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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hmm afreen it sounds intresting

you should cont it

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@wanderlust09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Woow Afreen...prologue sounds really interesting...

Plzz cont soon n do pm me wen ya update!!!

-Alice😊

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helina

@helina

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Hi... New story. Seems interesting. They were already married. Continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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mika17

@mika17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

interesting concept plz pm me wn u update

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Great start afreen...n interesting prolouge...love it...plz continue soon...thank u so much for the pm...😊

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

that sounds very interesting ...update soon

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Madhiya

@HalkatJawaani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wow Amazin Concept!

Characters Look Good Wow Ksg Is One Of Ur Characters I Totally love Him

Plz Continue Soon Afreen Plz

A lot o people Lookin Foward To it!

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afreen

@afreenkansal

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

hi guys,this is the first update ,hope u like it

ps-all the family members are the same
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tringgg-

the alarm rang and manvi woke up from her sweet slumber.she turned to see her sweet hubby sleeping peacefully.she kissed him on
the forehead and went to get ready.
she came out dressed in a beautiful saree.
manvi- virat !get up.its already morning.u will miss your breakfast
virat-manvi,let me sleep.
manvi-virat,u know dadaji's rules.we will miss breakfast then
virat-i don't care.
manvi-fine then.i am going
she just turned around when a hand pulled her on the bed.she fell right on top of virat.he rolled her down.manvi could not help but to get lost in those eyes.she managed to control herself and pretended to be angry
manvi-virat,leave me.i can't stay hungry.
virat-sweetheart,u will have breakfast without
me?
manvi-u told u didn't want breakfast.now stay hungry
virat-really?[tracing down his finger on her face]
manvi couldn't help but to blush
virat was enjoying seeing the effect he had on
her
manvi-v..v..virat,what are u doing?
virat-i am not doing anything manvi [enjoying himself]
by now manvi had forgotten her anger and had turned completely red
manvi-virat please.we have to go down for breakfast
virat-i will leave u only after u give me a kiss
manvi-what!
virat-yes manvi[pointing at his lips]
this made her blush more
at last manvi had to give in and kissed him.
they kissed each other passionately until there was a knock on the door.this really got virat irritated.
virat-what a timing
manvi managed to free herself and went to open the door.it was tarun
tarun-maam,all are calling u for breakfast
manvi-we are just coming
and she closed the door
manvi-virat now please go take a bath
virat-sure madam.i already had my dessert
this made manvi blush even more.
they managed to reach breakfast on time.

so guys how was it?
please give your comments

love afreen

Edited by afreenkansal - 12 years ago