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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Maanvi insecurties were very well written.

I am glad you did this kind of OS, very nice job.👏

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Aashika_virman

@Aashika_virman

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

lovely os...i felt it is short ...its just that i love your works more which makes me feel that even you give a longer update i feel it is short one.very much realistic...every couple now a days who are in long distance relationship will be facing this...virman here really love each other warna when a bf accuses his gf and when lack of trust is seen in his words it is not easy for a girl to explain him..here manvi with all her patience explained him though he is blinded with his insecurity ...loved it when virat immediately after realising his mistake came to her with out letting any egoes playing their game..and how he knows she wont go out next day of their break up..that was sweet...he knows her in and out

loving your os's alot ..thanks for pm.

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Krupaa

@forever_young

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Seriously Nisha, you never cease to amaze me!!

Beautiful OS! And anyone can relate to it so easily...
been in a relationship or not, trust is something very very important in any type of relationship!

Hehe Loved Virat's dialogue when he saw Maanvi!!
Totally Him!

And the song...Perfect for the update...as always!!

Once again an amazing piece of work!

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

hey nisha, hope u r fine now😊..Another os yaay!!😛

The concept is very realistic.. for me the best line in this os - "Distance doesn't ruin a relationship, doubts do" , it is so true..u expressed their emotions beautifully.the phone convo was just perfect.i was really disappointed in virat at the begining, even after 3 years of relationship he didnt trust maanvi..but he realised his mistake n manvi is a sweetheart,she forgave him n then happy ending..i loved it..n the song,its perfect for the update as usual..thank you for the pm. take care😛

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deepika03

@deepika03

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

da idiom goes, 'distance makes the heart grow fonder' while in reality its totally nt applicable at all...gone r da days of unconditional love and eternal trust...nwadays its OUT OF SIGHT IS OUT OF MIND with couples two timing and wid a hell lot of trust issues i think...nw it shud be As Distance grows...hearts either wonder or Wander 😆

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

God nisha i need your autograph how
Do you do it I loved it soo much loved how
He went straight to het aftervhe realised he
Was wrong thank you sooo much for the pm

Keep up the awesome work

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Dina

@-DeeNaa-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

OMGGG the one thing that I love to see on my inbox a message from Nisha! Another OS ur making me crazyyy LOVEDDD itt!!!! Like ur OS's always make me happy Your Ideas r out of this world no repetitions I like such stories like u know typical GF/BF type!! You are a great writer! So yes amazinggg!! I must say u always make me go away to Virmanland while reading ue FF's SS's OS's u are really good at exressing ur words!! Oh and the Song I dunno how to say! I mean it PERFECTLY fits the story! Like u wud think tht maniv is singing tht whn they broke up.. lol..
Ok so I cud go on talking about ur stories but I have written enough and I think u might be irritated by seeing my Longgg comments on every post of urs... Waiting for more stuff! xxx :)

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oriyana

@oriyana

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hey Nishi(As I love to call u)... 😊

First of all, It's my 200th post... I kinda kept this number for some special post... And here it is... 😉

Oh again... First it was Perfect Life(my first love ❤️), where I started going mad about ur work, then break my heart and all the other works(won't write all the names, otherwise comment will be surely longgg, I only want to give a small comment, u see 😉)... But then came the OS Priority which made me mad completely because it was completely different, nowhere near to ur other works... I really think you are an amazing writer(and you are), can write any kind of stories, describing a maniac husband deep in love with his wife, or a girl with a broken heart and her pain, a girl in love near to her death bed, or two ppl who hate the most being married, or two ppl in love realizing their priorities in life and so on and on... 👏

And now, you again came up with a real life scenario. It's the thing happening all around us. I won't complain about Virat's character in this story because it's a real thing. People have their insecurities, no matter how much they love the other person, they end up doubting them because that's the fear in them that they may lose their loved ones. No one in this world is way too perfect to just put up a blind faith. People in this world even accuse God and don't believe in him sometimes(in negative situations, ofcourse)... Then what about a person one loves... It's just natural... And it happens... 😊 I may also doubt my loved ones anytime...

And then came the tossing and turning... when I was thinking that Virat will have to turn the whole world upside down to convince Maanvi, I was quite shocked(but liked it) that they forgave each other so lightly. This is the real part again. People can have their insecurities, but never have their egos come in between them and their loved ones. This ego thing makes life harder.

And again I can say, you never fail to mesmerize me Nisha... 👍🏼 I won't say keep up the good work, because u already do... 😊

And yeah, claps to my super short comment 😛 😉 😆

P.S -Forgive me for the bad coloring, but I Love coloring 😆

**Edited**

I became senior member on IF with this post! It feels great 😃

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Totally Loved It From The Beginning
And How They Made Up Awwrr
Typical Manvi Lol
Thanksz x

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Ava

@SmileXD

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Longer comment when I'm not half asleep, till then loved reading it :)

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If only long distance relationships worked.

I've read/watched/seen in real life that they don't, but only actually seen a few that worked. Then again which relationship doesn't suffer the whole trust issue.

Great OS, loved that he came back for her in the end, proves he isn't an idiot lowlife like half the freaking population (Witnessed way too many trust issues) and also a question on the song..

Have you been going through my iPod playlist or what??

Edited by SmileXD - 12 years ago

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