Virman FF: Tale of two people:*Note pg 140* - Page 71

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

wow that was so amazing


and i have no words how to praise it

it was simply superb

the pain you have describe very well written dear

love this guy rohan

and the song was just fantastic

thank u so much for the update

thanks for the pm and do cont soon


hey shivali thank u so much...
thanxx 4 liking my writtings...
Will continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Artii159

Wow...jis ke liye update dedicated tha, woh hi late...SHOLLY DIII... Hey dear its ok... no worries... wese b tum mere saath hi buzi thi🤣.. But dis update was juz fantastic thanxx 4 liking it.. ...Luvd it 2 da core...Rohan...interesting character, very frndly, caring, loving, and understanding...So he is kinda falling 4 MannuYeah he is,,,...who wouldn't...Ahaan...Jealous Viraat...Abhi toh shuruwat hai Beta, aage aage dekho hota hai kyahan Aarti dekho dekho 😆😆...God dis Tanya...jaye gi kab yeh chipkali Jaegi jaegi.. buhat jald.. bus thora wait......Awww...Viraat is still scared of losing his Maanvi yeah he does after all loves her too bits.....poor Viru...I wouldn't blame him at all, dat Tanya is responsible 4 all dis rude behavior of his towards Maanvi Yeah bechare viru ki koi ghalti nahi,.....Rohan seems 2 understand da pain she is goin through in their 1st meeting...but da person who loves her doesn't knw wat she's goin through...😭 He will knew soon... But I lykd da way he was worried 4 her, dis shows hw much he loves her...n da way she was looking at him, wen he was scolding her...So ho gaya shuru jealousy track...so goin 2 enjoy disHope u will enjoy it.....Uh...da song...dat really made me cry...felt really bad 4 Maanvi...she was trying 2 tell him da truth through da song...I so hope he understands He will,, thanxx 4 liking the song.....Again Amazing choice of song...LUVD IT thanxx partner...Thnk u so much 4 dis update n 4 da Pm Anchal di...plz Anjali Di, continue real soon huhYeah will do fast.....I'll b late again i guess,Koi bat nahi fb pr bol bol kar pareshan kar dungi.. tou jaldi comment de dogi..😆😆 fir bhi update soon PartnerYeah i will...thnk u..😊


Read in purple...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Artii159

Meli pyaali dii conglatulation...4 completing 100 pgs...we love u di...partner update kab dogi? take ur tym 2 recover though...congrats meli Dii


Awww partner thank u so much... i also love u all... may b tommorow.. i know buhat dair hogae... par aaj precap tou de dungi... Thank u again meli partner😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nanditam2107

I knew it this new guy will go all lattooo over manvi & virat will feel jealous!!!😆

I hope this jealousy works & unite virman for forever!!!!!

Rohan is though very sweet, but of course nobody can take our virat's place!!!!😉

again the update was great & in the last it was so damn full of emotions!!!!!😊

Do update soon!!!


Hey dear... yeah ladka hai aur inni pyaari mannu hai.. lattoo tou hoga hi...

Jealousy ya twist???? wait n watch 😉😉

Yeah no one...

Thank u so much...

Will update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi guys.. dun take me wrong.. Actually Anchal is not here she is gone to tour so yeh Anji meko pakar kar le aayi 😆😆... Ufff itne saare comments k replies likhwa diye.. n ab precap b likhwaegi.. uf... hahahhahaha sorry sorry just kidding...🤣🤣

M her cousine.. guys she is recovering so dun worry about her,, she will cum after sumtime...

Anjali saying...
Thank u so much guys.. 4 liking my story.. m really very happy that u liked this story this much... bari speech next thread.. if yeh story wahan tak puhanchi tou😆😆... Khair... i didn't knew that it completed 100 pages. but Khushi (Niaksharma) told me.. thanxx to her... Hope u all understood my di's writting n now hope that u also understood Sanjana's writting.. Miss u all guys very much.. will cum soon... Thank u...

Okay now guys back to me sanjana😆😆.. Preacp in sumtime.. Thank u,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Precap...

Rohan: Bhabhi aap ne maanvi ko kahin dekha?? I mean buhat deir se dikh nahi rahi...

Jeevika: Han rohan me b..
She was cut off by virat..

Virat: Bhabhi aap ko bhai bula rahe hain...

Jeevika: (nodded).. han me abhi aae..

Rohan: bhabhi u carry on.. me dekh lunga..

She nodded n left from there.. n now only Rohan n Virat were there..

Rohan: (To virat): Me abhi aata hun..

He stopped on his voice..

Virat: Jo karne ki soch raha hai use bhul ja...

He turned towards him..

Rohan: (confused) matlab???

Virat: Maanvi se door rehna...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome one...
Continue when u feel to do that..
Nd
take care..
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Posted: 12 years ago
The precap is amazing!
Where is manvi??
continue soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum precap dear...M luving this jealous n possessice Virat...
Cont soon n thnx fr the pm!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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precap was brilliant
thanks for the pm

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