VirIka FF:Mujhe Kuch Kehna Hai ll Part 6-Page 16 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: angel4luv

Hope jevika confess thanks 4 d pm

Can't let out any leads :P Sorry :)
And welcome :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: shabana20

Aww That Was Cute Of Viren!!...

Poor Divya..little Does She Know That Her Love Is One Sided..& By Viren Asking Her Out Inorder To Make Jeevika Jealous,He Is Unware That He Is Putting Her Hopes Up...
Thanks For The Pm...

Welcome :)
And I'm glad that your liking the FF! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Duggukede

Superb update!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

Update soon please!!!!!!!😛
Thanks for the pm!!!!!😊

Thaaanks :)
I'll update tomorrow :*
Welcome :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: girl97



its really nice
but its extremely short update
btw.. nice story
do update soon
and PM me please

Thaaanks and sorry
I promise next update long wala hoga :)
And yeaaa I will :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: rucha123

nice part but dats not fair dis update was short
want a long one next time update soon :)

Thaaanks and I'm extremely sorry :)
Next one will. Be long pakka :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: ElmWizard5015

Sssuuupppeeerrrbbbn !!
Love the idea of adding pics
Hope Jeevika gets really jealous nd confesses her love for viren
Nd the way viren told Jeevika that he loves her ... Awww <3
Continue soon ...
Do pm me :)

Glaad that your enjoying the FF :)
I'll be updating tomorrow sooo chillax! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Thaaanks and yeaaa sure :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Virika11

PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE

Thaaanks :)
Yes I will later in the evening :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6
Next morning in the classrooom...
Jeevika was entering sooo Viren just ran and hugged Divya infront of her...


Tears rolled down Jeevika's eyes
This was something Viren couldnt see but he somehow managed and controlled himself...
Viren grabbed Divya's hand and took her to the seat behind Jeevika..
Viren:Divya,you know that I loveee you so so so so much..
Divya:Bimaar ho ya sudhar gaye ho??
Viren being least intrested in Divya's talks replies
Viren:Haaan haaan!
After that the lecture beginss...
In the canteen Divya orders for a Sandwich while she waits Viren waits outside the canteen and co-incidentally Jeevika's dupatta gets entangled with Viren's shirt button.
While Jeevika tries to untangle it..
Vire:Rehne do na..
Jeevika:Kyun??
Viren:Phir tumhamesha aise mere paas hi rahogi..
Jeevika:Khul gaya...
Viren:Shit yaar!
Jeevika:Virenji mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai shcool ke baad canteen ke paas milenge??
Viren:Sureee :)
School gets over and Viren comes and waits for Jeevika outside the canteen..
Jeevika:Virenji do you really love Divya??
Viren:Tumhe toh koi farak nahi padna chahiye kyunki you dont love me..
Jeevika:FARAK PADTA HAI!
Viren:Kyun???
Jeevika:Mujhe Aapse kuch kehna hai...
Viren:Toh kaho..
Jeevika:Woh darasal main ye kehna chati thi ki main aapse bohot pyaar karti hoon...
Viren:Ye his shabdon ka toh intezaar tha...
Jeevika;Kya aap sachhi mein Divya se pyaaar krte hai??
Viren:Nahi !! Sirf tumse! Mera pehla aur aaklhri :)
Viren didnt know that DIvya was hearing all of this...
Divya walked infornt...
Divya:Whatever you said was true Viren??
Viren:Yaa Divyaaa...I'm really sorry pleas try and understand..
Divya;Oh I understood even I dint love you (but she did)
Viren:Ohhh! So friends??
Divya:Sureee :)
And Divya leaves..
Viren hugs Jeevika from behind...


Viren:Finally tum meri ho hi gayi ;)
Jeevika then chudaaos herself and touches his face and says...


Jeevika:Hamesha and forever :)

Sorrry its too late gotaa sleeep...Long commentss pleaseee :)

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