VIRMAN ff:*Journey of life*link of 2nd thread pg 1

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

This superb...loved their romantice moments most...so cute...the morning scene was funny...ohhh goddd this bloody b***** raj...virat will not leave him this time...he will not let him do anything with manvi...u stopped at a wrong place so pls cont asap

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

Shivali...itnaa lamba update...love u ...thank u so much ...🤗...tuumahre fingers pain kar rahe hogee...take care...🤗...n coming the to the update it was mind blowing...awesome...damekedaar...👏👏👏...really loved every bit of it...⭐️ahaa naughty virat i juz loved it...😉...kahin pe bhi shuru ho jaa taa hai...😛...n the date uff...it was so nice superb......virat propose manvi......everything was so beautifully written...⭐️...awwn...main tho kho gayii virman wold main...hayyen the surprises were fantastic...😳virat ne jiz tarah propose kiyaa it was soo awwn...sweet...😳...the dialogues were awesome...
the song was perfect...😃...i could imagine the whole scene in front of my eyes..hayee.....the morning scene was awesome n cute too.....virat"waise jo kal nahi hua let's do it today"...haww naughty virat😉...par is phone kii gantii ne sab karaab karidiyaa...😡😆...
omg yeh raj...😡...ab manvi kya karegii...😭...hope virat jaldii aajaayee...
can't wait for next update...really looking forward...will be eagerly waitting for it...plz continue soon if possible...thank u so much for the pm ...😊

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spoorthy

@Khushi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

hey...loved the way virat proposed maanvi😃...wowww...it's every girl's dream...and that ba****d raj what the hell he think of himself huh😡😡...i know virat will be the saver boy but how?😕??it's daam curious...thnx for the PM...UPDATE SOON 😊

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

ressy

unres

awesome update!!!!!😃

haww manvi us raj ke office chali gayi😲

aur woh raj i hate him😡

par manvi ne acha sunaya usko👍🏼

nd da over protective virat😆

haww bechare virat ko kiss bhi nahi diya manvi ne😳

aww virat is so romantic😳 itne ache se confess kiya...

i luv him yarr😉 nd da song.. aww😳

oye hoye virman romance☺️ par galat tym pe rok diya😳

ha ha naughty virat😉

aww virman separation😭

haww dat idiot raj😡 i wanna kll him..

virat ki hero entry honi chahiye nd he shud save manvi...

cont soon shivi nd thnx fr da pm..

nd thnx fr updating😃

Edited by shruthi13 - 12 years ago

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Dorae

@Dorae

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Wow...such a beautiful and romantic update.👏

Virat and maanvi first date was romantic . The way virat proposed and maanvi's reaction to proposal was beautifully written.

I was laughing like hell when ring was stuck in maanvi's mouth 🤣 and liked her enthusiastic about virat sliding the ring and perfect song sequence.

Maanvi's fear of leaving virat made him to sleep with her shows her fear and virat's love on her.

Liked the naughty virat hehe... But yaar you stopped at the wrong place don't know what going to happen with maanvi, just hoping for virat to come at right time and also show raj his place.

Thanks for the update and for the pm.

Take care.

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Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Wow.. Its dhasu filmy.. Luvd it.. Nd m too xctd for nxt so hope u won't keep u waiting for long.. Update soon sweety..:-)

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manahil arif

@innocentmanvi1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

lovely yar i wish nothing happens to manvi n virat come on time/// plz continue sooon n gayab mat hona ab

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manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

lovely update but scared for manvi, i'm sure virat will save her, plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon i can't wait to read next update...

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

awesome update
loved the way virat proposed her
it was so romantic
and the next morning was even better
cant wait for the next update
sure that virat would save manvi

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#500

Shivi bon 🤗 omg itna longgg update .. Maza aa gaya 😃.. Ab apne fingers ko thoda rest bhi dede 😛.. Update was fantastic ⭐️⭐️.. Just superb.. I loved the banner.. Its lovely ❤️.. Finally Vadheras are out of the picture for a while 😆.. Virman are all alone .. I toh loved overprotective Virat very much.. He was ready to romance with her in the office 😲.. Naughty boy 😉.. But Manvi is no less than him.. She made him fool 😛.. Thier first date was just perfect ❤️.. Loved the way they were admiring each other.. And then Virat complimented her.. Wow .. It was beautifully written 👏👏👏.. Loved the way he proposed her.. Lucky Manvi 😃.. He hid that ring in the cake 😎.. Thats something new.. Song-dance part was great.. And then they kissed ☺️.. It was so hot ☺️.. Loved Manvi's reaction after seeing him in the morning.. It reminds me of DDLJ.. " waise jo kal nahi hua let's do it today " - Haww Virat is so besharm 😆.. But that stupid phone call ruined the moment.. Ending was very very scary 😳.. That jerk Raj 😡😡😡.. I hate him.. Virat bhi Chandigarh me nahi hai.. Now who will save her from that moron?? Hope she will be fine.. Loved the update 👍🏼.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care ❤️ 🤗

Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago