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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the concept😊
plz continue soon!!
n pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww it awesome Loved it virikas baby girl
Do continue soon and do pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow what a start absolutely awesome please hurry and continue cannot wait please pm me when you do thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
loved it!!
continue soon and pm me the nxt part😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome ,continue soon n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ya continue soon and pm me ya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was the last day of college.Everyone had decided to go on a picnic togather to celebrate this day!
Viren and jeevika too joined them.Throughout the day,they stuck to each other holding hands,wnt for walks,talked abt their future.
Viren ur sure,u will marry me?
Ofcourse jeevika!I love u and cant live without u!
I know viren but i was just a lil scared tht ur family might not approve of the alliance.
If they dont i will elope with u but will never leave u!!
Jeevika hugs viren tight!
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Tht night changed everything.
Viren plz let me go
No!
Someone might just come in
I told them tht we left and this room is quite away from where they all are camping,so chill
But viren..
Shush..listen to me!
Viren handed jeevika a gift box and asked her to wear.Jeevika hesitated but he didnt want viren to be dissappointed.She went in the washroom and changed.
When she came out,viren cudnt take his eyes of her.She looked so perfect and tht net sari with a backless blouse with just a string.Her beautiful figure cud easily been seen.Viren just stood there drooling at the beauty in front of her.
Viren!Viren!
Haan sorry,i was so lost in u tht didnt hear u! Wht were u saying?
Nothing,just help me tie the dori of my blouse,my hands dont reach there.
Will u?
Ofcourse!
Jeevika stood in front of the mirror,combing her hairs,viren came behind and moved all the hairs to one side,seeing her back!
He just cudnt help it and started moving his hands around her back,sending shivers down her spine.He slowly bought his hands towards her stomach and touched her smooth skin.He started kissing her neck and back and hands!
Jeevika wanted to stop him but just cudnt bring herself to say it! She was loving his touch!
Viren..
Jeevika,dont say anything tonight!Plz!
With tht he lifted her and laid her down on the bed.Settling himself on top of her.He kissed her eyes.her forehead,her jawline and nuzzled her neck!
His spare hands made their way towards her back and waist,undoing wht little was left of the open blouse!
Jeevika was no less,she answered it all back with the same passion.Her hands roamed around his hair and his neck,bringing him more closer to herself!She started opening his shirt and kissed his chest with her soft lips!
Slowly,the time came and viren kissed jeevika passionaltely on the lips,not wanting to let go!
He removed the pallu of her saree and kissed her tummy!
Soon afterwards,they were lying on the bed.covered wih sheets,their clothes lying abt the floor and spent night making love to each other.

The next morning,viren woke up only to find the mess he had created last night.He saw jeevika sleeping by his side peacefully,wrapped in a white sheet.
He hated himself for this,how cud he do this?What will jeevika think of him.Just then he heard jeevika calling out uis name.
Jeevika i m very sorry,whtever happened last night
It wasnt ur fault viren.we both r at fault
Yeah but i m sorry!
Viren we cant change everything tht just happened.can we?
No!
N viren i trust u! I know u love me,u have promised to marry me,i know u wont dump me,after all this
Offourse i wont.Saying this they embraced each other!
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Whtever happened 3 years ago..
Meaning after tht jeevika was pregnant with my child!
She didnt even tell me once! All these three years,she must have suffered so much because of me.N my daughter,she had to live all these years,without a father,without me!!
God dammit!
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If only tht day swamini wudnt have insulted jeevika and put false accusations on her of seducing viren,jeevika wudnt have left!
Soon after she left,swamini got viren married to maya,jeevika's best friend who loved viren and was just playing around with jeevika!
Maya instigated swamini against jeevika and as a result,swamini threw jeevika out of viren life
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Edited by kinha_4_ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
awsome update!
eager 2 read next part
thanx for pm...continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jeevika listen to me,plz !!
Viren let go of me,if u remember it all finished that day!
Nothing finished jeevika! U were the one who walked out!
Yeah! I walked out because i cudnt take in more humiliation
Jeevika,i cud have explained it all to badi maa but u didnt give me a chance
When? Haan?After she had thrown me out of ur house?
Once her anger subsided
Stop it viren and face the truth!U were a freaking coward who cudnt speak a word to protect ur love!I doubt u loved me,u too are a bloody ass who used me like others did!
Ur crossing ur limits now!
I m crossing limits?Yeah may be? But have u forgotten tht night when u crossed ur limits? Love to u guys is just having to spend a night together on a bed,right?u dont care how tht will affect a girl's life,do u?
Wth?Now ur blaming me for all tht happened,u have forgotten tht u too were equally involved!
Yeah i responded back because i trusted u! I thouht u love me and will marry me in future not leave me mid way alone!
I didnt leave u!
U did viren! U did! Accept it and just leave me alone! Ur forgotting,u are married to maya!
But i dont love her,i love u!
But i dont!
Wht abt our daughter? Till when will u keep her with ureelf,without a father?Why r u punishing tht poor child for my mistakes?
I m not punishing her.She is my daughter
Jeevika u cant change the fact tht i m her biological father!
Yeah the only thing tht is not in my hands,ur the father,right? Did u even know till yesterday tht u have a daughter?So how now,ur standing here n saying the she is ur daughter?
Jeevika ur shouting on top of ur voice wont change the truth.She is OUR daughter!! N yes,i didnt know abt her because u didnt tell me!
U know wht viren,i hate u! Leave me alone!
Yeah even i dont want to stay with u here any longer!
Get lost!!
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Mama why r u shouting?
Hey!(viren went towards his little daughter and sat on his kneels)
Hi! Mamma who is this uncle?
Angel,go inside! I m sorry i disturbed ur sleep! Go and sleep!
But mamm who is he?
I m ur da..
No one,just a stranger who lost his way!
The words killed viren!
His daughter didnt knew him,she addressed him with uncle.
Jeevika called him a stranger!
Life was a harsh reality,he had to deal with this!

Good Night Angel,just go in the room i m just coming!
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Viren plz leave!
Jeevika i know u hate me but plz can i just once hug my daughter,kiss her?Plz jeevika! i know i have treated u really badly but plz dont punish me like this.I promise i wont return!
Jeevika just nodded,trying to hide her tears! Viren again failed to understand her! She loved him! She hadnt married over the years because she was waiting for him to come back however she knew tht wasnt possible.Viren was married to maya,she cannot come in between husband and wife.
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Viren went to the bed and saw his angel sleeping peacefully on the bed,hugging her teddy!
His eyes welled up as he saw his beautiful princess,he smiled seeing how perfect she looked! A perfect combination of viren and jeevika!
He went to her and kissed her on the forehead! In sleep,she held his finger,viren loved the feeling of being a father!
He tried to set his hand free but the grip just tightened! He didnt want her to leave her ever!
Just then jeevika came and saw the father daughter lying beside each other.She hid behind the door and captured the most beautiful pic of the world.She always wanted angel to meet her father,know him,grow with him!!
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Jeevika,i was just leaving! Actually angel held my hand so
Yeah! She always clutches to it when she is sleeping!
I gotta be leaving now!
Viren actually angel is not well.She hasnt slept properly from a two nights,so plz dont disturb her.U can stay here with her tonight,if u dont hve a problem!
Viren was more then happy!
Thnku so much jeevika!
Well,i m sleeping outside on the sofa,in case u need anything just call me,ok?
Yeah,i will!
Viren was more then happy,he spent the night looking at his beautiful daughter,then snaps of all her movements!
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Viren who the hell is this child n why have u clicked so many pics of her?
Mind it,maya! U have no right to talk abt her like this!
Yeah right,who m i to u?
Maya ur taking it to a new tangent!Just leave it!
Viren she is ur daughter right?
Maya?
Yes viren i know it she is ur and jeevika's daughter.Jeevika told me all abt the night u guys spent together and also that she was pregnant!
Maya,u knew everything but still,didnt tell me? Why the hell did u do this?
Cuz i cudnt risk losing u! Viren i loved u so much!Jeevika wanted me to tell u everything but i knew if i did so,u wud break the engagement!She was a fool!
I hate u maya! U cheated on jeevika,ur best friend! U shud have atleast cared abt tht innocent soul growing in jeevika's womb!
Innocent? It was a illegitimate child viren! I cared for u and yr family's reputation
Just stop it maya!
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Viren left from there in anger! He had misunderstood jeevika! Jeevika never hid anythin from him,it was a third person who came in between them and destroyed their relation.
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However,it was very late now cuz jeevika had already left and angel too!
Viren was once again left alone!!
Edited by kinha_4_ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing...continue soon n thanks for pm...

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