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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

really big update love u for that. Awesum update.. loved the story. do cont soon and pm me.

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oriyana

@oriyana

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Loved it... It's truly amazing yaar... ❤️

How do u manage to write such wonderful stories?

I am a huge fan of ur Zindagi milegi Dobara.. It's just awesome..

And this story has a huge potential to Rock!! By the way, it already Rockss... 😉

Thank you. It's a treat to read your work.

And yeah, you end up ur updates on cliff hanger.. 😆

Continue soon...

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Nayab

@luv_virman

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Heyy deaar !! Amaziing update as usual 😃

Sorry for commenting so late 😕

VirMan dreamt abt each other thatz so sweet 😊

The story is becoming more and more interestiing ...

I'm eagerly waiting for your next update 😛

Tfs for the PM

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littlerani

@littlerani

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

I love the way you write the interaction between virmaan! thanks again anu!

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

awsome amazing lovely update

plz cont soon

thanks for pm me

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Krupaa

@forever_young

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Anuuu!!!! Soo sorry i'm late!!

Wow..a fab update!!! Love this sherni!!!
Haha, i can just imagine Virat's expression
while Maanvi was doing her Drama!!
This was just fab!!! Totally loveed it!!

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shona v p

@Shona1907

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

sorry for super late reply... was busy with exams...🤢

it is superb... loved how the both without meeting eachother developed hatred😆

typical of der characters😉

aman poor soul his wife wil divorce him soon n ask him to marry virat🤣

i admire manvi's spirit a lot in dis story...😃😆

n den wen they finally meet... poor virat now he was trapped in such a area... n manvi😆

the way she shoved him off... wow...👏 cmon any respectful girl wud do tat she misunderstood coz of her surroundings tats all... n virat was using wrong language... he was like continously telling "mujhe manvi choudhry chahiye" 🤣 this one sentence n any girl will kill tat guy... virat yeh kya bol rahe ho use proper words... but i knw u used dis sentence so tat der is scope of misunderstanding being build... u are just awesome anu superb...👏

i really think some times tat if i m able to achieve everything in life tat i have hoped for n wen hav nothing left to do i'll make a tv show n i'lll beg u to be the script wirter😳

u shud seriously try giving ur stories to some production house😃

thanks for the pms...🤗

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Jaya

@screen22

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

I am sorry for the late reply

i just loved reading this chapter, I would have loved to be a spider on the wall when virat came looking for maanvi and when maanvi turned up at virat's office, it was just amazing and funny. You could just fall of the chair by the way they were both acting seeing it is believing it.

Did virat not have a clue of where he was searching for maanvi, I think every girl wish they were maanvi and he had come to see them, maanvi sure gave it to him a wife and a kid she was not on the market, virat just could not get a word in. When maanvi turn up and went to virat office she was like a kid with a new toy, when she fell to her feet to say sorry was so filmly and the tears did not work.

Both of them dreaming of each other says something?

You are a brilliant writer please don't worry about what the outside world think, as your friends on IF you are soo good and fantastic that it really does not matter what people think, trust in yourself you are good and amazing and I take my hat off to you.

Thanks for the pm, please continue soon

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Dr. Simran Singhania

@Virmanroxx

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Sorry for the late comment.

First i wanna say iz plz dont pay heed to those who themselves r a BIGGG ZERO nd cant appreciate others wrk as well. WE all know u r a fab writer so continue ur wrk for those who luv it. .

Coming to the update.

It wz damn awesome. Its hard to believe this is just ur 2nd FF. The way u describe the scenes is damn awesome.

And as the saying goes ,

Manvi iz Manvi. She cant change. Pehle galti karo phir SORRY bolo.

LOL wanna wish Virat, ALL THE BEST for hiz life with this sherni aka MANVI SINGH CHOUDHRY.

Plz update sooon . Dying to read it.