Virmaan :U have to come back-its destiny not mistake: 1 : part-48+note - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome update ⭐️.. Totally loved it.. I really liked Manvi's attitude towards Virat.. She should not forgivehim that easily... Dabbu is cute.. Loved it when he called Manvi 'parjai ji' 😆..Precap is really good.. Will be waiting for the next part..😊</font>


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Posted: 12 years ago
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HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL MY STORY READERS...
MAY GOD MAKE UR WHOLE YEAR HEALTHY AND PROSPEROUS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...loved it
Maanvi behavior towards virat is totally rite
She should not forguve him tht easily
Upate soon
Plz pm me when u continue
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princesshelen

Awesome...loved it
Maanvi behavior towards virat is totally rite
She should not forguve him tht easily
Upate soon
Plz pm me when u continue


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And sorry due to my phone facilities i can not pm any one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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They buy two ice-creams which paid by dabbu of course..she sit on car banet..dabbu looked at her surprisely..she eat ice-cream just like little baby..maanvi noticed his gaze on her..
M-hey..mujhe ghoor kyu rahe ho?..kabhi kisi ko ice-cream khate hua nahi dekha kya?
Dabbu smiled
D-ji nahi parjai ji woh kya hai na ki aap ne na mujhe meri baheno ki yaad diladi..
M-ek ek minit..ye tum mujhe kabhi parjai ji kahete ho to kabhi woh kya..ha bhaudi right..ye kya hai?
D-woh..aap meri bhabhi ho to parjai aur bhaudi..and he smile..
Maanvi get angry..
M-dekho mujhe dubara kabhi bhabhi mat bulana..hum dost hai aur kuch nahi..
D-i m sorry..aap ko bura laga..mera irada aap ko hurt nahi karna tha..
M-its okey..waise tum mujhe aap bhi mat bolo tum bol sakte ho..smile
D-okey..
M-tumhara isli naam dabbu hi hai ya kuch aur..i mean..
D-mera asli naam dabendar aur dobendor hai..
M-kya?
D-haa..actually mere papaji Punjabi hai to vaha main dabendar sing hu aur meri maa Bengali hai to vaha main dobendor hu..lekin apne friends k liye dabbu..he smiled
maanvi laughed with him..
M-tum bahot interesting ho..
D-aur tum bahot achchi..both smile..
M-aur kuch batao apne bare me..
D-pakka?..i mean mujhse log bahot jaldi bore ho jate hai aur specially meri baton se..sirf virat ko chhod k..
Maanvi looked away then him..
M-nahi houngi..batao to sahi..
D-thik hai chalo car me baat karte hai..
Both sat in car..
D-waise meri life thodi confusing hai..mere mom dad ki love marriage hui aur dono Punjab me settle ho gaye..uske baad meri bahen aur main unki life me aaye..meri bahen ki shadi hua 4 saal ho gaye hai unka 1 beta hai aur woh Delhi me rahete hai..2 saal pahele mere papaji aur maa ki na plancrash me mot ho gai..he smiled slightly...
M-oh...i m sorry..
D-hey kuch nahi ji..main khush hu..kyuki virat mere saath hai woh meri family ki Kami puri kar deta hai..aur ab to tum bhi ho..hai k nai?
M-haa kyu nahi..tum karte kya ho?
D-ji..woh na hum..mera matlab main aur virat boarding school me mile the..aur phir humne high study bhi abroad me saath me hi ki..tabtak hum buddy ban chuke the..apne har raaz share karte hai..humne dekha ki music hi humari manzil hai..bahot soch ne k baad humne America me music training ka tai kiya aur phir uske baad se lekar aaj tak hum saath kam kar rahe hai..virat humesha apne family se dur raha to woh Mumbai me nahi settle hona chahta tha aur uske dadu bhi yahi chahte the to Mumbai se Sara kam handle karne k liye main yaha settle ho gaya..main aur virat saath main hi kam karte hai..he smiled and turned towards her..
He saw her little uncomfortable..
D-i m sorry..main bina soche virat k bare main bolta chala gaya lekin kya karu meri story uske bina adhuri hai..i m sorry ji..
Maanvi smiled and looked at him...
M-its okey..agar ab main tumhari dost hu to iska matlab ye nahi ki mere liye tum apne itne achche dost ko chhod do..ya tumhari friendship pe koi farak pade..hai naa..
Dabbu smiled..
D-Ji bilkul..waise agar tum bura na mano to ek aur baat bolu..virat k baare me hai..
Maanvi smiled and nodded
D-virat dil ka bura nahi hai..bas family se dur raheneki vajehse woh asa hai..pahele woh family k saath rahena chahta tha aur ab dur rahena chahta hai..sachchi woh bilkul bura nahi..
M-mujhe pata hai..
D-kya?
M-kuch jyada nahi par itna ki woh apno se bahot pyar karta hai unki bahot parvah karta hai..jo apno ki care karta hai woh bura nahi ho sakta hai..
Dabbu smile...
D-tum sach me bahot achchi ho..
M-kitni baar bologe?
D-jitni baar mujhe ye lagega..waise virat se tumne ek baar thik se baat nahi ki phir bhi use kafi samajti ho iliaena se bhi jyada..
M-iliaena?
D-haa..virat ki girlfriend...
Maanvi looked down..she didn't know why but she felt little numb..
D-lekin Maine kabhi virat use ek couple ki tarah kabhi dekha hi nahi halaki woh pichle 2 saal se dating Kar rahe hai..
M-aur tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai?..i mean mujhe isse kuch lena dena nahi hai phir bhi..
D-chill..main tumhe bata sakta hu..pahele se bata hu..actually virat ko ye lagta tha ki uske papa ki death ho gai hai..lekin jab uski higher study khatm hui joki abroad me hui thi uski khyal thodi morden hone hi the so usne apni maa ki dusri shadi k bare me socha aur jab is bare me aunty ko pata chala to bahot bada hungama hua..jiske end me use pata chala ki uske papa jinda hai aur kisi aur k liye woh uski mom ko chhod k chale gaye..virat apni family se bahot pyar karta hai..lekin tab se usne apna nazariya badal sa diya hai..woh apni mom se ye baat chhupane k liye naraz raha lekin apni dadi ki death k baad unki sulah hui lekin phir bhi pahele jaisi nahi..uski marriage se bharosa hi uth gaya..woh humesha apni family ko ek dekhna chahta tha aur woh koshis bhi kar raha tha lekin is k baad usne woh bhi chhod Di..
M-kyu?
D-usse chachu aur dadu ki aaps me nahi banti bhale hiwoh saath rahete ho..lekin woh dadu se bahot pyar karta hai..infect sab se..
Maanvi just staring him..
D-so..is liye woh life time relation ko nahi manta ya shayad darta hai..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update...virat noe more abt virat...hope virman become frds soon...continue soon if possible.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.Loved it .Poor guy Virat. 😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: R.Lavanya

nyc update...happy new year


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preetipc

Awesome update.Loved it .Poor guy Virat.😭😭😭


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Loved it!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!
Happy new year!!
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