Virika SS:U R Special!!Last upd pg6

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virika_15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Hey guys!!

Thnku for the lovely comments and for reading it.I really appreciate it!

I know,many ppl r not reading and liking my story,cuz seeing the number of comments and likes,it's easily proven.I have tried to make the story good n interesting,rest depends on u!

I have posted four parts,will be posting the last or second last part,today it self! I will try to wind up the story today only!

Sorry but I won't be sending the pms for the next updates!

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SJ6...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

wooow so lets see how viren finds them and gets tjem back in his life..
quick update plz
xxx

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ashna1406

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

omfg!!!superb!!!

continue soon

n dont forget to pm me 😊

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Superb very different continue soon n thanx 4 d pm

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vishwa patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

amazing update😊

plz continue soon

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virika_15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

I will,be posting the next part shortly, n then I m down ith this SS!

Edited by kinha_4_ever - 12 years ago

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mariarauf48

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Frankly speaking this is one of the best story u ve ever read i just loved ur convept do cont soon n dont be upset abt the comments cz dete r many silent readers even i write a dtory n i know but keep writting u r story is just awesome

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sara arif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Firstly, my exams are going on and because it is a weekend i'm commenting, i'm so sorry i won't be able to comment in between the updates but when my exams finish i'll tell you what i think about your updates, lovely concept and a bit emotional too, uhh maya maya , what will we ever do with you? i'll make sure i leave a like for you to see i've gone through, well written👏

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virika_15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

After two years
Viren!
Ji badi maa
Kahan ja rehe ho tum
Badi maa kuch kaam tha,use silsila mein ja raha tha
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Vanshika,viren ki zindagi kitni khali hogayi haina
Ji di,viren bohat badal gaya hai
Lekin,ateet mein jo kuch bhi hua,hum wo badal tou nehi sakte na,viren ko use bhol ke age bherna hi hoga
Di jisse app pyaar kerte ho,use itni asani se nehi bhulaya ka sakta!

Viren sat in the dark room,his eyes closed.He recollected all tht happend exactly two years ago from today! He had met jeevika,he came to know abt his daughter,n then before he cud do anything jeevika left him!
Once again,she didnt trust him!
N why shud she? Wht had he done to win her trust? He had always broken it! He felt like a loser because he had lost everything he had in the past two years!
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Mamma!!
Hey angel! How was ur first day of class 1?
It was soo good! I made many new friends and my teachers were so good with me!
Aww thts amazing my little princess!!
Mamma,my maam said i looked like my daddy's little girl! She said my father must be very loving!
Angel,forget abt it! Lets just do ur homework!
Mama,everyone's prents came to pick them up from school today!
So? I too came,right?
Yeah,but my daddy didnt come!
Mamma why is god so unfair with us?Everyone has a dad,why not me?M i tht bad?
Shush..ur the best in this world! Who says u dont have a dad,i know where ever ur dad is,he must be always there with u! N i know,he loves u tons!
Even more then u?
Humm..even more then me!
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Viren...i miss u!!
Why god?why? Did u do this with me? U stole away all my happiness,my viren! U knew i had no one else in life other then him but still u took him away,far away! M i that bad? Dont i deserve my share of happiness?
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Jeevika!
As jeevika turned around,she saw viren clad in a black suit!Once again she stood there numb not knowing how to react,wht to say!
Hey!
Hi!
So hows life,jeevika?
Umm,good? Wht abt u?
Its perfect!Cudnt have asked for a better life!
Oh!
Well hows angel?
Shes good!
Must be grown up!
Its her fifth birthday,the next mth!
Oh thts great!
Btw,hows maya?
Maya,she aint there with me now
Wht?
Yeah,she died last year of a terminal illness.
I m sorry!
Dont be!
Wht exactly happened?
Well,to say the truth i dint know.Got a call last year of her demise,thts it!
Meaning?
Meaning,we broke up two years ago
Wht?Viren how cud u? Maya loved u so much!
Not more then i loved u!
Viren left from there, leaving behind a suprised jeevika!
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Hi angel!
Hi!
Wanna talk with me?
No,mama says not to talk to strangers
But i m not a stranger!
Then who r u?
I m yr,yr
Hes your father!
Jeevika,i,i just came here to
Viren i know u came here to meet virika!
Virika?
Yeah ur daughter,virika! Her name is virika?
Then who is angel?
My daughter!
U have another daughter?
Yeah,why?
Wait! It means u had twins! We had twins!
Viren,contol yar,i was just joking!Her name is virika,i call her angel !
Oh!u got me excited!
Anyways,so yeah virika,i m ur dad!
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Daddy!!
My sweetheart!! (Viren hugged his daughter)
I love u!! I love u so much!!!
Tears rolled down viren's cheeks as his daughter called him dad for the first time!!
Jeevika too welled up as she saw the beautiful sight in front of her eyes!
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------Thnku so much jeevika!
Why?
For letting my daughter know tht i m his father! For giving me the best gift ever!
Viren i m sorry!
Wht for?
All these years i kept virika away from u,i m sorry!
No,its perfectly alright! I deserved it!
No u didnt deserve it! Viren i knew tht it wasnt ur fault,u never dumped me but i just cudnt forget everything
I understand jeevika! Even i knew j were not wrong but
The thing is our egos!
N maya!
Viren plz forget abt her! She loved u!
She didnt! In love we give not get!
Viren she was too innocent to know this!
Jeevika r too good to accept the truth!
Yeah may be!
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Daddy,u wont leave me now?
I wont,ever!
Promise?
Yeah!
So why r u going now?
Nowhere angel,i m here right besides u!
No i want both u n mama to sleep with me!Plz!
Ok come lets sleep!
Viren and jeevika slept on either side of virika and slept dreaming abt their life ahead!
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Jeevika!
Yeah!
I love u!
But viren..
Jeevika,plz listen to me,i love u and will keep doing so till my last breath! My love has increased over the years and will keep on doing so!
Plz jeevika,accept me!My life is incomplete without u and angel,plz!!!
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Viren and jeevika took the seven pheras round the fire and took vows to always be there with each other!
Viren applied the red pigment in jeevika's parting and tied the mangalsutr!They got tied up in the relation forever!
They entered the Vadera house,hand in hand and viren lifted jeevika and carried her to their room which was decorated with flowers and candles!
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Mrs Vadera,i guess angel is really bored playing with her toys.She needs good company?
Wht do u mean Mr Vadera?
Mrs Vadera,u know exactly wht i mean!
Jeevika nodded and blushed!
So are u ready?
Jeevika embraced viren tightly!!
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After 8.5 mths.
Viren!!!
Jeevika wht happened? R u fine?
God dammit,do i look fine to u?
Yeah kind off! Just tht ur panting!
Viren! I m in labour!! Rush me to the hospital!
Wht! Seriously! It means i m soon gonna be holding my second baby!!
Hey angel,ur gonna be an elder sister!!
Viren!! U stupid!! Take me to the hospital!!
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Mr Vadera,congratulations,its a baby boy! Mother and baby both r fine!
Thnku doctor,can i meet them!
Sure!
Come angel,lets meet ur younger brother!
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Viren!Just look at him,hes ur copy!!
Yeah! Hes so cute! Thnku jeevika for this!
Mamma,my baby brother!!
Yeah our angel is now all grown up!!

Jeevika we have now gotten a junior jeevika and viren,our life is complete!
And perfect,added jeevika!!

Completed with the SS!
Hope u all liked it! Will be looking forward to comments and likes,thnku!!

Edited by kinha_4_ever - 12 years ago

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sara arif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Okay so this is quick ! wowww! hats off, u took it so fast but yet so interesting , its one of the best ss on viriks, i liked the concept throughout , sweet and si ple i should say, ughh finally maya died, shukar, awie baby brother,virika named after her parents, superb 👏

Edited by ktloversera - 12 years ago

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