Virmaan : pain and smile : PART-23 last part - Page 24

wow lovely and awesome update.

Superb update khushi
love this new virmaan...

Virat is too noughty
awesome
saari part was amezing...
Love that also...
She is too nervouse...
Precap looks intresting..waiting for next part...

both part was nice and precap also nice
he want to spend more time with her
so he want she should work again
with him update soon

wow ...superb...and yes hats off to u dear u are updating many stories altogether...👏..its not easy ...i will also try to comment regularly...
dear...tat y i will just say do update soon whenever..u are free...
will wait for your updates as usual😊

Loved the update dear...
Too sensual...haaye haaye...
I like this naughty virat...
Hmmm...in precap...virat is sad...
Party...excited!
Please update soon...

PART-21
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MAanvi turn into light pink shade as she remember abt what happened before few minutes..how his single touch make her senseless..she starts looking here nd there..
M-n..na..nahi kripa..asa kuch bhi nahi hai..
K-smile to see her shyness-okay okay bhabhi main maan leti hu ki yaha asa kuch nahi ho raha tha..she says in teasing tone nd secretly laughed..
M-to embercceing situation for her..try to change the topic-tum batao naa..kuch kaam tha?
K-are haa..actually maa ne apko aur bhai ko pooja ke liye bulaya hai..
M-virat to abhi shawer le raha hai..main use bata deti hu aur phir tumhare saath chalti hu..ek mint..
She abt to walk towards wasroom bt stop by kripa..
K-bhabhi..
M-turn towards her..
K-aap kuch bhool rahe ho..
M-confuse-kya?
K-bhai..
M-matlab?
K-bhabhi..aap ko kal maa ne bataya to tha..ki bhai apna kaam khud kaisa karte hai..??
M-she realise what she trying tell her-haa..mujhe yaad hai lekin maa har baar ye karti hai to main kaise?
K-come near to her-bhabhi..maa karti thi..ab to aap aa gaye ho..aur waise bhi maa bahot khush hongi agar aap bhai ki jimme dari loge to..
M-pakka naa?
K-are haa..apko pata hai..maa nd ded dono bhai se kitne pareshaan rahete the..lekin ab aap gaye ho..ab bhai duniya bhar me na ghum kar ghar pe rahenge..bahot maza ayega..
M-aur woh kaise..?
K-place her arms around her-aise..hum aap ko kahi jane hi nahi denge to automatically bhai bhi kahi nahi jaa payenge..smile happily..
M-smile at this..
She has no siblings..specially sister..only ria is in her life who use to be her friend bt she met her after she joint office when she losted her husband so at that time she not use to be this kind of normal nd happy behavior..ria nd she share special bond after that..bt with ria nd with kripa..her both bonds r looking too difrents from eachthers..ria met her when she id sad upset stressed nd hopeless nd here kripa met her when she want to be happy nd fulfill all darkness in her life by spreading happiness around her..specially in virat's life..nd of course his family also..who accepted her without any single doubt..they loved their son nd brother too much nd of course they want best life partner for him who gve his all happiness of life..who love him..care him..nd suppported him..nd here they all know that maanvi was already married once..she still not able to gve same love nd affection to virat..that girl who coming in their house is still fighting with her pain nd smile..she has past..not horrible bt had..
Bt with all this..they accept her with open heart..they didnt just sawing their agreement in this relationship bt maanvi can felt that they r really accept her..nd other hand she also trying to mold in thier life structure..gave all happiness to them nd fulfill all their wish..she never did ideal job of dauther-in-low in her first marriage bcz she was in that same family..bt here everything is new nd every person r diffrent..bt she like them..she felt to lucky..to get this family nd this relation..nd this all happen just bcz of virat..
Again her heart starts thinking abt him..nd get flash-backs..in which she was too close with him..his passionate eyes..loveble smile..smirk..mischief eyes..care..determination..which she found in this 3 months journey..
She thingking abt all thiis nd lost in her land..she come out in reality with kripa's voice..
K-shooking her sholder-hello bhabhi..??
M-shook her head-h..a..a..
Look at her..
K-kaha kho gai aap?
M-kahi nahi..
K-achchha thik hai..main chalti hu aap bhai ke saath niche aa jaiye ga..thik hai..smiled
M-smile at her-thik hai..hum aa jayege..
After that karipa left from virmaan room with smile nd maanvi move towards wardrobe..she open virat's side robe nd strats scanning from top to end..she get confuse..there r many shirts..jeckets..t-shirts..trowsers..pants..tracks..etc
its not like that she saw first time this kind of collection bt she is confuse..confuse to choose one pair of clothes for virat..which she can choose..
M-put her hand on her forehead..confuse nd worriedly-kya karu..yaha to bahot se colours hai..kon sa nikalu..ye yellow..nahi blue vala acha lagta hai virat pe..lekin white woh jyada pahenta hai..achcha to black main bhi dikhta hai..
M-she felt to confussing..for few minutes she just stood there..-kya karu..mujhe to virat ki koi choice bhi pata nahi hai..na hi colour aur nahi ye ki woh rehsals me kya pahenke jana pasand karta hai..
She felt guilty..she look down nd think for sometime..her trail of thoughts broke by virat..she turn as she heard his voice..
V-come out from washroom..wrapping towel around his waist nd one towel around his neck..like he try to cover his upper body as he know maanvi may be felt unfomfortable or she didnt like him entering in room with bare upperbody..dring his hairs with his hand..brushing them roughly..as he look around for her he found her stood in front of his wordrobe-maanvi..
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PART-22
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V-as he saw her stood in front of his wordrobe with looking at his clothes he look at her with smirk..he understand that she trying to bring clothes for him..call her lovinglt-maanvi..
As she hear him she imigeatly turn towards him..she still looking upset..
V-holding towel in his fist on his chest..walked towards her-kya hua?..he ask sofly..
M-look down in guilt-woh..main..maon woh tumhare..lekin..
She cannot control on herself..tears make their way come out from her eyes..as soon as virat see this imigeatly hold her both hands from sholder..
V-heyyy...maanvi..make her look at him by raising her face up from her chin..
V-kya hua..roa kyu rahi ho?
M-with cutness-woh..woh mujhe tumhare bare main kuch pata hi nahi hai..wipping-konse kapde nikal ne hai kuch bhi nahi..she looking too cute..
V-smile nd shook his head-haa to kya hua?..tum meri wife ho meri PA nahi..aur waise bhi maa ye kaam saalo se kar rahi hai..tum ek din main kaise sikh logi?..he try to make her understand..
V-aur maine kaha hai naa tumse..tumhe kuch sabit karne ki jarurat nahi hai..naahi khud ko badal ne ki..tum jaise chahe waise relation ko apne mutabik comforable kar sakti ho..samzi..?
M-nodded in yes like kid..
V-aur raha is me chise ka to mera fav colour red hai..lekin mujhe har colours ke clothes pahenne pasand hai..god ne itne itne saare rang diye hai..woh bhi beautiful vale waste kyu kare..kyu?..smile..
M-smile with teary eyes..
V-to thik hai jo tumhe pasand ho nikal do main pahen lunga..okay..
M-nodded in yes..
He move little back as she wipe her tears nd turn towards wardrobe again..he smile nd walk towards mirror playing with his half wet hairs..
She bring sky-blue t-shirt with white half sleeves jacket nd trowsers..
M-took clothes in her hand nd walk near him..of course nervous-virat..she whisper..
As he hear her he turn towards her..nd look at her hands..
M-sawing his clothes-ye chalenge?..plz agar nahi to kuch aur nikal dungi..plz sachi sachchi batana..
V-smile nd walk near her..take clothes from her-not bad..tumhe yaad hai ki mujhe rehasals me sirf t-shirts hi achchi lagti hai..nd is t-shirs ke saath ye perfact combination hai..thanks..tum ek true orgenizer ho mrs.vadhera..
M-smile happily..she felt too good nd proud..not bcz he precies her choise bt he Call her Mrs.Vadhera..-sachchi..
V-bilkul..
M-smile..-thik to tum ready hoke niche aa jao main maa ki pooja ke liye help karva deti hu..
V-okay done lekin problem hai..
M-kya?
V-mera rumal aur watch..plz kya woh tum nikal dogi..pata nahi kaha rakh diya hoge maine..
M-smile-woh mujhe pata hai..tumne kal purse aur watch waha drore ke upar rakhe the..main table pe nikal ke rakh dungi..
V-thats great..main abhi gaya aur abhi aya..nd he walk towards wasroom with clothes..
Maanvi smile nd walk towards drore nd bring his stuff nd put them on table..she abt to walk out from room when she remember abt his shouse..she choice one matching pair for him from cupboard nd place near chair nd then come out from room..
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after all pooja nd blessings family members sat in hall..only maanvi was missing from there..
Kripa nd inder..her father discussing abt buisness as kripa completed her studies this year she want to joint his fathers company nd everyone happy with this..nd supriya just listioning their convo..other side virat who get call as they come in hall talking with aman abt his rehsals for concert..
After 10 mins he hang up the call nd look at everyone..he smile at his family..bt as he didnt find maanvi their his smile become small..he abt to go from there to search her bt stop as kripa call him..
K-bhai..
V-haa
k-kaha ja rahe ho?
V-woh maanvi ko aaj ki rehsals ke bare me batana hai..
All smile..
I-virat jab rehsal pe jana hoga tab bata dena abhi baitho..
V-but ded
s-cut him-virat..tumhe kahi jane ki jarurat nahi hai..maanvi abhi yaha ati hi hogi..
V-lekin woh hai kaha?
S-kitchen me..
V-shock nd confuse-kitchen me?
S-haa..aaj uska pahela din hai is ghar to methe ki rasam puri karne ko kaha hai maine..
V-kab?
S-jab tum phone pe baat kar rahr the..
V-lekin itne saare servants hai to maanvi se kyu banva rahe ho?
All laughed nd look at eachother..how he defending her..
I-control on his laughter-virat..hum manvi se koi pure ghar ka kam nahi karva rahe hai..itni chinta?..
S-aur virat ek sweet dish ki bana ne ko kaha hai..koi bhandare ka khana bana ne ke liye nahi..waise bhi ye ek rasam hai..hum tumhari wife se koi dusmani thodi nikal rahe hai..laughed
He felt to guilty to say this..
V-nahi maa woh baat nahi hai..aap sab ka bhi pura huk hai maanvi par..mera woh kahe ne matlab nahi tha..
I-relax virat hota hai..hume bilkul bura nahi laga..
S-balki hume khushi hai tum humari bahu ka itna khyal rakhte ho..
V-just gave weak smile..in reality he is worrried fro her..whatif she didnt know abt cooking..yes she didnt know how to cook..as she didnt know abt saari wrapping its posssible..he just pray to god..he felt to helpless..
After 5 minutes maanvi come with tray..
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V-WHISPER IN HER EAR-AGAR ITNE MOOD SWINGS HONGE TO SAB KO DOUBT HO JAYEGA...
M-CONFUSE...
V-YAHI KI..ABHI TO SHAADI HUA SIRF DO NIGHTS HI BITE HAI AUR TUMHARE MOOD SWINGS HONE SURU HO GAYE...HE TEAS HER...LIKE SHAMLESS...
M-HER MOUTH OPEN WIDLY...
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VIRAT ANGRILY TOOK HIS CAR KEYS ND HURRIEDLY WALK OUT FROM HOUSE...
MAANVI FELT TOO GUILTY ND SAD...
SHE RUSH BEHIND HIM TO ATOP HIM..
M-VIRATTT...
BT BEFORE SHE STOP HIM HIS CAR ZOOM OUT FROM GATE..
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