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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: nishal310

hey afreen it was nice

loved the virman scene
would love to read more
thanks for the pm and cont soon



thanks
will continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

Fab update
virat was in a naughty mood
Thanks for pm plz continue



thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
hi guys,i am bach with a new update.hope u have not forgotten this ss.
NOTE-manvi did not have cancer.she has a past.virat has the same past as in the serial.
so here it goes

everybody were seated in the hall and were chatting.just then dadaji spoke.
dadaji-i have some good news to tell u.today aditya and pankhuri are coming.even anika is coming
virat-that is great dadaji.can't wait to meat adi bhai and pankhuri bhabhi.
viren-virat,how could u forget anika.have u seen how cute she is?
virat-of course bhai,how can i forget.dadaji,what time are they coming?
dadaji-they are coming in the evening.at around 5.30.the preparations should start fast for them to stay
swamini-of course.
[aditya and pankhuri are married.adi is viren and virat's elder brother.their 5 year old daughter is anika]
[sorry can't upload pictures.]
it was evening and all were eagerly waiting to meet them.just then the door bell rang.hearing it, virat ran
to open the door bell.a huge smile spread across his face when he saw adi and pankhuri and not to forget anika
virat-bhai and bhabhi[he hugged them]
adi-hey virat,how are u.long time haven't seen each other.
virat-bhai,have to say,u gave us a good surprise
pankhuri-of course virat,we are famous for giving surprises
anika-chachu,u forgot to meet me[showing an innocent face]
virat-anika,how could i forget u[he lifted her]
anika-u bought chocolates for me?
virat-[he then realised he forgot to get chocolates for anika.]i am sorry anika,it just slipped from my mind
but don't worry,in the night before dinner u will get your chocolate.
anika-really chachu![happily]
virat-of course.
anika happily hugged him.all laughed seeing both of them.everyone happily met adi, pankhuri and anika.
it was night time.virat entered the room and saw manvi in her night gown sitting on the bed reading a
book.when manvi saw virat,she kept the book aside and smiled at him.virat came and sat beside her.
manvi-virat,anika is so cute na
virat-yes manvi.she is really very cute as well as sweet.
manvi-but now that she is here,u have to keep a whole stock of chocolates for her
virat-of course,otherwise she won't leave me.
both of them laughed.they were sitting very close to each other and could feel each others warm breaths.
all of a sudden virat pulled manvi and kissed her passionately.manvi was shocked nd could not refuse it.
she at last responded to the kiss.both were lost in the kiss.as they were human beings,they broke the kiss
to get their breath.virat then started kissing her neck going up to her shoulder.manvi slowly started unbuttoning
his shirt as virat started removing her dress.soon they removed all the barriers between them and drowned themselves
in their own sweet world.
-next morning-
manvi when woke up,she saw that she was stuck to virat like glue.he had his hand protectively around her waist.
manvi started to blush as she remembered last nights what happend.virat just then woke up and was smirking to
see her blushing like this.
virat-what a miracle,sherni has transformed herself into sharmili tagore.
manvi-shut up virat,leave me,i have to go and get ready
virat-of course,i will get u ready[manvi was shocked to hear this]
he then carried her and took a blushing manvi in the shower.soon they came out after a hot shower.manvi instantly
ran downstairs to help jeevika in the breakfast.soon all had breakfast.manvi was walking in the corridor when someone
pulled her and pined her against the wall.it didn't even take her a second to recognise the touch.
manvi-leave me virat,what are u doing?
virat-romancing with my wife.what else?
manvi-virat i have to go,i have lots of work to do.
virat-u should feel blessed that your pati dev is spending time with u.he is taking out his precious time for u.
manvi-really?on how many gils have u tried this line?
virat-at least 8 girls.[manvi was shocked.]
manvi-really?who are those 8 girls?
virat-1]sherni[kissed her forehead]
2]jungli billi [kissed her eyes]
3]sharmili tagore[kissed her cheeks]
4]dedh futiya[kissed her nose]
5]chaudrain[kissed her shoulder]
6]princess[kissed her ear]
7]baby[kissed her nose]
8]manvi[kissed her lips]
manvi was completely shocked.she couldn't control herself and kissed him back.at that moment jeevika's voice came
jeebvika-mannu.where are u?
manvi broke the kiss.
manvi-virat leave me.di is calling[she was blushing very badly]
virat at last left her and manvi ran away blushing.jeevika was confused to see manvi blushing.then she realised
jeevika-found time,so romancing with husband.kya bath hai!
manvi-nothing like that di.
jeevika-i am from that time searching for u and see what u are doing.
manvi-di please.stop teasing.
just then pankhuri and virat entered
pankhuri-what happend jeevika?why are u teasing manvi?
jeevika-ask your devar bhabhi.by the way,i should say u thanks virat.
virat-but why bhabhi
jeevika-till manvi had not met u,she never blushed.but see now,what effect u have on her.sherni se sharmili tagore.
manvi was blushing even more as jeevika,virat and pankhuri were laughing.the same way the whole day passed

so how was it?
please hit the like button and comment.[one liners accepted]
for pms,buddy me
love afreen




Edited by afreenkansal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: mahimanair09

awesome 😊continue soon



thanks.will continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
i am not ready to give one line comment because u deserve more than that...
i know how much efforts are behind every update...
awesome update afreen...
the way all were teasing manvi was so cute... nd virat was no less in romancing with his wife...
looving ur story very much...
thnx 4 pm:)
do update soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: shilpa09

i am not ready to give one line comment because u deserve more than that...
i know how much efforts are behind every update...
awesome update afreen...
the way all were teasing manvi was so cute... nd virat was no less in romancing with his wife...
looving ur story very much...
thnx 4 pm:)
do update soon:)



thanks u so much
will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
awesome update 👍🏼
manvi blushing haan ...
and both bhabi and dewar same dialogue haan 😊
update soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

awesome update 👍🏼
manvi blushing haan ...
and both bhabi and dewar same dialogue haan 😊
update soon and do pm me



thanks
will update soon
for pm,buddy me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
awesum concept virat and manvi both havin past ...seems reali interesting. . . part1was awesum. . .n part2 lovd virman's romance. . .jeevika teasing manvi.. . n new characters entry was wondrful. plz continue soon n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: surovita

awesum concept virat and manvi both havin past ...seems reali interesting. . . part1was awesum. . .n part2 lovd virman's romance. . .jeevika teasing manvi.. . n new characters entry was wondrful. plz continue soon n do pm me



thanks.
will continue soon
for pm,buddy me

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