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Posted: 12 years ago
I was still in last update's daze that nw u hav updated the next chap! Though i was impatiently waiting for it! Anu darling u dnt loose to hit the bullz eye tis tyme also,
I m glad u cntinue it wid manvi getting up beside her husband after 3 yearz,its so touchy feeling she was thnking how she had missd hm n what changes her life is experiancing after hs return,i m so happy everythng is going on smooth path...virat hugging her in kitchen n hs face showing the fear of losing her was so beautifully shown!
Ah! My cutie-pies in frame nw i tou love their nakraas n pouting,Sho shweet!
Omg u brought twist in the tale girl, the gun shot,the bracelet mystery...though the gun shot n virats maniac behaviour regarding her n hs kids safety again brought 50 shades memories...i like how manvi wants him to let her in, n how badly she was missing her old joyful virat...then her try to divert hs attention by cmpleting their "Laters" task! I like it she said its better to see tis virat than that irkd n tensd virat...
oh man there are many thngs whch i want to say bt dnt knw how to convey like i love how manvi was happy seeing their kids happily clinging to virat n trio spending time wid eachother...'it seems they are missing virat-their father since morning' i dnt knw bt tis line brought sme special feelings n yeah in the morning she acceptd that virat is the best DAD!
Virat gvng manvi the good bye kiss while going to office n their kids watchng them is so awee...
U again naild ur update Bolt Blue nw waiting for wednesday to get new update whch reminds me it will be our rockstarz bday next thursday so gve us another ur mindblowing update!
Anu nw cming to say a big thankyou n appreciate ur writing to whch none of us cn do justice!
I wanna tell ur readerz (if bychance u read my cmment) that this grl is so occupied bt still she manages to write for us! I love u knw for tis n for my cnstant irritation to u for updates!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome and thanks for the pm
deepika03 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update!!!! its just too mindblowing...da shower scene was too intense and passionate 😉 loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
omggg wat an update Freakingg hot...
first i thought kahi virat to nai marna chahta manvi ko lol...
but ya dats not gona happen thank god..
nd d bracelet i think virat was wid dat girl wen manvi saw him
i hope aesa na ho pata nai wat will manvi do
update asap..n
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow fab update!!!!!! finally manvi nd virat hav adjusted 2gether... god knws who wants 2 attack manvi... nd who's bracelet is dat... suspense is killing me... da ending was hot☺️ plzzz plzz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMGGG I just started reading this last night!!! Omggg am just speechless!! This is such a different story!! Love it! Thr is sooo much suspense and all emotions are in it! Love it! Great Job girl!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey/...
loved ur updatess..
u r an amzing writer 👏👏👏👏
loved virat n manvi's character here..
kidds are too cute n adorable 😛😛😛😛
will love to read more...
thanks for the pm...
continue soon dear 😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is beyond awesome..
Love it all..drama suspense ..romance ...Hot passionate romance...so mayn emotions ..beautifully wirtten... read it twice !! :P
eeekkkss cnt wait for the next update..who want to kill M .. whose bracelet it is ..!!
Do update soon !!
tc !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Anu,
What a dramatic twist, so much drama, suspence, romance and passion. Mind blowing update.
Who wants to kill Manvi? May be there is a connection between the past and this attack.
The way Virat reacted to this whole incident and his care and love for Manvi was spellbinding. But Manvi surely took the lead and diffused the situation.
The way you portrayed Virat's personality transformation was beautiful. I feel so emotional while reading these updates.
Thanx for the pm and plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiya...
jzz read through all the parts of this story...
awesum awesum awesum...
ur a flawless writer...oh god...
awesomely penned down...srsly...
fab job...!!:)
Do PM me if possible...
love
safrena

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