Found You in the Crowd... - Page 10

Fantastic update

Good update..

Superrbbb update.very emotional.virika crying in each other arms.awww thats cute.eagerly waiting for nxt part.how they clarify their misunderstanding.continue soon..thanks for the pmss.

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grt update...
the way u potrayed their feelings r just wondetful...
amazing
superb
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marvellous
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mindblowing
jaw dropping
all these words came to my mind after reading ur update!!!!!!
nd srry fr not commenting befored
but totally luved ur update...
plzz pm me
do cont soon

wow awesome

so sad and emotional awesome update

amazing update..loved it

Hey guys..im back with an update...i like writing so m i updating...rest nothing encourages me to...50+ PM's and 18 likes...fairly unfair!!!its disheatening that ur work isn't really being appreciated..and u feel the update is probably unworthy of my time...

Guys i m a class 10 student and im pretty sure...that everyone here knows what burden i have on my shoulders...so better i gets likes n ur feedback...silent readers its a humble request..let me know what do u feel abt my work...thanks for bearing

AND NOW THE UPDATE...

RECAP : Viren could feel that mixture of emotions..he was dumbstruck'he was happy hearing the first part but the last one pinched him hard..really hard and seemed to be Jeevika's trouble

He couldn't believe he had a son..but wondered what the hell in the world made Jeevika think he betrayed her'and that too with maanvi..he was about to speak when the weeping Jeevika interrupted and said..VirenJi kya mere pyaar mein koi kami reh gaye thi'and then comes the cutest and most soothing gesture..he placed his finger on her lips..wipes off her tears and takes her face in his hands..with a feeling of assurance'Jeevika main bhi tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon..aapne jaan se bhi jyada..tum shaant ho jao'humare beech mein bohot si galat fehmiyaan hain jinhe main door karna cahoonga..par kya use pehle main ek baar Trishi se mil loon'.6 saal aapne bte se door raha hoon aur is baat se bhi aanjan tha ki mera koi beta bhi hai'.Jeevika humare beech mein jo kuch bhi tha so tha..par tumne mujhe Trishi ke bare mein kyun nahi bataya'.uska Peta hoon main..yeh janna mera haq tha'par tumne'..his eyes welled up yet again..and this time he was hurt pretty hard!

Jeevika seeing the pain in his eyes..wiped off her tears and called out for Trishi'and Trishi being an obedient son like his Dad came in running'Mommy you called me..is ur talk over..Bua ji my chocolate now ;) 'he was a way too innocent and could attract anyone with his charm..yet again a possession from his Dad'Jeevika picked him up in her arms and said ,Trishi you always asked me where's ur Daddy..right?? so do u wish to meet him ?? and with great enthusiasm he almost shouted ..YESSS mommy..i wanna see my Daddy'I wanna see him now and hug me'I have missed him a lottt..and hearing this a tear rolled down Viren's eye'he tried hiding it and wiped it off'this was not missed by Jeevika'

She spoke up..Trishi here is your Daddy..Viren..he had been away for work'

Trishi being to immature to make out much..said..My Daddy Mommy???

And Jeevika nodded in a yes'which lightened up Trishi's face and he let out his not so big arms to his Daddy 'a smile tickled down Viren's face and tears began to roll down..its was His MOMENT!!!..his son was calling out to him..he couldn't resist and just engulfed him in his strong comforting arms 'making sure he does not lets him go'the hug didn't broke for a while..the father-son duo were making up for the past yers while their Lady stood their adoring them'.

There were yet many things to be sorted out..but Viren & Jeevika were to engrossed with Trishi that they forgot abt it'.While Swamini laid there observing the Happy Family Reunion blessing the Trio..to her,her illness seemed to decrease each passing second as now her children were happy and could comtinue living happily'

The silence broke with Trishi questioning his dad..Daddy din't you miss me..???i missed u soo much though mommy tried her best to cover up??? Are u angry with me that u went away'???

How would have Viren answered those questions 'Jeevika felt really guilty about her deed'Viren was stammering saying Beta I missed u a lot..sorry I couldn't come 'and Jeevika to make up for her fault spoke up..Trishi Daddy missed u a lott ..and I told u na..he had been away for some really important work and now you go and play..let Daddy rest he must be tired and then you can spend the whole day with him'..

Trishi didn't really like this plan nor did Viren'they didn't wanted to stay away for yet another minute..Trishi spontaneously replied ..NOOO Mommy..Daddy didn't turn up for so many days..he is to be punished now..he will have to play with me now'without any delay'said Jr.Viren very innocently and the smile that the parents had was unfathomable'. Iren readily agreed and put him on the bed sitting close to him playing those small games'and Jeevika couldn't help but stand there smiling 'with the best feeling ever'he so found his Dad and she found her lost love..but the happy thoughts were struck by the harsh one'the BETRAYAL she faced'

She went up to Viren and said..we need to clarify somethings'

You all must be thinking of Jeevika as a confusing Personality here..but there's a reason behind it'Mood Swings u see ;)

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Awesome update!! Loved it! :)