SS Iridescent (P19 - UPDATE 06/06) [Virman/Virika] - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preetipc

Loved the update.Love the way the bonding of the brothers and their conversations were showed.Loved the lighter conversations of the brothers.Love the bonding.Wow, now Manvi too will join with jeevika. Waiting to see jeevika and Mannu together and how they handle the V boys.Love the whole update.Thanks for the pm😊


Thank you :)

I decided to keep this story pretty light for the start, but it's me, so things will be taking a few twists and turns soon, so be warned!

Do keep on reading, and thanks once again for the comment, I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sabeeha :D
did u read the post i made especially for u ??
everything i wanted to say ... its there :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ZAHARA.


You probably should! Ah, I'm not an amazing writer! YOU are! Seriously, I just love it; the idea is so fresh and innovative. I've just read the third chapter; I quite like the different perspectives on your characters, be it Jeevika, Vadhera brothers or Maanvi. I loved the conversation between the brothers, it was light hearted but yet inspiring in some way. I liked how you highlighted the differences with Virat being the one who drinks, smokes, than Viren. He is sensible and mature, yet there's that side to him just like when he was talking to Jeevika. Somehow, I can't help but chuckle at the irony: Virat talking about Jeevika whilst Viren could not give a damn, when they are the canon couple. And as for Maanvi, well in some way I can relate to her. My College is going to end in a few months, and I can only imagine what I should do in those two months till I get my results. I can't wait to read on!



I'm an average writer, at best rofl. There are so many people on the forum who's writing is just flawless and incredibly captivating, and I don't stand a chance against those writers. Lol, I've gotten into these writing 'fights' before, but you seriously are a fabulous writer, and I really wouldn't like to give off a false sense of humility because I do appreciate all the comments and it still bewilders me that people actually like this stuff :L

I just wanted to turn the whole prospect of the show on it's head, although there are some qualities that even I couldn't do away with. For me personally, Virat's always been the 'rebel' child and Viren's been the polar opposite. I wanted that theme to carry on here. In terms of the real world, Virat is completely normal; Viren's probably the weirdest one out of the lot and I'm still sorting out the finer details to him - your conventional goody-goody who finds his philosophy to life rapidly changing.

To hell with canon lmao, he's a guy first and foremost - your down-to-earth guy next door and his older brother seems to be sitting on the prudish side of the fence. It shall be quite interesting to see what fireworks I can create between the four.

It's the universal dilemna rofl; I know I have a few months this summer before results where I'll have virtually nothing to do, except maybe going back to part-time work. Wouldn't you just love to go on holiday and just let the time fly by?

Thanks for the comment, and do keep reading :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks :)

Keep reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amii90



Okayy Dude seriously, you need to take my comments seriously!!!


Nah-a, not possible :L Not unless you take mine seriously!

My comment wasn't that long :p

I think you might be deluding yourself there...

and I don't drink while commenting or otherwise for that matter lol so besides the fact that I really loved your work, there is nothing else that goes into my comments!!

Fair do's :P (To the alcohol bit as I'm teetotal too.) And thank you, I'm glad your liking it, although I can't help but feel it's grossly undeserved.

That title is the most COOLEST thing about this OS- I love it! Well looking from the kinds of books you read, it doesn't take a genius to figure out why your writing is the way it is- superb reading selection! To Kill the Mockingbird- CLASSIC!

I just love saying the word rofl. I-ri-des-cent. It makes me feel posh and a bit snooty with my 'comprehensive vocabulary', hehe. I just don't get how people don't like reading the classics, I mean they're classics for goodness sake! I've just been reading Peter Pan recently, something I haven't read for years and it's probably just the greatest children's book ever, although I find it ridiculously depressing as it just makes you wish that you would never grow up. Thanks for that compliment though; I love Harper Lee's attention to detail so I guess I've been trying to emulate that, although I definitely lack coherency in my writing :L

I aint writing anything for that prais-a-thon of yours; I am happy reading work of others- and that too QUALITY work and looking at work of yours and others on the forum, I honestly feel like why bother lol- its just looks so damp on the paper as I read it myself so god bless the readers lol!!! But Yeaa I read your update, will comment that in different post! Just had to get you back on this one :)

I understand the position, because it's completely relatable. Somethings on here are just so exquisitely written that you just need to take a step back and take it in for all it's glory (your SS is a prime example for myself). Your damp squibs were passionately loved on the forum Amii, don't be selling yourself short. Those Weekend Treats? I can safely say that you pretty much where the sole Virika writer for the forum for a good half a year, a little beacon of hope for all those Virika addicts out there rofl :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana_cool

superb
thanks for the pm
continue soon


Thank you :)

Do keep reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shine123

Really nice update...:)

VV boys conservation was really nice...
manvi to join Jeevika...
eager to read the next parts...
Continue soon and thnx 4 d pm...:)


Thank you :)

I hope you like the next bit too, but I am taking it slow with this story :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Virika11

Amazing

Cont soon

Please pm me


Thank you :)

I've placed you on the PM list :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: loveleen12

O my gosh why o why I need to read another update how did I miss this one read all the parts in one go and fell in love with the story and the characters of Manvi and Jeevika they were totally people we girls could relate to unlike the Pooja paath and tyaag ki Devi type of characters which are nothing but trp boosters and how Manvi felt after her finals were over it is so true you get all excited when school is out and then you are just bored. Please pm me I can't wait to read more of this story


Hiya Loveleen :)

Lol, love the whirlwind comment, haven't seen you around in a while :)

That was pretty much the whole purpose of the story; I just got to wondering what it would be like to have Jeevs and Manvi as normal girls (albeit rich). Like seriously, where the hell do you actually find Tulsi's and Parvati's?

The school thing is just so poignant for me right now; I literally have no idea what I'll be doing this summer so finding inspiration for a fresh out of education Manvi wasn't too difficult :L

Keep reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ElmWizard5015

hey sabeeha :D

did u read the post i made especially for u ??
everything i wanted to say ... its there :D


Hi :)

I'm sorry, I've been virtually inactive for the best part of two months (?) now. You made a post for me? That is incredibly sweet!

Thank you :)

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