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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing story. .cnt wait for nxt part. pm me wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys if U want me to pm U !!
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😉😊 PART 3 😊😛
he cried baldy !! He cant bear that pain in his heart...
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aDil sunta haiTeri sadaA rubaruAb toh zaraBechain siMeri zinda..giSun kar teriYeh dastaan…

Jeena mera…Asan kar..Tu milke yeh..Ehsaan karKahin kho gayaChehanu se kuhunTere dard koAb jaan kar…

Jaaniya..O.. jaaniya…Bas roye dil meraAnsoo palkon peNahin hai bewaja…a..Dil hai gum sada jaaniya

Tujhe paa liyaYa kho diyaIss baat parDil ro diyaKe chaah karTu na aa.. sakeTu waqt haiGuzra hua…a…a..

Tujhe rakh liyaIn yaadon neEk phool saKitabon meIss dil me tuRahega sada ha…Aur mehkegaIn sanson mein..

Raaton mein tu jal jata haiChehre mein tu dhal jata haiTara hai tu mujh mein toota sa…a..

Neendon se jaga deta haiPalkho ko bhigo deta haiDariya hai tu mujh me dooba sa…a…

Har waqt khwabon ki tarah…Tu aata raha…………

Jaaniya..O… jaaniya…….Din kya raat kyaAhat ho koiLagta hai sada…a..Ke tu hai wahan jaaniya

Jaaniya..O.. Jaaniya…..a…Bas roye dil meraAnsoo palkon peNahin hai bewaja…a..Dil hai gum sada jaaniya

Virat in balcony singing dis song aftr reading d letter...

Cryingg..Reality was dat virat wann to meet dat gal..

.as soon as possible

Virat-manvii..M tumhe bacha kr rahunga..N suddenly he saw the pages started falling frm d table...He goes to collect those papers..He saw other pages n started reading them...

.Manvi's 2nd letter..Meri zindgi ek band kitaab ki tarah reh gyi h..jinse panno ko koi nahi khol paya h..Aj m Apne aap ko bahut akela sigh rahi hu..Dii..missing U very much..M chah kr b aapke pass nahi aah sktii..Beeji badi b dabbu chachi chachu..Aj yeh mera pehla birthday h jisme m aap logo k saath ni hu..Par kya Karu..Yeh sab m aap logo k liye hi kr ri hu..Mera toh jeena marna sab uske hath meh h..Vo jab chahe jaha chahe mere saath kuch b kr skta h...

Itne mahino se usne mujhe yaha kaid krke rakha hua h..Vo subah mujhe akela chod deta h..Par raat ko har raat ko..Mere saath...Di aj meri jeene ki chah khatam ho gyi h..M yeh sab aur nahi seh skti Aj m Apne aap ko inn zanzeron se aazad kr dungii..

aapki mannu

Virat get up from his place..It was nearby 2 o clock..He left the room..n goes to the banglow...(actually virat was staying in d cottage near by shanti villa

N went...

He was a little bit scared abt wat will b manvi's stage now..Vo kya kr ri hogii..Then virat stops on the door step of banglow..N saw d gate was open...He went inside..He was scared first bt den he eImagined d pain d sorrow in manvi's wordsWhich gives him d power to enter d door..Hat tarf sarnata tha..Bt suddenly he felt some1's presence near by him...Again same song...Same voice Pehle virat neh us awaaz meh pain mahsoos nahi kiya tha bt abh...

He noticed dat pain...Dat cry in her voice..Which was killing virat from inside..When he stepped forward..She stops singing..N suddenly a loud screem coming from ther..

He got really scared now..Dat was manvi...Manvi-help..help..Koi plzz mujhe bachaooo..Crying very very badly..Virat was running here n ther..Bt there no1..Den he saw..Some1 running towards a room..He ran behind dat shadow bt he fails.

N room's door..Closed by itself...N manvi was crying very very badly...Screeming..Bt no 1 was ther to help her...Virat was knocking d door very badly..Crying bt all efferts in vain..He took up d chair n hit d door...D glass broken..Then he saw...Manvi first tym..

She looks mesmerizing beauty...She was wearing a knee length white dress

Bt something was very unusual...

there was no1 there wiz her bt she was asking for help..

Virat was confused dat who's there..

Manvi-plzz mujhe koi bachaooo..Plzz somebody helppp...

Virat was trying as hard as possible bt he failed..Suddenly d door opened by itself..Virat entered bt there was no1 there..He checked the whole room..Suddenly he heard that screem 1ncemore...N dat was too much loud..He can't bear that screem..

  • He ran behind dat bt no1 was there..He turns to the enternce door..Somebody pushed his from behind..n thrown him out of the house...Virat was scared bt more scared for the gal who Was inside..N again same screem..she was asking for help bt no1 can..due to dat much stress .He go entreem pain in his head..he collapse in front of the door.

  • Nxt morning..He wake up n found himself on d doorstep..N saw d door was open..he don't hav corrage to listen to feel her pain..Which he felt for her..Bt last ni8 he saw her..She looks beautiful..Suddenly his smile faintssN he remember the bitter truth dat she was in pain...

  • He moved away from the house...N went to the cottage..N saw some1 standing there..Watching him..Dat..

  • Day was shambhu kaka.

    sk-virat Baba..App subah subah kaha chale gye the.

    Virat-kaka vo sab chodiye yeh btaiye..k use ghar meh kaun h???????

    Sk-y..yyeehh..kya bol re h aap Baba..Uss ghar meh koi nahi h..Aapko kisne kaha.

    .Virat cuts..Uss ghar meh ek ladki h kaka..Jo musibat meh h..Aap pechle 2 saal se yaha h..aur aapko kuch ni pta..jhoot mat boliye..

    sk-ha Baba mujhe sab pta tha..Maine issliye aapko yaha bulaya h.

    Virat-kya??? Mqtlab???

    Sk-matla. Yeh Baba..Vo ladki 2 saal se yaha kaid h..vo bahut mussibat meh h..

    Virat-toh kaka aapne mujhe haha kyon bulaya h..M usse kaise bachaunga...M toh usse janta b ni..

  • Sk-Baba aap usse jante h..Balki uski iss halat k zimmevar aap bhi h..

    Virat-kaka..Abh bahut ho gya..m usse janta h nahi hu..Toh m usse musibat meh kaose daal sakta hu..

    Vo mujhe nahi pta baba vahi abh aapko pta krna h..

    Virat-kaka aap seedhe seedhe kyon ni bta dete..Aakhir yeh ho kya raha h...

    Sk-Baba kismat aapko yaha tak kheech k liyi h...Abh aapko hi pta karma hoga..

    Virat-par kaka m kaise?

    ?Sk-Baba vo ladki ek buri aatma ki kaid meh h..

    Jo usse pane ki koshish 2 saal se kar ra h..Hat rozz uspe zhulm krta h..Aapne shayad uska aakhri khat nahi padha usme uski sari sachai h...

Edited by vibhubebo3 - 12 years ago
shabsem thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Awesme update. .its becoming more interesting. .thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Finalyyy u hv written it on IF
wese i hv read it but still after readinggg
it again m feelingg same i no wat comingg next
But m still super exciteddd its just an amazinggg
story i luved it
update asap nd thanxx for d pm :))
Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Hey,
I've read this in myeduniya. Cute_Virman (extra info lol!!!) It was good. I'm sure everyone will like it here too :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanq guys :) thanks for such lovely comments :) n aenna :* luv uhh !! Z:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovly update...! Noe virat would rescue maanvi...eager for the next update..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very unusual and interesting update
plzzz continue soon and pm me if u continue
very very very great update and loved it to the core
plzzz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I never saw or read horror stories.. bt today I read.. v can feel manvi's pain.. loved d update... pls pm whenever u update.

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