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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-54
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Virat drove car towards airport..
M-virat vaise tumne dabbu se kya kaha tha?
V-kuch khas nahi..bas unka ye beta unki barsi me samil nahi ho pa raha is liye mumma-papa k naam se rihshikesh k anath ashrum k bachcho k liye kuch gifts order kiye the wahi lene bheja hai..he smile
she looked at him proudly..
M-thanks..she slowly wisheper..virat looked at her wipe her single tear and hugged her with his one hand..
They reached at highway when dabbu waited for them..he stopped the car and make her out from car..she looks around..virat took her towards other car..
M-virat hum yaha? Matlab airport..she asked in confusion..
V-haa..woh actually mein nahi chahta ki tum raat ko travel kro..is liye tumhe abhi sidhe rihshikesh k liye nikalna hoga..mein airport akele chala jaunga..
Maanvi looked at him with wet eyes..virat cupped her face..
V-maanvi plz..ab ye daily soap ki serials ki heroines k jaise baat baat pe ashu mat bahao..and he wipe it..and smile..
M-bye..and she abt to opened the car door when he stop her and looked at dabbu..
V-dabbe turned front..
Dabbu shook his head and turned..virat kissed her on her forehead..learned his head on her..
V-apna khyal rakhna aur jaldi wapis aana..
She nodded and smile..
M-i love u
v-i love u 2..bye..
And he make her sit in car..he instructed dabbu for take care of her and hugged him..he told driver to drive safe..driver start the car..maanvi looke at him from window and wave her hand..he also do same..
Maanvi leave for rihshikesh and virat left for Mumbai..
Its two day passed..maanvi ready for going to Mumbai..she come in room and abt to tell beeji abt her leaving her phone rang..she saw virats name on display..she smiled..everyone are present in hall they understand that its his call..maanvi abt to turned when badi beeji hold her hand and make her sit on chair..
BB-yahi baat karna..in teasing tone
maanvi took the call..
M-hello..
V-kya hello?..kitni ring ho gai phone kyu nahi utha rahi thi?
M-woh actually..
V-achcha chhodo meine ye batane k liye call kiya tha ki parth..
He abt to told him but dabbu snatch phone from her and start chetting with him..he answered irritately..maanvi smiled for it..after it all family members talked with him on phone one by one..at the end beeji took the phone..
B-hello virat beta..
V-ji biji kaisi hai aap?
B-mein bilkul thik hu tumhe sukriya kahena tha tumne Jo gifts bheje uske liye..
V-nahi biji iski koi jarurat nahi hai..meine ye sab unke bete hone k nate kiya..
B-waise beta ek aur baat karni thi..agar tumhe thik lage..
V-ji kahiye na beeji..
B-woh kya haina beta ki hum kal Bhopal ja rahe hai 1 week k liye..lekin 5 din baad dabbu k exams hai..isiliye woh nahi aa payega..aur humari ger mojudgi mein woh thik se padhega bhi nahi..mein soch rahi thi ki maanvi humare aane tak ruk jati..woh dabbu ko padha bhi deti kya hai na dabbu ko iske baad college k admission k liye achche number bhi lane hai..tum jab tak Mumbai me ho maanvi yahi ruk jayegi..
V-ji?..he said in question tone..maanvi also looked at beeji with sad expression..beeji thought he convence for this..
B-mein janti thi tum mana nahi karoge..jite raho..lo maanvi se baat kro..
She gave her phone..all are happy..
Chachi-ab shanti se shadi me ja paungi..
Maanvi leave from there and went to in her room..
V-hello..maanvi?
M-humm..she said sadly..
V-don't worry i understand..tum relax karo..mein baad me baat karta hu..okey bye..
M-thanks..bye..
Next day all members left for Bhopal expect dabbu..whole day passed maanvi busy with dabbu..she kept her phone silent for not disturbing his study..
At night she come in her room after gave some reading work to dabbu..she took her cell for calling him..she saw his missed calls and msges..she hurriedly called him..
V-ab kyu call kar rahi ho..he said angrily
m-virat..i m really sorry..plz naraz mat ho..
V-nahi mein kyu naraz hone laga bhala?
M-virat meine kaha to i m sorry..woh actually dabbu ko padha rahi thi aur phir beeji..
He cut her..
V-maanvi maanvi..plz..i know tum busy ho..lekin phone pe bhi tumhe bas yahi baat karni hai?..chhodo mujhe baat hi nahi karni hai..good night..
He cut the call..maanvi sit on bed..tears fall on her cheeks..she tried to call him again but he didn't received the call..she msg him and put phone on side table
next day..
She checked her phone but no answer..she again try his number but again he didn't answer..just then dabbu come and she make herself busy with him..
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i know its short and some rude but till night i try to update next part...bcz after it i m not able to gave update for 4 days...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.. poor virat..please continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update yaar.Do ur exams well. All the best for ur next exam😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys...
I just saw the episode..its amazing...
And my last update before my 3 days break i try to gave till today night...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Update...Waiting 4 the Next... Cont Soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
all de best dear...this part was realy amazing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update ...egarly waiting 4 ur next update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for next update 😊
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PART-55
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Whole day passed..maanvi tried many times to contact with him but he ignored her call and msges..at night maanvi finally called parth and told him to gave phone to him..parth went to him and told him abt her call..he make reason and instructed him to not disturbing him..maanvi heared this all things..she angrily throw phone on bed..
M-baat nahi karni na mujse thik hai..main bhi rone valo me se nahi hu..avoid karna kise kahete hai ab main tumhe bataungi..
She bring her phone and divert his number on dadajis number..
Here virat felt restless..
Next day-
maanvi want to talked to him but due to his ignorance make her angry..she try to work in kitchen..she hesitantly entered in kitchen and try to cooking..after some minits she hold knife in her hand start her cooking..
In Mumbai virat felt guilty..he tried her number..he found he call her but dadaji receive the call..he tried two more times but same things happen..he understand that she will be angry on him..he thought..
V-maine kuch jyada hi gussa kar diya..woh bhi to vaha mere bina hai..apne kam ka Sara frustration bhi uspar hi..he thought for some time and he dialed dabbus number but maanvi already off his phone for his study..virat try to landline number..
In chodhry house phone rang..dabbu passed from there..he received the call..
D-hello?
V-hello dabbu main virat..
D-jj aap?
V-haa main sun maanvi hai vaha? Actually woh mujse naraz hai..
D-achcha..isiliye woh itni khoi khoi hai..vaise abhi woh kitchen me hai..
V-kitchen me?..surprisely
d-haa woh Di koshis kar rahi hai..apne Dar se jitne ki..
Virat smile little..
V-dabbu plz uske saath hi rahena..
D-aap fikar mat karo..vaise aap na abhi Di se baat karne ki koshis bhi mat karna woh bahot gussa hai aapse..
V-achcha..koi baat nahi..ab to main vahi aake mana lunga..
D-aap yaha aa rahe ho?
V-haa..lekin maanvi ko batana mat.mera kaam aaj raat tak khatm ho jayega..main kal pahoch jaunga..
D-thik hai..
V-chal ab kal baat karte hai thik hai..bye
D-bye
after it virat hurriedly finished his work and left for rihshikesh..in rihshikesh maanvi roaming in her room with her phone..she removed divert mode from his number..she many times open his number but everytime she stopped herself..she sit on bed..
M-nahi..abhi to sirf ek din hua hai..rahene do use ase hi..kal hi baat karungi..and she try to sleep...
Next day-
she waiting for his call but she disappointed with it..at evening she told dabbu to continu study of his paper for tomorrow..she come home in hour after visiting ganga ghat..she went for ganga ghat..
After hour-
maanvi sitedon steps of ghat..she complained to her parents abt virat..suddenly her phone rang..she saw its from house..she checked the time..its up to 1 and half hour..she stood up and receive the call..
M-hurried walking-i m so sorry dabbu mujhe late ho gaya main bas abhi pahoch rahi hu..
Dabbu cut her..
D-di..relax woh sab chhodo..aap jaldi ghar pahocho woh virat jiju ko..
And he cut by her..
M-confusing and surprisely-virat?
D-haa Di..woh aapse milne rihshikesh aa rahe the ki unka accident ho gaya..
With this maanvi stop walking and froze on plase..tears slip from her eyes..she hardy asked him..
M-accident..woh thik hai?..worriedly
d-di..plz jaldi ghar jahocho..plz..
Maanvi shook her head in yes and run from their..she even note wait for rixa..she ruse towards her house..
She reached at home..she opened the meine door with Loud noise..she breathing heavily.she shouted..
M-dabbu..?..virat..?
Just then she heared some noise from her room..she rush towards her room..she saw door open..she reached at door and looked around the room..her eyes stopped at one side..
She saw virat lying on bed..she ruse towards him..she saw bandages on his head and hand..his half body covered with blanket and his eyes closed..she plased her hand on her mouth..tears continusly slip from her eyes..she slowly sit on bed..she cried..she plased her hand on his bandaged hand..close her eyes and bent her head..wisheper..i m sorry..ye sab meri wajeh se..i m sorry..and crying badly..
She felt some movement on bed..she opened her eyes..she saw him try to sit..she come near to him..and moving her hands on his solder and face..
M-worriedly-virat..tum thik ho..jyada chhot to nahi aai..
He looked at her..her concern..her pain..her tears..
She pull him close and hugged him tightly..
M-i m sorry..meri vajehse ye sab..i m sorry..
V-maanvi main bilkul thik hu..
M-itni chote lagi hai aur kahe rahe ho ki thik ho..she said with teary voice..
He pulled her away..
He looked at her..due to crying her eyes become red..he can saw guilt on her face..he can't take it Long..he looked at her crying..
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Virat cupped her face..
V-maanvi..plz ase ro mat main bilkul thik hu..mujhe kuch nahi hua..ye dekho..
And he removed all bandages from his head and hand..maanvi looked at him with shock..he put all bandages on side table and hold her with solder..
V-maanvi..dekho koi chot nahi hai..maine to bas mazak kar raha tha..tum naraz thi isliye..
Maanvi pulled his hands away and stood up with anger..
M-mazak?..virat tum ne ye..tears slip from her eyes..
He stood up from bed..and step towards her..
V-maanvi i m sorry mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum ase react karogi..
M-just shut up..tum samjte kya ho apne aap ko?..asa mazak koi karta hai?..she abt to speak more just then dabbu entered in room..
D-di..isme jj k akele ki galti nahi hai..
She looked at him angrily..he looks down..she saw book in his hand..she come out from room in anger and went in to kitchen..
Both just looked at her and follow her..
V-maanvi..
He try to call her but she ignore him..after few minutes she bring food on dinning table..both come near the table and staring at her..
M-stratly-ghurna bandh karo aur khana suru karo..
Both looked at eachother and sit on chair..maanvi served them..
D-hesitantly-di..aap naraz to nahi ho?..plz main kan pakad ke maafi mangta hu..he said sadly
she looked at him nd gave weak smile..
M-main naraz nahi hu..ab jaldi se khana khatm kar aur apne room me ja kar padhai kar..kal teri exam hai..smile..
Dabbu smiled and start eating..virat looked at her but she ignore him..after dinner dabbu went to his room..here maanvi also entered in her room..virat follow her and entered in room behind her..he close the door..maanvi walked towards bed and start cleaning the bed and adjust the blanket..virat looked at her..he saw her without any expression..he know she still angry on him..he walked towards her..
She turned and save her self to hit with him..she looked at him and looked away..she abt to turned when he Spoke..
V-maanvi..plz..i m sorry..agar dabbu ko maaf karsakti ho to mujhe bhi kardo..
M-main nahi chahti thi ki humari ladai k chakkar me uske exams pr asar pade..
V-haa to main bhi to maafi mang raha hu na..main to bas tumhe manana chahta tha..maine ye kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum ase react karogi..mujhe laga ki tum..
She cut his sentence and step towards him..
M-kya laga tumhe haa..? Bolo na.. Samajte kya ho khudko..haa..
With this he puss he back..
M-tum kahete the na ki mujhe dard me dekh k tumhari saase atak jati thi..to ye kyu nahi socha ki meri kya halat hogi..
Tears come out from her eyes..
He took step up towards her..and try to hold her but she pulls his hand away..
M-with crying-manti hu ki main hamesha tumse mazak karti raheti hu..ladati hu..zaghadti hu..tumhe kabhi special feel nahi karvaya..kabhi apne pyar ko us tarah se jahir nahi kiya..iska matlab ye nahi ki main tumhe ase dekh sakti hu..tumse baat nahi karpai to tum naraz ho gaye..lekin tumse naraz hokar bhi meri nazre phone raheti thi..ek second tumse Juda nahi reh sakti..
Virats eyes also become wet..he felt guilty..she come near to him and pull him close with his coller..
M-tum to gujar chuke ho is dor se..to kaise asa mazak kar liya..tum jante bhi ho ki ghat se yaha tak bhag kar ate waqt kaise khyal aa gaye the mujhe..tumhe bed pe un pattiyo me dekh kar mere dil ne dhadkne se mana kar diya tha..tumhare pass ane ki himamat nahi ho rahi thi..bhagvaan se pray kar rahi thi ki ye sapna ho..apne aap pr gussa aa raha tha..aur tum kaheto ki tumhe pata nahi tha ki mujhe itna hurt hoga..
Virat abt to plased his hand on her cheek but she pussed him back..
V-maanvi..i m sorry..
M-sorry?..yaad hai jab cancer k baad Maine ek asa mazak kiya tha..
He remembering that day..and looked at her..
M-usi tarah main koi bhi mazak bardash kar sakti hu..lekin ye nahi..tumhe nahi kho sakti main..ab tumse Dur Jane se bhi Dar lagta hai..tumhe us haal me dekhne se pahele marna pasand karungi..
With this virat plased his hand on her mouth and shook his head slowly in no..
V-nahi..wisheper..i promis main kabhi kabhi asa mazak to dur ki baat apne khyalo main bhi asa nahi sochunga..plz i m sorry..apne virat ko maaf kardo..plz..
He removed his hand..
M-kabhi nahi karoge..?..she asked with wet voice..
V-tumhari kasam..kabhi nahi..aur tum janti ho main kabhi tumhari zuti kasam nahi khaunga..
She nodded..and she wipe his tears..
M-tum rote hua bahot bure lagte ho..
He laughed on it..she smile little..he wipe her tears..and kissed on her forehead..
V-i m sorry..
They hugged eachother..
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