Found You in the Crowd... - Page 9

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welcome back you have been missed awesome cannot believe virika have a son too good

Good update

Hey dis is first tym im reading ur story .such a beautiful story .all the updates r beautifully describes.jeevika emotions r well written.amazing awesome superb story .continue soon.as i hv added u in my buddy list so plsss sent me pms also.thank u .continue soon

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amazing update

ok guys im back with an update ..a little long one ;)

but its really disappointing to see the response...it doesn't makes me feel like updating...i hope to see a better response this time..appreciation ad criticism encourages me to write more...would appreciate if you let down ur comments

..thank you :)

enjoy reading..

RECAP...Jeevika was hesitant to share the space..she couldn't make an eye contact with him...but still she had to sit there for the lady who had been with her though all thick n thin..

Jeevika tried not make a eye contact with him...but it seemed to be really difficult.He was an unavoidable personality while Trishi was keen on knowing as to who the man was...

He sat their staring at Viren ...he was feeling the inner bond was was a way to young and immature to even get the feeling,, Viren too wasn't oblivious of the feeling..it was Mutual..

there was an urge to talk..be it for Virika or Viren and Trishi...AND finally the silence was broking by Jr.Viren...asking the stranger.."uncle aap kon ho..aur mere mere bua ke ghar kyun ayee ho..."

Viren's eyes shot up hearing him say his BUA'a stream of questions ran through his mind..he so needed to have a talk with Jeevika'to help himself out..he rose from his position beside Swamini ..and was so agile that he made everyone look at him..he said badi maa mujhe Jeevika se baat karne hai, kya main do min isse bahar leja sakta hoon and it was jeevika's turn to shot up looking at the Man..she turned her face within two seconds of her glare and said'mujhe kisse se koi baat nahi karne..

And an almost about to start..was interrupted by Swamini..who in her quiet weak voice said..Trishi beta..aap please thodi der bahar jaa kar tv dekho..phir main aapke bula lungi aur aapke liye chocolate bhi mangva dungi'and Trishi like an obedient child..similar to his docile Daddy went out leaving them all alone..Jeevika was not so happy hearing this while Viren awaited his answers..

Swamini managed sitting up with Virika's help and said..Jeevika "samay aa gaya hai kit um aapne chupi todo'please Viren ko sab kuch sach sach bata do'yeh uska haq hai..aur agar tum aisa nahi kar sakte to majbooran ujhe aapne kasam todne padegi..main aur naji she sakte'"

Jeevika fumbled and said..bua ji please ..main un baton ko dohrana nahi chahte'and her tears welled up in her bi glittering eyes..Viren was too eager to know what was this code language '

He with all rage spoke up..yahaan ho kya raha hai..main yeh jaana deserve karta hoon'he was filled to the brim and couldn't control anymore..a tear rolled down his eye and he said..jeevika tum mujhe itne jaldi bhol gaye..life mein aage baad gaye..maine har din ..har pal tumhe yaad kiye,,tumse har din milne ke liye tadpa hoon main..par shayad tumne kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya hi nahi tha..aur agar kiya bhi ..to voh itna kamzoor tha ki bas ek jhatke mein toot gaya..kyun jeevika KYUN??? The room echod with his cry..

She was all numb'she was standing at the point where she never wanted to be..she had to speak now'he deserved an explanation '

With tears rolling down Jeeviaka said'Vi..Viren..Virenji'and this was enough for her to burst into cries...

The soul mates were crying their heart out'they had been missing each other and now all they desired for was to be in each other's embrace'

Jeevika being the weaker vessel ran to hug her beloved Virenji'she held him tightly Jeevika though planned not to melt down ..couldn't keep upto it..she at the back of her mind knew she won't be able to control herself when she confronts him'and he responded with equal passion..this was their Need now'and after sharing each others shoulder for those eternal minutes'they let the eyes do the talk..Viren could surely see the love but he demanded a clear picture..and this demand didn't went unnoticed..

Jeevika said..Virenji main aapse bahut pyaar karte hoon..karte tis aur hamesha karte rahungi'maine bhi in 6 saalon mein aapko har pal..har lamhaa yaad kiya hai..aur aapke siva main kisse aur ke bare mein sooch bhi nahi sakte..aap mere saans ho..mere dhadkan ho..jiske bina rehna mujhe gawara nahi'

Yeh mai hi jaante hoon ki maine yeh 6 janmoon jitney saal kaise bitaye hain aapke bina'aur rahi baat mere aage baad jaane ki..Virenji main wahin hoon..aaj bhi..aage toh aap bad gaye..Trishi aapka beta hai..humara beta..jisse mujhe dekaar aap maanv ke sath chale gaye..mujhe dhoka de gaye..

Viren could feel that mixture of emotions..he was dumbstruck'he was happy hearing the first part but the last one pinched him hard..really hard and seemed to be Jeevika's trouble!

PRECAP'Viren and Jeevika sharing an eye lock...

OK guys..i guess this is a bit long...more to come :) ..please hit the like button and leave your feedbacks..your comments shall decide if i'll continue or not :)

What was a very emotional one dear!

Amazing update!!
Finally everything is cleared in b/w virika!
Very well written! Continue soon and plz pm me! :)