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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kryanvirika05

now that's like a good girl! 😛😉
time waste cheyakunda, velli update twaraga write chey!! 😛
ipudu twaraga raasavu anuko, neeku punishment undadhu!
god i just read the teaser again and im too excited to hold myself together!!


hahah yes updating soon! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Well this time I am not going to apologize coz i am really feeling bad! especially charu and karina! i am all yours..marzi aap ki hai!😛

This update truly is dedicated to Charu,kryanvirika5,marzi,karina madam!😊😊 coz these people have spammed my story for the update! i never expected that i would get something like that in my life!

Here goes the part 6!


Barun and jeevika are shocked and hide behind two different curtains. Sambhav and riya come and sit on the sofa. She starts to take her and play! She says,"Oh god sambhav,after so many days we are having fun this way! The moment we have come to this place to take revenge on that viren I am not able to live properly. I am feeling much better now sambhav. Once that useless fellow is sentenced then we are out of this! I am just hoping that we get out of this soon!""True riya! Even I am in hell lot of pressure. But one thing I am having a doubt is who among the vadhera's are defending viren,is it his chachu inder or dadaji. As if its them then no problem,they don't have that caliber! We need to keep an eye on jeevika as im sure she wont leave the case."" "Sambhav, why did you make viren sign on those papers?""offo riya,you don't know anything? I know his wfe is very intelligent what if they come to know you are alive then we should have something else to send him to jail! You don't know what all he did in college. I wont leave him for sure!""Okay but where are those papers?""inside our room dear!""Okay chalo I would want to go to bed now""Oh really! Bed! Chalo""No naughty thoughts sambhav!"

After they have left to their room,barun and jeevika escape out of the house but while going unknowingly barun drops a vase. With that sound sambhav comes out but barun and jeevika escape by then. Sambhav is suspicious and he goes to check the papers and is shocked to see them missing! He doubts jeevika! "Wow jeevika you dared to come inside my house and take away those papers. Itna pyaar karti thi kya? Teek hai,ill make sure you are not even alive! Don't dare playing with me Mrs. Viren Vadhera!" smabhav tells everything to riya and they vow that tomorrow would be last day of jeevika!!

Barun and jeevika reach home and then jeevika was uncontrollable. She was crying badly. She couldn't believe someone can play with her virenji. Barun didn't know what to do and then he went and hugged her and started to console her. Jeevika started to speak,"Barun what mistake did we do? Right from the marriage we faced many problems. I didn't know if my marriage would happen and after that my sister had cancer and hence we had to abort my baby. I was on the verge to go to jail but my virenji saved me and then we had a fight because of family and now virenji is in jail. Barun tell me something don't we deserve happiness? Why all the bad things happen to us? Why are everyone happy? Why barun?""jeevika please stop crying,kuch nahi hoga viren ko. Tell me something after knowing what that sambhav and riya were upto will you break down and lose hopes. Jeevika I promise you I will put my life at stake and save viren. I wont let anything happen to you. Please trust me jeevika. Its just that we need proofs but you don't worry I will get them""proof? Barun I have one. I have recorded the entire conversation of them in my phone""wow jeevika! You are a super woman just like your brother!!" listening to that jeevika started to laugh and said "are you a super woman barun!" saying that she went to her room to fresh up. Barun thought,"jeevika I don't mind doing anything for that one smile on your face. I am so proud to be your brother!"

Jeevika and barun come to the study room and jeevika shows him the video! "wow jeevika how could you take it?""barun I had my phone in my hands and I could do it!""superb jeevika! One proof is ready! But we should make sure we need to make sambhav confess as this video alone is not enough!""Ok for that I have an idea barun!" jeevika tells the idea and both of them go for a peaceful sleep.

Next day morning barun gets a call from court saying that the court hearing session will start at 2 in the afternoon . barun and jeevika decide to go to jail and then jeevika realizes "Barun virenji doesn't know I left the house and I don't think its good if we go and tell him now""No jeevika he needs to know that I am his lawyer and above all that sambhav is the culprit and riya is alive!" "okay barun we will go then"

Jeevika and barun reaches the police station. Unknown to them someone was closely watching them and he makes a phone call saying jeevika with a man reached the police station! "Okay you stay there I'll come in 30 minutes""okay boss!"

Jeevika comes near the jail and her heart aches to see her husband in that situation. He was sleeping on the floor and his face was clear that he is unbearable pain! Jeevika calls viren and viren looks shocked seeing barun!

"Virenji meet him,this is Barun Sobti,your friend and your lawyer""Hey barun,long time dude! How are you?""Viren I am fine""But barun you and my lawyer?"Jeevika speaks up "Voh virenji baat yeh hai ki the day you were arrested I left the house!" "KYA!!" she continues the whole story of how the family accused him and how she met barun and how manvi accused her of having an affair with barun! She also explains the whole situation of sambhav and riya!"Par virenji,how could you think that I'll divorce you and stay happy?" Viren was not speaking anything. His mind went blank and body became numb. He fell on the floor and jeevika and barun were shocked to see him that way! After so much of time,he spoke "Barun,what should I do inorder to return the favor you did for my me and my wife?"Barun was shocked listening to it but calmly he said,"take care of my sister properly,she faced a lot these days""I know barun I don't even know if I deserve her or not" jeevika and barun were shocked,barun though of giving some privacy to the couple so handed over the cds and files to jeevika and said that he will come back within some time! Jeevika mentally thanked barun! And she turned to virenji who seemed to be dying in pain and tears flowing continuously. She wipes the tears and cups his face,"Kya hua virenji?" "jeevika mujhe maaf kardo please,I know I did a terrible mistake by trying to take divorce but leaving you was not my intention. Please jeevika… ""Shshsh..dont talk anymore. I am very angry and I will make you do stuff for me later but stop this sorry thing""Ill do anything you say jeevika,please forgive me. You took so much of pain and didn't tell me a word. What kind of a family I have jeevika! I am so ashamed of myself. What if you didn't meet barun and manorama aunty? If something would have happened to you? What if something went wrong?""Virenji please stop it,nothing happened na. I am fine. I am ready to give my life for you""I don't know if I deserve you jeevika…""shut up,what deserve derserve? What didn't you do for me virenji? You supported me in everything. You killed your baby for my sake,you allowed me to go to jail as I asked you,you didn't search for me when I left as I made you give that promise,aisa bohat hai virenji,this is not the time to think all of that,please leave everything." After 15 minutes barun comes back and says "oh love birds are you done? Its only a matter of few hours and you will be back abhi se romance shuru kardiye kya?" viren and jeevika stands up and viren says,"oye kya barun! You are teasing us?""you know viren you were never linked to anyone in college hence I had no chance of teasing you but now,I wont waste any opportunity" all of them start to laugh! And barun says "okay bro we should leave now,there are some formalities in court and we need to complete them""okay barun take care". Barun leaves and jeevika assures she would be right back and they will be together forever. On the way jeevika asks "barun is it necessary for me to come to the court now? I want to go to the temple please and do pooja for the documents and the video cds please""okay jeevika I will drop you and go to the court." Barun drops jeevika and on the way a lorry comes from behind and hit him hard and the car falls into the cliff!

To be continued...


so is barun alive? will barun comeback?will they be able to save viren? what is sambhav upto! is jeevika safe? to know keep reading!😉😉


thank you all for bearing this story! and thanks to all for your lovely comments.. thank you!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Im first!! and you dedicated this to me...sooo sweet!!! 😃
and one word...WOW!!!
this should so happen in the show! it would have been amazing!!! why dont you go work for CV's???
and the virika bit was A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!!! aww poor viren, he is heart broken!!! and jeevs saying 'shut up'...i liked that😳
NAHIII!!! tum barun ko aise kaise maar sakte hoon? aur vaise bhe tum jaise BARUNLOVER khabhi bhi barun ko kisi bhe halaat mein maar nahi sakta! so the question at the end about barun's death, the answer to that is NO! he is not dead! he will come back, save viren, shove sambhav and riya behind bars, prove his family wrong, and set everything right!!
I LOVE YOU <3
Next update epudu thalli????
Edited by kryanvirika05 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ossm update madhu...
Luvd it so mich...
Omg dese cheaters roya n sambhav r too much...
Hope jeevs is fine n nothing happened to barun
Luvd virikas dialogues...thank god d divorce thing is no more now...
Update asap
Edited by mehakLUVSvirika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH MY GOD MADHU!!!!!!!!!
how can you write so well i meann itnaaa talent😃
amazing update seriously !
the suspense is gonna kill me but still the little romance will pull me through i think !!!!!
but perfectly written madhu ! like absolutely perfect!😃😃😃
yaar it was so good iam kinda speechless now!
thank you very much for the update !!!!
continue soon ( and please dnt kill barun😭😭.. i totally love him in real life as well as your story)
~aashna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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edited- OMG!!! Awesome madhu dii...👏..vry sensitive part..😛. loved it... barun 😭 dont kill him yaar...😭 plz plz continue soon..😃. very eager...😳
Edited by janani18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me not first this timeCryCry sowmya ima kill u haha
wow the update was brilliantly written girl
like sowmya said u should defenetely go work for cv's
this is what we want in the real show!! haha
hope barun is okayy...and stupid sambhav
i just hate him more n more in each update
iwant my virika to be together soon
cant see them like this anymoree
madhu please 😆 continue soon
Edited by jeevi7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashna.irani

OH MY GOD MADHU!!!!!!!!!

how can you write so well i meann itnaaa talent😃
amazing update seriously !
thesuspense is gonna kill me but still the little romance will pull me through i think !!!!!
but perfectly written madhu ! likeabsolutelyperfect!😃😃😃
yaar it was so good iam kindaspeechlessnow!
thank you very much for the update !!!!
continue soon ( and please dnt kill barun😭😭.. i totally love him in real life as well as your story)
~aashna



Aashna 😊
Thank you yaar! No dear the day I will kill barun would be the last day of my life 😉
I just can't live without barun 😳
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What a Update Barunlover
da suspense you created theyre is mind-blowing
absolutely loved it
Feeling so bad for Jeevika
OMG i thought they were gna kill Jeevika but no
they are gna kill Barun Dont want him to die 😭😭


Edited by rucha123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kryanvirika05


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Im first!! and you dedicated this to me...sooo sweet!!! 😃
and one word...WOW!!!
this should so happen in the show! it would have been amazing!!! why dont you go work for CV's???
and the virika bit was A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!!! aww poor viren, he is heart broken!!! and jeevs saying 'shut up'...i liked that😳
NAHIII!!! tum barun ko aise kaise maar sakte hoon? aur vaise bhe tum jaise BARUNLOVER khabhi bhi barun ko kisi bhe halaat mein maar nahi sakta! so the question at the end about barun's death, the answer to that is NO! he is not dead! he will come back, save viren, shove sambhav and riya behind bars, prove his family wrong, and set everything right!!
I LOVE YOU <3
Next update epudu thalli????




Thank you 😊
Hahaha you know me quite well! 😉
Yes barun might be alive but...
Thanks a lot for such a loving comment 😊

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