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leafmaria

@leafmaria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Aww it's so nice of Virat to go to Maanvi, and get back together. Nice OS. Do long-relationships really work?

-Maria

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

EEKK, just loved the overall concept/plot!!

VirMan's relationship was greatly portrayed!! wish you'd do a part 2..!? PLEASEE

-Luv Pari

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Nisha I like your last message... Love you for this only.. I dnt knw you personally.. But I knw you are crazy... And loved this Long distance relationship... And she was eating choclates and Watchin Only If... Dat was hilarious.. Loved it... ❤️

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@say_cheese

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

again a nice work nisha !!!
thank god finally Virat made a right decision..n came in the damage control mode..
akeep a long distance relationship alive is really a delicate matter ..
n only thing it requires is trust but yaar kya karein the fear of losing someone close to ur
heart is sometime so immense that it really overpower the trust ( silly heart )..
nyways u depicted it so nicely that it came out in a very natural one..
thnx 4 a lovely OS. n yes 4 pm too...
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take care

Edited by say_cheese - 12 years ago

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Shadow_kissed

@Shadow_kissed

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

this was completely awesum

in most long distance relationships this only happens

they end up breaking with each other

that only happened

but virman are virman

virat realizzed his mistake and came back to meet her

and he very well knew she would not be leaving her house at this state

and even knew were the spare keys were..

he is damm too smart

loved the ending

they forgave each other

and are back in their relationship

long distance relationships work very well

if they trust each other

amazing os and its concept

just loved it to the core

just this thing goes into my sisters head

she just keeps on breaking up with her f

and then with apologize

the same case as in ur story

she needs to read this os

that might work out for her

this os can make up some hope

do write more such pieces

it was best😊

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garimaksgian

@garimaksgian

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

I must say I luv ur writing. I read all ur os,ff n whatevr it just fab. U shuld try in tvs or bollywo od. U will be great
writer.
Plz keep writing..

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Loved it.It happens most of the times.One thing or the other makes people insecure wen it is a long distance relationship.Love the whole idea of the OS.Loved the way how u described the feelings and how trust plays a bigger role in relationships.Thanks for the pm yaar😊

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Deelight

@Deelight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

goood update... bt tooo smalll😳

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Awesme. .first i thought dey really broke up bt in nxt moment virat went 2 manvi. .dats so sweet of him. .lovely os

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..Gowri..

@..Gowri..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Nisha dear, R u alright now? God! U'r giving surprise packages every other day! Girl, did you write it during any of ur counselling sessions? then seriously i mus thank the Blonde!😆😆😆

I loved the title of the OS..Long Distance Relationship! The word quite stretched out, but the meaning, confined to four simple words..LOVE! Really, Distance doesnt matter in relationships, the depth of the love does! Inseurities aint that strong to disturb love, wen it emanates from the soul within..Jus like the VirMan in ur OS! Jus loved how Virat came down to meet his lady love to make up with her..Thats VirMan.. Distance & insecurities doesnt really matter wen the souls are connected across miles!

Moral of the story : Wen two people are in true love, the world is jus like an aquarium. Four Walls,Two souls, One World!!

Nisha.. 👏👏👏 for the beautiful OS! & Love you for giving the OS an even more deeper meaning!

Edited by ..Gowri.. - 12 years ago