What the Creatives should do: Future Storylines

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think it's obvious that the ratings have dropped over the last few weeks (or more, shall I add?). And that is due to the filler tracks, the boring plot lines right?

To be honest, we never got VirMan after wedding. Sure, we got the few odd scenes of Maanvi trying to impress everyone and some moments with Virat but that's all. Nor did we get a proper Viren and Jeevika track especially, especially after the whole abortion track.

So here are some ideas that I've been thinking especially now that finally the murder track has ended:

  • I wanted to see Viren and Jeevika want to have a child. I mean, after the abortion there may be complications right? I WANT to see what happens especially even if Jeevika can't have a child.
  • I want a JeeMan track like seriously. Even if it's something silly like I don't know, them cooking together (first thing that popped into my head), something, anything that shows Maanvi and Jeevika together. And that means NO sad tracks, I want happy scenes only okay? 😆
  • Was the music career track just a mere filler? I haven't even been watching it since the end of the cancer track but from reading WU's and some posts, it seemed to me like it was just a filler. Seriously? I want to see Virat have a chance to sing, or at least to do something with his life. I want to see Virat stand on his feet, and I wouldn't even mind if he has to do that whole earn money in this amount of time track. That would be amazing! Maybe he could start a business? A small business like a restaurant or something and Maanvi helps him? Eh?

These are just a few ideas. If you have any more please comment below so I can add it on. 😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thyr really good ideas! I was thinking as well that thy should move on with the story! Though i loved the murder track, but only for one reason, the bonding between sisters, brothers and husband and wives, though maybe a little less bonding between husband and wife, but all four of them were just soo cute! Especially the way they were supporting each other! Really cute!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know right? This track started out as something and ending up as something. Nothing made sense. 😕 I, nor did anybody like it. It was a HUGE filler.

I don't have any track ideas. But I do agree with everything you said!

I agree, VirIka haven't been getting tracks, though I am a huge VirManian, I love VirIka too, and I really want too see a track of theirs. And like you mentioned, a happy one. I'm fed up with all the crying in the show, we've had enough of it during the cancer days. 😆

Though the whole show is based on JeeMaan, but the suprising thing is we haven't been seeing a track of theirs too.

By spoilers, they said we're going to see Maanvi baking a cake for SB (as it's her birthday) and Jeevika and Virat helping out. That would be GREAT to see, some Nokh-Jokhs and JeeMaan scenes! 😳

Hope to see a really good storyline and an amazing track in the upcoming days! Hope Sid Sir does something and the TRPs rise! :)


Edited by Aishu_VirMan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG thank you for this post Zahara! I myself am so frustrated with the way things are shaping up in the show post the cancer track!

I loved all the ideas here! I personally want a track where ALL the relationships are explored. The jeeju-saali/devar-bhabhi/JeeMaan/VirIka/VirMaan relationships; all of them are given equal importance! Since you said show something about Jeevika's pregnancy, they could totally show how Jeevika faces complications in her pregnancy, or whatever. Heck, they could show VirMaan sacrificing their baby for VirIka, if the CVs are that short of tracks!

But mainly, I want any track that has a small amount of logic and a lot of romance and humor <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Everything really has been filler stuff so far hasn't it? The moments VirMan shared after they got married only proved to be a backdrop that the CVs needed to introduce Swamini's past, then they go on their honeymoon and even there you see Karan's presence.. That one put me off to no end. Everything was moving towards Karan's entry in the show and that backfired completely. The writers need to remember that the show never needed such bizarre elements to gain TRPs. EHMMBH had a connect because it was generally real, it was about human relationships, about love and how these things are put to test by life alone.. Our show never needed any real villians. *shakes head*

In terms of the future track, the only potentials I see right now is Virat really trying to make a career out of music, the road should not be smooth sail at all.. he should fall again and again until he earns the fame that he will eventually get and Maanvi standing by him through thick and thin. They can also show how going to jail despite being proven innocent later on effected his image and the music companies grow wary of him. I never liked the music competition track but Sid sir's direction made it work for me in the end, otherwise the whole idea was still too silly.

Other than this, yes they never explored Virika facing any problems at after the abortion.. bit too late for that now but yes I guess they'll show complications where conceiving another child is concerned, introduce a surrogacy track maybe? Although I'd rather go for the idea of Maanvi getting pregnant and VirMan coming to the decision to give their child to Viren and Jeevika. There will be alot of emotional hurdles along the way considering how attached they will grow to the child and there would be that constant war in b/w doing what is selfless and what is ultimately selfish but completely real. Both tracks have potentials of their own.. Like I said before EHM had an emotional connect. This is the only way I see where they can find it again instead of creating characters and plots out of thin air.

Maham.
Edited by ...Maham... - 12 years ago

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