Virmaan :U have to come back-its destiny not mistake: 1 : part-48+note - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-14
Maanvi sit on couch and closh her eyes,clutched her palm tightly,virat staring at her..he realize that she is right,he was confuse with his past and now he is confuse with his present feelings,he stepped towards her
V-emotionaly-mujhe laga tumhe bhi humari shadi se koi farak nahi padta..tumhare liye bhi woh sirf ek mistake hai?
Maanvi opened her eyes and stood in front of him
M-little angrily-nahi padta..mujhe koi farak nahi padta kyuki sach woh shayad woh mistake hi thi..lekin mere liye woh ek asa rista hai Jo uhi banaya ya toda nahi jata..mana main ek modern century ki independent ladki hu lekin phir bhi mere liye riti riwajo se ki gai shadi utni hi maine rakhti hai jitni shayad 10th century ki kisi ladki k liye rakhti hai..mujhe nahi tumse kabhi matlab tha n hogo..nahi koi ummid hogi..
V-janta hu..lekin is k liye apno se dur kyu ja rahi ho?..viren se..apni vinu maa se..aaj pure function me woh udash the..
Maanvi looked at him surprisely..
M-tumhe kaise pata vinu maa k bare me..i mean Maine kisiko bhi nahi bataya..to phir..achcha..iska matlab tumne us raat humari bate suni thi?..aur isiliye tumne maafi mangi?..main sahi thi tum kabhi dil se sorry nahi the..
Virat shook his head negatively..
V-no..us raat Maine baate suni jarur thi lekin Maine maafi dil se mangi thi..
M-jo bhi ho..i don't care..tum yaha ye janne aaye the ki meine dabbu ko maaf kar diya lekin tumhe kyu nahi?..to i guess tumhe answer mil gaya hai..tum ja sakte ho..
V-lekin main bhi sorry bol chuka hu..aur chaho to dubara bol sakta hu..
M-lekin mujhe tumse sorry chahiye hi nahi..
V-lekin kyu?
M-yahi to..kyu?..tum kyu chahate ho ki main tumhe maaf karu?..jab tum use sirf ek mistake mante ho to kya farak padta hai tumhe mere maaf karne na karne se?
V-thinking-kyu farak padta hai mujhe?
M-thik hai agar tumhe lagta hai ki mere maaf karne se tumhe achcha lagega ya tumhe sach main tum guilty ho to..thik hai..main tumhe maaf karti hu..jo kuch bhi hua us sab k liye..mere liye tum sirf mere friend k sale aur mere ek naye dost k friend ho..meri vajehse tumhari life me koi changes nahi ayenge..done?
Virat again feel confusion..
V-matlab tum mujse naraz nahi ho?
M-nahi..khush..lekin tumhari friend bhi nahi hu..
V-tum jeevika ki shadi se dur nahi rahogi?
M-lekin tumse dur rahungi..
V-thanks..
M-tumse dur raheneke liye?
V-nahi mujhe maaf karne k liye..
M-good night..
V-huu?
M-good night..
V-oh..i m sorry..mujhe jana chahiye..
He left..maanvi closhed the door and sit on floor with hugging her knees..tears slips from her eyes..
M-in mind-kaise virat..tumne us shadi ko mistake bata di..mana ki woh shadi hum dono ne alag alag reason se ki thi..phir bhi hum pure rituals k saath ek riste me bandhe the..tumne mere saath Jo kuch bhi kiya uske baad bahot naraz thi tumse lekin pata nahi kyu tumse nafrat nahi kar pa rahi..ye jante hua ki is shadi ka koi matlab nahi hai..mujhe move on karna hoga phir bhi nahi kar pa rahi..and she again plased her hand on her mangalshutra..Maine jaisa life partner aur jaisi married life shochi thi nahi tum vese ho aur nahi main tumhare saath woh life soch sakti hu..phir kyu?..Jo bhi ho mujhe ise ek bura dream samaj kar bhoolana hi hoga..humare raste alag hai..bas ek baar viren ki shadi nipat jaye tab tak mera Vizza bhi aa jayega aur main mummy papa k paas chali jaungi..
Here virat walked out from apartment and reached at his car when he saw dabbus car come and stop next to his car..dabbu come out and walked towards him..
D-are yaar tu yaha?..mujhse milne aya tha?..smiled
v-nahi..maanvi se..
D-kya baat kar raha hai?..surprisely
v-haa woh usse maafi bhi maangni thi aur..
D-ruk ruk..he takes him back and make him sit on car and he so sit next to him..
D-excitedly-ab bata kya hua?
V-kya kya hua?..usne mujhe maaf kar diya..
D-kya baat kar raha hai?..to kab bata raha hai apni family ko?
V-confusing-kya?
D-are apne aur parjai k bare me..
V-kya?..kon parjai?
D-yaar maanvi aur kon?
V-main bhala unhe kya bataunga?
D-yaar mazak mat kar..tu maanvi se yaha mafi mangne aya..woh bhi itni raat ko..to kya use family se nahi milvayega?
V-tu mujhe confuse kar raha hai..
D-main confuse kar raha hu?..yaar tu khud already hai..yaar jab tujhe maafi mil gai hai to ghar me apni shadi k bare me bata de..
Virat stood up in shock..
V-kya bol raha hai?..tu janta hai mujhe shadi pe bilkul vishvash nahi hai..aur woh sirf ek mistake thi..aur mujhe laga tujhe maanvi..
He cut by him..
D-pagal ho gaya hai?..maanvi ek achchi ladki hai aur Maine uski respect karta hu..Maine use humesha teri wife k tor promis hi dekha hai..hum sirf dost hai..
V-matlab..he smiled..
Dabbu also smiled..
D-tujhe kya laga?
And virat pulled him in hug..after it..
D-tujhe jealousy hui thi..
V-nahi..woh bas ye soch raha tha ki woh tujhe maaf karsakti hai to mujhe kyu nahi?
Dabbu smiled in mind-tum dono pagal ho..ek woh hai Jo sirf teri khushi k liye tujhe achcha lage is liye tujhe maaf kar diya aur ek tu hai Jo apni khud ki feelings nahi samaj pa raha hai..kuch to hai..
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convo continu..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..continue soon if possible..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey awesome update
My poor manvi,
I think she is leave the place after that virat realised
Dabbu is too gud
Update Soon
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

Awesome update..continue soon if possible..😊


thanks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved this jealous Virat.Loved the way u explained Manvi's feelings, her thoughts , her way of seeing relationships and the way u have showed how much Virat is confused. L:oved dabbu.Loved the whole update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
super updt...viru boy felling jealous...love dabbu so understanding, poor manvi but she hv to move on...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update⭐️.. Poor Manvi.. Loved the way you have described her point of view.. She needs to move on.. Loved jealous Virat.. He is really a confused soul.. Dabbu is cute.. Please continue soon.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing...
Felt pity fr maanvi
Update soon
Plz pm me when u continue
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri


Awesome update⭐️.. Poor Manvi.. Loved the way you have described her point of view.. She needs to move on.. Loved jealous Virat.. He is really a confused soul.. Dabbu is cute.. Please continue soon.. Take care 😊


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thanks...
I will..
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princesshelen

Amazing...
Felt pity fr maanvi
Update soon
Plz pm me when u continue


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thanks...
But sorry i cannot pm any one...

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