Addicted--virman-SS-part 20-i

Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

This was Awesome...! Emotional Update...! N looks like there is more to what Maanvi saw that day...either 1 is lying...cz now i dont think maanvi wuld b mistaken when it comes to her husband..but love the kids they r too cute n yes well behaved...we would wait for the next as ur travelling...but looking for TLF and umberlla...:)!

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Jannat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

hey ANU
update was great dear
but like manvi i also can't 4get how he slept with differen gals... its not fair with manvi
u portray emotion so beautiful
liked it so much
waiting 4 ur next part dear

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shaimah

@shaimah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

amazing update

loved the bonding between the kids and virat

its getting interesting

cant wait for the next update

continue soon and please do pm me!!

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Awesome update... Now am missing my dad coz of dis update. He is on his official tour. Love the way you describe Virat's feeling. And the way Manvi stand like a independent lady. Loved it... ❤️

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

This is so emotional n so amazing...i think manvi is not fully wrong after all she is not a kid who take such a big dicision whichout thinking once...n virat is not at all innocent...after all he slept so many girls frm last 3 yrs...but manvi never did that...at least she felt guilty of wat she did with father n his childrens...she try her best to reduce the differences btw them...loved the kids they r so understanding...like there 1st official meeting with there father...i think past story is not clear yet...pls cont soon..

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titliluvsvirman

@titliluvsvirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

awww!!!! it was too emotional...plz update soon n dnt forget to pm me...:)
once again..👏

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MadhuChowdary

@MadhuChowdary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

finally u showed up...update was superb as usual...very well portrayed...the way u described manvi's guilt was very touchy...hey...if virat knew manvi is alive somewhere in the world, then why didn't he try to find her and what was all that abt...girls and stuff...slight confusion...except this everything is fine...if u kept these secrets for later..then i will be waiting for that update...thanks for the pm and take care...

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Superb, fantastic, speechless. I rly luv da way u handled da union emotions ,jst awsum...

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Superb update Anu... 😊 ...
really missed u and ur updates... 😊 ...
The update was awesome ...it was emotional...
The way u described was so beautiful...i was totally immersed in it yaar...👏
The guilt of manvi and the father virat ...wow..mere paas lafz nahi hai..sach main...really really loved it...
Will be waiting for next update...thank u so much for the pm... 😊 ...n take care.. 😊

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