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sreshta90

@sreshta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

its superbbb... pain of being apart frm each other was beautifully portrayed👍🏼... just loving it... thanks fr pm...

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

hey Ava it was fabulous OS!!!!!! bt plzzz dnt discontinue 'some things' yarr...😔

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girl_rocks

@girl_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

omg i am speechless this was just fab

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It's Sunayana :) Stella's my nickname

@Stella_8D

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I've already told you that I'm a huge fan of yours (through myeduniya) and now I'm even a bigger fan of yours!!! Loved the OS a lot!!! It's one of the best I've ever read!!!

Love,

Stella

PS Maroon 5 is one of my favorites and I love daylight!!!

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MaebyFunke

@MaebyFunke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Phenomenal! You don't fail to surprise me ever...this was so soo...good especially the part she lectures on not to touch suspicious objects and all..it was so sweet!

But still *A girl with a broken smile* is my fav out of all your works!

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Geminimanna

@Geminimanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hey Ava,

It was awesome. It was beautifully written by an extra ordinary writer, how could it be lame?😲

And I am shocked that you discontinued "Some Things" 💔. Plzzz don't do it.😭

Your story is so strong and gripping. Don't deprive us of such a BEAUTIFUL STORY of VIRAT and MANVI.PLZZZ you can make amendments if you want to but don't stop it.

Thanx for the PM.

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faye.

@ohsehun.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I don't know why. But I could've cried because it was so darn beautiful. I don't often cry- okay, that may be a lie when it comes to VirMan. 😆

But yes, this made me cry...

Perfection. Honestly. This is perfection.

And the song...the OS, everything just fit. It's beautifully done.

"Not that good"- yeah, I don't think so. This is great! I love your writing, makes me envy you. 😆 Seriously, Ava.

Also, I listened to Daylight while reading this, and it fit so perfectly! I love Maroon 5! :)

Had me hooked from the beginning and made me smile, their love is just so strong that they can overcome all odds together.

Loved it! <3

~ Faye.

Edited by ..Labyrinth.. - 12 years ago

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preetipc

@preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Loved it so much .Specially the ending.Watching ur loved one leaving is tough..Love the way u explained everything, the emotions , their actions everything , specially near the mirror ans the one during packing.Heart touching.Loved it so much.Loved the whole Os.

Btw discontinued 'some things'😲.Feel sad because i like some things so much. Pls reconsider.itsa humble request please. Thanks for the pm😊

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Awesome os..really loved it..
The way u described was fab..
Hearttouhcing yaar..
😊

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Ava :) This is so beautifully written. You had me intrigued from the first line; it's gripping. The tenderness, love, intensity and at last, the heartache of letting a loved one go - I could feel it, it was all wonderfully expressed through your writing. And it was so easy to imagine Virat as a Marine! 😳

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