Found You in the Crowd... - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww such a emotional update virika reunion ws perfect than the father son ws jst the best.want to see wht the reason behind their seperation,continue soon thanks for the pmss
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome One dear!
At last they met!
So sweet and adorable!!!
Please continue soon
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee and greattt updateee... keep continuinggg..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nishu!uve nailed it :D
mood swings?heheh :P
update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Holla peopleee!!!
so here im with an Update...im about to end this story with 2 or 3 updates..soo enjoyyy going through :)

PART 12


Recap - he so found his Dad and she found her lost love..but the happy thoughts were struck by the harsh one 'the BETRAYAL she faced'

She went up to Viren and said..we need to clarify somethings'

The coldness was back again….

Viren tried to tell Jeevika to wait for he didn't wanna hurt Trishi by looking at Trishi showing her his happiness…he thought she would stay put for a while..but it din't happen..she wanted to ntalk right now…

So Viren told Trishi to wait for a while and play with his stuff and then he shall treat him with a surprise…initially he didn't let him go..but at last he gave in and let him spare a moment..

Viren took Jeevika by her hand and moved out..he held it pretty much tightly out of rage for acting stubborn…and entering another room..which was actually there room ,VIRIKA's room when they were together..and he bursted on her…

What is your problem Jeevika..why are you being so immature..firstly you say its me and maanvi cheating on you and you in front of the child your acting this stubborn especially when I told you to stay calm for a while and we shall have a talk in a while…You ave changed so much Jeevs..i thought you trusted me and won't get into Maanvi's trap…and how to forget Cheat on me with Virat…you r the betrayer Jeevika and your pointing finger on me!

I always Loved you and didn't give in the fact that u dind't love me and moved to Virat…I thought there must be something behind you behaving weirdly then..sharing stuff with Virat than me….

Jeevika I never thought wrong about you nor did I complain of anything…you kept me away from MY son for SIX years…and didn't ever feel the need to tell me..you wouldn't have ever told me too…probably it was my goodluck or Trishi's fortune that we met…else u had every plan to deprive us of each other…all these years I waited you to return ..but you didn't…..U didn't Jeevika u didn't…and he made it to the floor breaking down..he had poured out his pain , his regrets to her..and now lacked the power to say more..he sat by the chair on the ground with tears flowing down..planning never to stop…and he was rendered Helpless….

While Jeevika was numb throughout…just taking in those heavy words

And then a precious tear made way through her eyes down her cheek on the floor…it was the irony of the situation that the love birds who planned to be together always..who shared such memorable romantic moments in that room..were breaking apart at the same place….they were hating each other..with Walls between them..BIG enough to cross..this is not something they planned for …

Silence took over..it was depressing for both of them….

Viren had already been hit hard and now Jeevika too was injured by Viren that she and Virat…..

It was hard to believe all this…

Viren then got up saying I can't bear u anymore Jeevika….ur not the one I loved..u killed her….

And Jeevika felt as if someone was stabbing her heart continuously…it hurted even more for it was Viren…

And now she felt was the time to come over her pain and break through….

She came out of his words and said..Viren Ji did u say I cheated u with Virat….i never knew u thought so…why makes you think so…I had reasons behind keeping u and Trishi away..i had a reason for bringing u here right now..how can I let my son be with a man who would probably leave him just another moment…

I don't know what happened for a moment that I introduced u to trishi..i should have remembered that u don't love me…and now ur passing the buck..charging me with betrayal over u…and saying this..her head started spinning…she couldn't kee her wait..and let her hand out to get the bed's support…but got her man's hand ….he get her down to the bed shouting her name…and telling her to wake up…he put her down to the bed and stormed out to get her water…he couldn't get anything….

The situation to the two of them was all messed up….one while lost her conscious..the other took over more burden….

Things needed time and explanations now….it was still not too late to get over things…

Viren sprinkled some water on her face shaking her trying to get her back to her senses..and at last the efforts worked..she began to open her eyes….though her head still felt to heavy..he helped her sit up and placed to pillows at her back to support n comfort her ….and she again began to speak….with tears rolling down…he tried to calm her down and rest for a while..they could keep their arguments aside for a while..but she wouldn't listen….

And began narrating...


The next part..coming up in a few hours 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeah I'm first
La la la ala

The update was very nice
Their emotions were clearly understood
V can see the pain in their eyes,
Superbly written
Awesome job
N waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh neetu took my place...its k...😉
Btw i asked u for a long update as a treat nishu...u remember????😉
Ok i'll leave u this time...😈
Cuming to the update...wat do u want me to say????
U r a fab writer n u portray the characters so well👏
The update was perfect...i luvd it ❤️
Cont soon n thnx for the PM😃
Edited by cutevirika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nicely written..
Thanks for the PM..
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update..!!
Continue soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
of course my love is a fab writer..no doubt about that
but y r u in such a hurry to end this yr...ill miss it coz its tooo guood <3
n i love the characters <3

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