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PART-12
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Maanvi didn't know why but she cannot say stop dabbu to stop talking abt virat.she feel sad for him..dabbu told her everything abt virat..his personal and professional life..dabbu also didn't know but first time he revealed virats life in front of someone..specialy maanvi who is make friends just before some hour..whole journey the talked abt eachothers family..dabbu drop her at virens house..both injoyed eachothers company..after say thanks maanvi walked into gate..dabbu looked at her leaving and smile..
D-kash ek din asa aye ki main humesha k liye parjai bula saku..and then he looked up..
D-baba ji aapko kya lagta hai?..aap bhi confuse ho?..koi ni main wait karlunga..and he again looked towards her who already entered in gate..he start car and drovo towards his apartment..
After some days..
In Mumbai-
vadhera family came in Mumbai for virikas engagement..3 days ago virens family went to chandighadh for asked jeevika hand for viren after virat and jeevika explain everything them except maanvi and virats marriage..they didn't know abt that marriage and maanvi requested them that till to virikas marriage no one told them abt that bcz its effected on virikas marriage and in her mind she didn't want to tell them that what virat done with her..infact for virikas smooth life she decided to leave along not with vinu maa..and also she refuse to go chandighadh with virens family..
For todays function dabbu booked one nice hotel hall for engagement..they all are waited for virens family..virat looking for arrangements which already done by dabbu as he know..vadheras reached at Mumbai in afternoon and they stay in same hotel..all reached at hall..virat already visited this plasea due to her music lonch party..all are present in hall..jeevika wearing pink lahenga with diamond jewellery..she sat on couch with her mother..dadu,chachu,sia,shlok and swamini are busy with gusts..virat called dabbu for asking him that why was he late..he told him that he was just parked the car..he come with virens family..after call virat told everyone that virens family reached at the hotel..they reached here any minute..they come near to door for wel come their..virat desparitly looked towards door..he didn't know why but he waited for her..he want to see her..talked to her..he tried many times to not thinking abt her but next moment she comes in his mind with question..why didn't she come with virens family to chandighadh..yes viren asked her many times her to come with them but she refused..jeevika told this to virat..virat know that perhaps bcz of him she avoid to came chandighadh..but today he want to her come so he apologies her for his mistake..even in those days he didn't taked more with iliaena..he losted in his thought when he saw virens family reached at door..he come out in present and wel comed their with smile..he noticed viren still not like him very much but he gave him small smile..all are entered in hall and walked towards ladies..vadheras and kapoor family meet to eachother..virika takes blassing from eachothers family and sat on chairs..virat still looking at door..he saw dabbu entered in door..he looked at him around but he also come alon..dabbu come to him..
D-in teasing tone-are yaar tu kaha khoya hua hai?..ladke vale aa gaye hai yaar aur tu yaha door pe khada hai kya baat hai?
Virat looked at him and plased his hand around his sholder..
V-are yaar tu mujhse kahe raha hai ki main khoya khoya hu lekin tu ab tak kaha tha?..tujhe to humare saath hona chahiye aur tu ladke valo k saath aa raha hai?
D-are yaar kal se lekar subah tak yahi to tha..ladki valo ki taraf se sari preparation karvai yaar..aur abhi ladke valo k saath aa gaya..ab dono taraf se farz banta hai yaar..smiled..
They walking towards family..
V-matlab..confusingly
d-yaar ek tu hai aur taraf maanvi..are waise Maine tujhe bataya nahi na meri aur maanvi ki dosti ho gai hai balki kafi achchi dosti ho gai hai..he smiled
v-kya?..aur tu mujhe ab bata raha hai?..and he removed his hand and they stood in one corner..
D-yaar..woh kya hai na ki pahele to sirf friend bane phir na maanvi viren k ghar jyada din rahena nahi chahti thik kyu ki yaha sabko lagta tha ki unki shadi ho chuki hai aur shayad ek hi ghar me rahene se problem ho sakti hai..to tujhe yaad hi hoga jis din tumlog vapish chandighadh gaye the usdin woh kisi kam se bahar gai thi..
V nodded
d-woh apne liye rent pe ghar dekhne gai thi..baad me jab viren aur uski family kon pata chala woh naraz bhi hua lekin maanvi ne unhe mana liya aur apne naye ghar me shift ho gai Jo coincidently mere hi apartment me hai..thik mere upar k floor pe..
V-aur phir?
D-phir kya?.dosti to ho chuki thi..phir hum achche dost ho gaye specialy tab jab viren ki family chandighadh aai thi hum almost lunch aur dinner saath me hi karte the aur tujhe pata hai ye puri preparation bhi usine karvai hai kal se hum saath hi to the..smiled
virat didn't know why but he didn't like it he feel jealous after hearing all this...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Viraat jealous from dabbu lol
It is getting very interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PRECAP-
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M-SHOCKING-TUM?...TUM YAHA KYA KAR RAHE HO?
VIRAT WALKED INTO HOUSE...MAANVI STEPPED BACK WITH HIS EACH STEP...
V-TUM ENGAGEMENT ME KYU NAHI AAI?
MAANVI TURNED AND LOOKED AWAY..
M-JUST GET OUT...
VIRAT TURNED HER FORCEFULLY TOWARDS HIM..
V-TUM VAHA KYU NAHI AAI?
M-TUMSE MATLAB?
V-HAI..AGAR TUM YE MUJHE GUILTY FEEL KARVANE K LIYE KAR RAHI HO TO TUMHE ASA KARNE KI KOI JARURAT NAHI HAI..MAIN MAAFI MANG CHUKA HU..
M-I DON'T CARE TUM KYA SOCHTE HO..I DON'T WANT ANYTHING FROM U..
V-YEAH..WHY NOT..U CAN FORGIVE DABBU AND BE A FRIEND WITH HIM..BUT ME?...MUJHE MAAFI MANGNE KA MOKA TAK NAHI DE SAKTI...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update and loved his jealousy.so cute😳.Loved this FF. it is one of my fav.Love the way story flows.U r an awesome writer.keep up the good work dear.and do continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey m a silent reader...bt I mst say m in love wid dis story...u r an awesome writer yr...m waiting for d update...nd d promo is sounds interesting...can't wait ...update fast...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preetipc

Loved the update and loved his jealousy.so cute😳.Loved this FF. it is one of my fav.Love the way story flows.U r an awesome writer.keep up the good work dear.and do continue soon😊


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thanks..
Nd i will
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweettasi

hey m a silent reader...bt I mst say m in love wid dis story...u r an awesome writer yr...m waiting for d update...nd d promo is sounds interesting...can't wait ...update fast...


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hey..
Thank u so much...
I will try...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.. Loved it.. I loved Jealous Virat.. Precap is very good.. Cant wait for Virman meeting.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri


Awesome update.. Loved it.. I loved Jealous Virat.. Precap is very good.. Cant wait for Virman meeting.. 😊


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thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update!!
Love jealous virat!!!
Precap looks awesome!!
Plz update soon, can't wait 4 the next part!!

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