Virmaan :U have to come back-its destiny not mistake: 1 : part-48+note - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update... Loved it... Thanks
Precap is interesting...continue soon dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry guys...for waiting...
I m trying to update today...
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its may be till to late night...
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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PART-13
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V-ACHCHA?..TO AB TUMHARI FRIEND DIKH KYU NAHI RAHI HAI?
DABBU GET SERIOUS..
D-WOH ACTUALLY VIREN K RELATIVES KO ABHI ABHI PATA CHALA HAI KI MAANVI KI JISSE SHADI HUI WOH VIREN NAHI THA..BALKI KOI AUR THA TO MAANVI NAHI CHAHTI THI KI YAHA KOI IS TOPIC KO CHHEDE..SO USNE YAHA SE DUR RAHENA HI BAHETAR SAMJA..
V-MEANS WOH AB ENGAGEMENT PE BHI NAHI AA RAHI HAI?
DABBU NODDED..VIRAT GET LITTLE ANGRY AND AGAIN FELT GUILTY..
JUST THEN SWAMINI CALLED THEM FOR RING EXCHANGE..THEY SMILED AND WALKED TOWARDS THEM..
AFTER ENGAGEMENT ALL TAKE LEAVE FOR THEIR OWEN RESPECTING PLASE..
VIRAT ALSO WENT IN HIS HOTEL ROOM..HE ENTERED IN ROOM AND START WALKING HERE AND THERE..HE WAS ANGRY BUT HE DIDN'T KNOW THE REASON BEHIND HIS ANGER AND RESTLESS THOUGHTS..HE COME OUT FROM HOTEL AND SAT IN CAR..HE REACHED AT MAANVI AND DABBUS APARTMENT..HE STOOD IN FRONT OF MAANVIS FLAT..HE KNOCKED ON THE DOOR..BUT NO RESPONSE..HE ABT TO KNOCK SECOND TIME WHEN HE STOPPED AND THINK..
V-CONFUSING-MAIN YAHA KYA KAR RAHA HU?..MAIN KYA KAHENE AYA HU USSE?..HE SCHRACHED HIS HIS HAIRS..HAA APNE QUESTION K ANSWER LENE..YES..
JUST THEN MAANVI OPENED THE DOOR..VIRAT LOOKED AT HER..SHE WEARING PINK LADIES SHIRT WITH HALF SLIVES JEANS JACKET AND BLUE JEANS..SHE LOOKED AT HIM WITH SURPRISELY..
M-TUM?..YAHA KAISE?
WITH HER QUESTION VIRAT COME OUT IN REALITY..
M-MAINE PUCHA KUCH TUMSE?
V-WOH..I WANT ASK U SOME THING?
M-I M NOT INTRESTED..SO PLZ LEAVE..SHE SAID STRATLY..
V-BUT I WANT ANSWER..AND HE WALK IN SIDE THE FLAT..
MAANVI STEPPED BACK..
M-KAISA ANSWER?
V-TUM ENGAGEMENT KYU NAHI AAI?
M-REASON CLEAR HAI..
V-MAIN NAHI MANTA..AGAR LOG YE SAMAJ SAKTE HAI KI VIREN KI TUMSE SHADI NAHI HUI TO YEBHI SAMAJTE KI UNHE TUMHARI SHADI K BARE MAIN BAAT NAHI KARNI CHAHIYE..
THE WORD..TUMHARI SHADI..MAKE HER BREATHLESS FOR ONE MOMENT..SHE MOVED HER HAND TOWARDS HER NECK AND PLASED HER FINGERS ON HER COLLER..WHICH HIDED HER MANGALSHUTRA..SHE USE WEARING SHIRTS AUR SCARFES SO NO ONE CAN NOTICED IT..MARRIAGE WORD MEANS A LOT TO HER..SHE CAN NOT GATHERED THE COURAGE TO REMOVE IT..SHE DIDN'T KNOW THE REASON BUT SHE CANNOT..AND NOW HE USED THE WORD THAT..ITS HER MARRIAG..
HE WALKED TOWARDS HER..SHE COME OUT IN REALITY AND STEPPED BACK AGAIN..
V-NOW TOLD ME THE CORRECT REASON..
M-ARE U CRAZY OR WHAT?..WAHA TUMHARI PURI FAMILY AAI HOGI AUR ASEME AGAR KOI MUJSE PUCH LETA KI AGAR MERI SHADI VIREN SE NAHI HUI TO KISSE HUI TO MAIN KYA KAHETI?..AUR AGAR VIREN SE GALTI SE BHI TUMHARA NAAM APNE MUH SE NIKAL JATA TAB?..SHE GETTING LITTLE ANGRY..
V-ACHCHA..MATLAB YE SAB TUMNE MERE LIYE KIYA?..TUM AKHIR KARNA KYA CHAHTI HO?..PAHELETO TUMNE MUJHE MAAFI MANGNEKA MOKA NAHI DIYA PHIR MUJHE IGNORE KIYA AUR MERE SAMNE NA AA KAR KYA MUJHE GUILTY FEEL KARVANA CHAHTI HO?
M-U KNOW WHAT?..TUM IMPOSSIBLE HO..AUR MAIN TUMSE BAAT HI KYU KAR RAHI HU?..AND SHE TURNED AWAY..
M-JUST LEAVE..BINA KISI POINT K BAAT KARNEKA KOI MATLAB NAHI HAI..SO TUM JA SAKTE HO..SHE SAID ANGRILY..
HE GETTING IRRITATING..HE HOLD HER HAND AND TURNED HER TOWARDS HIM..SHE TRY TO PULLED HIS HAND AWAY BUT HE HOLD HER BOTH HANDS NEAR HER ANKLES TIGHTLY..
V-ANGRILY-POINTLESS?..HU..MAIN POINTLESS BAAT KAR RAHA HU?..TUM MERA POINT SAMAJ NAHI RAHI HO..MAIN TUMSE MAAFI MANGNA CHAHU TO MUJHE IGNORE KARNA HAI..AUR DABBU KO EK BAR ME MAAFI?..MAIN BAAT KARNE KI KOSHIS KARTA HU TO MUH FER LETI HO AUR USSE DOSTI?..MERE SAAMNE ANE SE PROBLEM HOTI HAI IS LIYE CHANDIGHADH NAHI AAI AUR ENGAGEMENT ME BHI NAHI AAI TUM AUR DABBU K SAATH EK APARTMENT ME RAHETI HO?..KYU?..ITNA BHEDBHAV KYU?..HE SAID ANGRILY..MERA EK SORRY SUNA NAHI JATA AUR VAHA USKE SAATH DINNER AUR LUNCH..KYU?..USE MAAF KARSAKTI HO MUJHE KYU NAHI?..
MAANVI GET ANGRY ON HIM..HE PUSSED HIM BACK FORCEFULLY..
M-ANGRILY..-KYU KI WOH DABBU HAI..MR VIRAT VADHERA NAHI..USNE MERI LIFE K SAATH NAHI KHELA..TUMNE KHELA..USNE MUJHE DHOKA NAHI DIYA TUMNE DIYA..USNE USNE NASHE KI HALAT ME MUJHE KISS NAHI KIYA..USNE MUJHE IS SAMAJ K SAMANE AKELE NAHI CHHODA YE JAWAB DENE K LIYE US DIN MERE SAATH MANDAP ME KON THA..USNE MUJHSE YE NAHI KAHA KI YE SHADI SIRF EK MISTAKE HAI..USNE MUJHE ITNA HURT NAHI KIYA JITNA HURT TUMNE KIYA..
TEARS SLIP FROM HER EYES..
M-TUMNE MAAFI MUJHSE ISILIYE NAHI MAANGI KYU KI TUM DIL SE GUILTY THE..LEKIN IS LIYE MANGI KYU KI TUMHE LAGA KI WOH EK MISTAKE THI JISE SORRY BOL K THIK KARDOGE..
VIRAT JUST STARING HER AND TRY TO UNDERSTAND HER..
M-DABBU KO MAAF KARNA MERA FAISLA THA..AUR TUMHE USSE KOI MATLAB NAHI HONA CHAHIYE..WOH KUM SE KUM APNI GALATI KA DIL SE AHESAS HAI..AUR USKI GALTI KYA THI APNE FRIEND K LIYE BINA SOCHE KISIKO KIDNAP KIYA..USE NAHI PATA THA KI TUM MERE SATH MANDAP ME BAITH JAOGE..SIRF MUJHE SABAK SIKHANE K LIYE..WOH JAISA BHI TUMHARI TARAH CONFUSE NAHI HAI..TUMHARI TARAH RISTO SE BHAGTA NAHI HAI..AUR MAIN YE TUMHE EXPLAIN KYU KAR RAHI HU KYU KI TUM KHUD NAHI JANTE KI TUMHE PARESHAN KYA KAR RAHA HAI..APNE BANAYE RULES TUMHE CONFUSE KAR RAHE HAI..VARANA TUM YAHA KYU ATE?
BOTH LOOKED AT EACHOTHER...
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CONVO CONTINU...
PLZ COMMENTS...
PyaasiChudail69 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Omg this was so dam good untill now i wasn't aware wat is maanvi going through
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
waooo its amazinggg...yr
i hv just read all parts
nd i just luved it plzzz
update asap nd plz
pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!! Outstanding update!!
Loved it!! Loved how virat was jealous of dabbu!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!
Plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice update
conv btw virmaan was amazing
pls cont soon
Edited by cukky - 12 years ago
angel_sofia thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow it was amazing update...thanks
Loved virman's convo...!!
continue soon dear cant wait...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the uppdate. Intense update.Loved the way u portrayed her feelings .Love this update so much.Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww its awesome updt yar...manvi still wearing her mangalsutra...i even like her outburst...perfect chap...cont soon n give precap

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