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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

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I'm the first...😃... I really wanna be first to cmnt on this story as I'm waiting for so long

Hey anu... firstly I wanna says don't give focus to unnecessary people who is not meant for you...

you know na U are awesome writer so don't care of such people... U done a fab Job...we all loved ur piece of writing so much...⭐️ 👏

now come to your story... i liked it very much... you proof me wrong the person who was at the door is none other our Virat... you know what I'm smiling while reading this

and their very first meeting was terrific... hilarious manvi's behaviour was mind blowing... and poor Virat how he makes her understand but our manvi is manvi... she didn't listen him...bang the door o his face... awww

when she knows the truth through Bittuji was superb... what an acting she do in bus as well as in front of him and manvi and virat thinking about them in their dreams...😆

virat lines was too good she didn't bite me... he he he

Virat knows her very well what she think at moment... manvi is superb

ow I'm waiting for next part what was her reaction... seems interesting...

thanx 4 the PM

plz update next part soon...😉

Edited by jannat89 - 13 years ago

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

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I am very happy you updated I was thinking about it 😳

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Wow,, superb update.. Very funny, haha maanvi is very hillarious and filmy...
Both already had a weird dream,, good going.. Ending and precap is rocking..

Anu, jab tak hai jaan will be more popular the ZMD.. Thanx for the pm

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Wow!! i could litrally picturize their conversation...details explained really well, seriously they had an effect on eachother only by meeting once...love that they saw eachother in dreams,,,n yes virat was smiling...his update had so many good moments...Amazing...!!!👍🏼

Continue soon n thanks for the pm!

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Awesome update... Straight to buisness lol... And dream sequence was awesome 'typical bahu'

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girl_rocks

@girl_rocks

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

omg omg omg this is just amazing...awesome mindblowing fantastic...i dont have more words srry
gal u r fab...this was just perfect emotions feeling...virat's behaviour...manvi's bubbliness...lol they have already started to dream abt eachother...hayeee nd u stopped at cliff hanger
update super duper soon