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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

When u updt next chap...lolzzz...i know now u want to kill me...kya karu sabr hi nahi hota...pls updt tom

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jayanthi

@jayprabu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Awesome update. thanks for the pm

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Geminimanna

@Geminimanna

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Hey Anu,

It was damn good. It captured my attention from the very first update as it is a very different story of Virman.

As for this update, Hats off to you buddy 👏. It was such a beautiful portrait of Virat's emotions, Manvi's turmoil and their twins excitement. Love you for this 😃, and thanx for the PM.

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

*res

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I got emotional at Virat meeting his kids, so much touching.

I am glad he got to meet them!

Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

was waiting desperately for ur updates nd finally read.nd u kbw wat its more than expected its jst wow ...love it :-)
manvi's hurt nd guilt feeling together plus she being strong for her kids nd how maturely she handles him ..nd virat his feelings for his kids jst love the u explained perfectly their feelings jst commendable :-)
am jst confused on who is right on the misunderstanding thing manvi or virat ...
pls update sooon nd thanx alott for the pm :-)

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Amazing update!!!
loved it!!
The bond between virat nikki & ria was shown beautifully!!!
Superbly written!!!
Plz continue soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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deepika03

@deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

awesome update! just want them all to be together and happy smhow

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

lovely update n emotional too. .kids r really sweet. .thanks 4 pm

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Wow yaar the story just keeps getting better and better
Loved each and every scene specially the ending
Where virat kind of bonded with his kids awesome
Update loved it to the core continue soon and do pm me