VIRMAN ff:*Journey of life*link of 2nd thread pg 1

fatima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: nishal310

haww kya keh rahe ho😲

haww apne he tou bola k meny shhaid update parhi he nahi

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Yr 47 likes n 13 pages of comments.. kuch reham kar lo meri jaan.. update do update do...

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preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

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shivali
comment for part 18

loved the update... dadaji and family left for function
And the most adorable Virman cute romance
The way he forced her to utter only virat...hayee

and finally the revelation... Finally Manvi was the lost sister of manvi, now in front of our eyes...
loved how you described the orphanage office scene, so professionally 👏

Manvi and Arohi really shared a great bond and Virat the most besharam asshiq 😆😉😆
He actually brought some gift that was the dress, for her...awee, so sweet of him
So caring 😳
And at last the kiss... hayee was sweet yet passionate 😳😆

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preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

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comment for part 19

Uff entry off the evil raj 😈 hate him 😡
Loved their morning romance or noon romance 😳 🤣
always Virat was ready to kiss her, just a wait for solid chance ☺️🤣
And then the date...
OMG shivu you arranged the date sooo beautifully ❤️
i promise you that i'll give you every happiness of this world and never let you cry. i'll try to be good husband for you and a giid father for our kids. will you marry me awee I was dreaming them while reading...so cute
But I didn't like him taking Tanya's name in every emotional confession. I wanna know if tanya comes back or If she doesn't any day as she was dead, what Virat would do? Who comes first for Mr. Viart Vadera... Mani or Tanya

okk more comments tomorrow...yaha storm and thunder shuru ho gaya comment for part 19 is not completed yet 😉
Okk comment again 😉😆

virat: i can do anything for you which makes you happy (he said passionately)

manvi: hamesha mere saath aise hi rahoge (she asked emotionaly)

virat: forever

aww this lines are so cute ☺️
wonderful song selection 👏 Tumko paya hain to jaise khoya hun
loved the choreography 😳
They slept together on her bed!!! 😳
and then the awkward moment for manvi in the morning 😛
But waht is it he had to head towards Mumbai and she would be all alone in Chandigarh 😕
And this raj toh too much he actually trying to molest her 😡
Hope Virat comes fast to save his love 😕

Edited by preity_d - 12 years ago

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Shruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Balle balle balle !!! 😉
Jiju ji kya update kiya hai 🤣
It's awsome excitement angry romantic Sab kuch mixed ahaan ...😉 ... Well tu meri best writers list mein ho chuki hai ... 😆
It's simply awesome ... De bst
Virman part ws awesome ... ❤️
Aur uss raj ko kya naam doon uski toh Khair nahi ...
Tune update itni jaldi end kyun ki 😡
Yeh lee dhishum sahi hum for doing dat .. 🤣
Jaldi next part update karna warna I will disturb u lk
Hell u now na !! 😛 😆

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#617

Pehli baar spam kiya mene 🤣

Plz update dona.. m dying.. plz... 😭

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: shruthi13
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yippe im firstcongrates😊😊
shivi kya update tha!!! ind blowing!!!😃 oh ho thanks madam😊
i jst hate dis raj😡 hw dare he touch manvi😲 sachii😲
poor manvi kitni ghabra gayi😔 haan yaar
bt is update ka hero was toh virat😉
kya sahi tym pe aaya tha👏 uski entry was jst awsome!!!
aww angry virat😳 luv him.bt bechari manvi bahut dar gayi😭haww😳
virat consoled her so well...
da virman moments were jst lovely...
atlast viren ko sab bata diya😃 and yeh sab hua kiski vajah se meri😳🤣
haww yeh raj phir bhaag gaya😲 yeh marathon runner hai kya🤣 shayad marathon mein winner tha🤣
haww aise end kaise kar diya tune😲 i hate u fr dng dis...haye la itni badi update dene ke baad bhi you hate me. bad manners shruti😡
bt i luv u fr writing such a long nd awesome update!!!❤️ ab ayi na line pe😳😳
ab plzz jaldi cont kar.. suspense bardaasht nahi hota😆
thnx fr da pm..
nd sry fr unresing so late...😛 it's ok yaar and thanks for reading it😊

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Pyaasi Chudail

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Posted: 12 years ago

#619

update 😡

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_Shru_

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Posted: 12 years ago

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