeevika along with Niki went to Starstellie Restaurant ,The only restaurant which was opened.They ordered the food.

Jeevika:-Niks I'm going to rest room. Just coming!

Niki:-Ok

Jeevika was coming back to her table,her foot titled and was about to fall that a muscular grip (Viren) Saved her from falling.She looked at him and felt pleasured and awkward at the same time.

Jeevika:-I'm sorry

Thankyou!

And left hurriedly .Viren kept staring her until she was out of the sight .Viren turned to go back .He found her bag on the ground.He picked it up and tried calling her but it was useless,she was gone.

Niki:-Eva! Why did you get late? Anyways see fizzy (falak )is with us.

Jeevika:-Oh sorry niks..Hi fizzy join us.

Falak:-Eva please give me your lip gloss ..I need to put someone.

Jeevika searched for it ,looked around.

Jeevika:-Guys I think I've left it in the bathroom.Let me check

Falak and niki together:-Eva we're also coming with you.

They searched but found it no where.

Jeevika (making sad face):-It contained the most precious things'

Falak:-What was in it?

Jeevika:-My mascara,lip gloss,my favourite perfumes,mp3 player ,I phone ,My favourite choclates ,My first school day picture..Oh gosh I was looking a weirdo in that pic,Charger ..The water day celebration picture

Niki :-Hold on Eva ! It contained that water day celebr'..

Falak:-Really eva

Jeevika:-Ya girls

All of them made sad faces..

Precap:-

Viren finds jeevika and head towards jeevika to give her bag.Jeevika 's friends are drooling over her.

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The other good comment were of :-

Nani2360,Mehakluvsvirika,kryanvirika05,ehmmbilu,starstellie,avni199.

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The next comment of the update will be of...😉

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Love natasha


Edited by Natasha137 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
me 2nd :( i wanted to be the 1st one :^( :^( Hahahahaha...bt 2nd chalega ;) Finally behna u updated this story & m really sorry 4 nt commenting on the 1st part...i really dont know how i missed that...sorry...coming to the story awesome both the parts...u described the nature the storm brilliantly & jeev's fear...so nice...oh !!! The girls r calling jeevs Eva...nice name btw...virika 1st meeting was really superb...the fall, the catch, the 1st feeling for eacher other & awkwardness brilliant...precap is also amazing...jeev's frnds r drooling over viren...hope jeevs gets jealous...waiting fr the 3rd one...update soon & behna update PYAR TO HONA HI THA too
Edited by amritaluvskryan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Darllng thanks for mentioning me,
Love the update. Was it short or too good I fellt short 😉

Love how lively Jeevika is,Viren gentleman as always.
Cant wait for next part girls drooling over Viren..

Update soon plz and if impossible pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
awesome blossom update!!
Luved it...
D Way u r portraying everyhing is just fantastic!!!!
Its soo magical u know!
M just falling in love wid dis was not able to read d previous part as u didnt pm me n now i was able to read it as i was online but yaaa its a request plzzz PM me...plzzz...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great going..
KEEP it up...
UPDAte soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
awesome update
loved it
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
nice update
waiting for next update
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such a lovely update Nuts... ❤️
Very well written 😊

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