Virmaan : U hv 2 come bck-idnm : 2 : Part-74 + NOTE - Page 94

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013



haww your one hand is injured but how when why?
plz dear take care and i was just kidding
so don't need to type first take care of your hand😭


hey don't worry..
Its normal fracture on my left hand..
Nd i used my right hand..
I m all time on rest so i can updated...
Now seriously going to type..
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-74
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GUYS.. FIRST ONE REQUEST..GO ND CHECKE Eleanor.Audrey's STORY..SHE POSTED CHARACTER SCATCH IN HER STORY..PLZZ...
NOW TIME TO UPDATE..
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IT's morning now..
In maanvi's room..its 8 in morning..with wind's touch on her face she wake up..she still sitting on floor near the window..her eyes was heavy due to the crying..she slowly opened her eyes nd looked around..then she remember abt last night..she hurriedly stood up from floor nd open the window..she worriedly looked for him bt he was not there..she feel relief that he was not in garden in whole night..otherwise his health get weak just then she remember what she did last night..she told him to leave nd also she hurts him a lot..she get worried nd sad..what if he seriously left?
She imigeatly went inside to wasroom nd come out in few minutes after getting ready..she come out from her room nd walked towards dining area..she was thinking abt him..she reached at dining table nd found everyone already sat on table..she looked at everyone nd gave fake smile..
M-good morning..she said looking for him..bt he was not there..not dabbu..everyone wished her same nd also noticed her sadness..
Vm-aao maanvi beta baitho..breakfast suru karo..
She nodded nd sit on her sit..she want to ask abt virat bt her mind again come across..she say to herself that if he was not here means its batter..now stop thinking abt him..nd she starts eating slowly slowly..
Everyone can see her hiding pain..they also heard last night song nd after that they r sure that virmaan made for eachother..
J-to vn-viren..aaj breakfast k baad hum Dr k paas ja rahe hai..maanvi mere saath aa rahi hai..to tum aaj office time pe chale jao..
Vn-nahi jeevika..main tumhare saath aa raha hu..
Hearing this j nd m get worried..what if he knew abt maanvi's check up also?..just then vm say..
Vm-are nahi viren..actually main bhi in dono k saath ja rahi hu..tum fikar mat karo..tum plz jaldi kam khtm karke sham ko aa kar holi pooja ki preparation karva dena..hum lunch tak to aa hi jayenge..
Vn-thi hai mom..to hum saath me hi nikal te hai..aap hospital chale jaiyega aur me office..
J-smile..
Vm-thik hai..
J nd vm looked at maanvi who still lost in her thoughts even not heard their convo nd playing with food..j sign to vm which also noticed by others..
Vm-nodding to handle her-maanvi..she said with placing her hand on her sholder..which make her come out from her thoughts..
M-ji..
Vm-beta breakfast finish karlo Hume jeevika k saath hospital jaan hai..
M-hear her bt didn't rpl..
Vm-kuch aur chahiye tumhe?..she knew she still in his thoughts..
M-vinumom woh..woh..main puch rahi thi ki..ki..
Vm-ki kya?
M-aa..k.kuch nahi..
Nd again she starts eating..vm shook her head nd smiled at her..
After breakfast they went for hospital nd in 3 hours they finished their visit to gynaclogist nd come returned to home..in whole journey maanvi thinking abt him..where is he..nd why no one talking abt him..may be bcz of her angry behavior..
They reached in society nd car stopped at gate they come out from car..they abt to walked towards gate bt stopped as heard someone call maanvi..
?-hey..maanvi..
All turned nd look behind..
Maanvi make face to see her two enemy..Rey nd vickey..she didn't like them bcz they always used to saw viren as bad guy in society..they also stay in same society nd used to maanvi bcz viren's house was second house for her..in past they try to flirt with her which end up with big fight between them nd viren..bt after they realised their mistake nd apologise to maanvi..after that they used to normal talked..just hi-hello type..
They stopped their jeep besides their car nd looked at her..
R-hey..maanvi..
Vc-hii..
M-hello..
Vm-maanvi tum baat karlo mein jeevika ko lekar under chalti hu..
R+vc-hello aunty..aa..jeevika..
Both nodded nd left..
Vc nd r come out from jeep..
R-how r u?..long time ha?
M-ha woh actually Mumbai me nahi thi is liye..
Vc-haa..haa woh shaadi hui tab se..waise where is ur husband?
M-woh..hai..yahi hai..
Rey can see her sad expression like something wrong..
R-come close to her nd put his hand on her sholder-hey..maanvi..sab thik hai?..i mean tum aur shant?..main janta hu ki hum close friend nahi hai bt hum bure bhi nahi hai..
M-nahi asi koi baat nahi hai..woh actually bahar se aye hai to thodi thak gai hu..
R-pakka?
M-smile nd nodded in yes..
Vc-waise is baar tum yaha ho to holi me aur bhi maza ayega..
All smile..
R-still his hand on her solder-waise tumhare husband ka naam kya hai..aur kab milva rahi ho?
Before maanvi can say something imigeatly voice come out from her right side..
Virat vadhera..
All turned towards that direction..a small smile crept on maanvi's face..to see him..yes..her virat..who looking at them from starting..maanvi's smile getting close as she saw his continues gaze..she follow his gaze nd found he looking at rey's hand which one on her sholder..she imigeatly stepped back nd virat walked near to them...
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sorry for late nd stop here..
Hope u like..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok guys..
As i say... This was last update in this thread... Next will be in 3rd thread nd i will posted that soon... Nd also with precap...
I cannot send link.. So plz... Be in contact...
Thank u..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update ...[:-)]
manvi missing virat haan ..
and rey and vicky are gonna be fun they will bring the jealosy part ..
virat already being possessive ...
waiting for the next update and excited for the new thread scrap me wen u make ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow awesome update.
virat ne correct samay par entry mari .
please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update!! :D Manvi is missing him ;).. And Virat is being all possessive after seeing Rey and Vicky with Manvi.. Loved it <3.. Congrats for the 3rd thread in advance.. Take care Khushi :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update khushi...ahaan manvi missing virat😃...n the last part...jealous virat...eeks loved it❤️...looking forward for next update...will be waiting ... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update she feel sad to hurt him and she is missing him a lot and viren is so protective toward manvi and other side virat get angry to rey and vicky when he see rey hand on manvi shoulder
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ur stories are amazing dear particularly this one I just love it . Ab jaldi see confession bhI karwa do main kabse wait kar rahi hoon.continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooow superbbb as always
update asap

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