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Since i put 3 threads and people asked me to continue, i am clubbing al the threads and continuing.. for people who dont know.. PART 1:

Virman gets married and starts their new happy life.. It is the first day of Manvi as Bahu in Vadhera house..
Manvi gets up in the morning and knows its a bit late..
As she knew that according to the custom of Vadhera house the Bahu will cook something special. She also wanted to cook Kheer like the way her sis did but since she doesnt know how to cook she went to Virika's room and she finds Viren jiju and Virat ji in tension in Virika room..
She comes inside and asks what the matter is.. conversation begin

Manvi : Good morning Jiju and virat.. why are u both looking so worried and tensed?
(Since Viren and Virat know manvi would be upset bcoz jeevika is her di and it is the first day of her in Vadhera house so they decide to hide the truth and say..)
Viren : nothing manvi we are thinking about virats carrier and your both's future...you tell me what made u come here? Any work?
Manvi : oh ho virat.. u became so serious..gud gud..:) n jiju nothing i want to make kheer so i want to know how to make so i came for my di..
virat : Manvi u dont even know how to make kheer but u got married (in a jovial way)
Manvi : I thought u'll cook for me so i didnt learn anything but here the entire story is different..:p
viren : okay both of u stop fighting atleast after marriage be serious..
manvi : i cant sit widout fighting with virat..
virat also says the same..
Manvi : okay leav all this where is my jeevika di
viren : got scared n says.. she went to mandir..
manvi : okay i'll cal her
viren : noo dont cal her phone is off she forgt to put for charge..n u dont worry na i will give u a recipie book... U can see from it n learn..
Manvi agrees n takes the book..
manvi in kitchen.. cooking

V bros talking here
virat : bhai i think we should go out n check where bhabhi is
Viren : Exactly virat come lets go.

Viren goes to the table to take his phone n he finds a letter
"Dear viren ji,
i m sorry for doing this... Forgive me.. but i m not worth of u.. So i m leaving Vadhera house(my family) as this is my punishment for aborting the child..plz dont search for me.. U promised me before on that day u ll give me anything i ask.. All i wana ask is take care of our family n keep smiling.. love you forever"
viren in tears saying to virat about what is there in the letter

Manvi overhears this while she came to call every1 in the home for bfast n she is shocked...n crying...
Virat stops her tears and tells them before people in the house comes to know about this we need to find bhabhi and bring her back..
Viren says no if we 3 go out swamini bua and dadaji wil get a doubt so u both stay n i ll search outside.. they agree and viren leaves

Viren searches everywhere but cant find..then he comes to railway station and looks at jeevika..
jeevika with half happy and half crying face goes to viren.. viren also comes near to her...


PART 2 :

Viren comes near jeevika and hugs hr n asks her to come home.. conversation begin..
Viren : Jeevika what is this? What r u dng? U left me alone and cam here?
Jeevika : Viren ji.. I asked u not to search for me na
Viren : Even i was supporting u for aborting the child so even i deserve punishment... Even i'll leav home come lets stay tgthr
Jeevika refuses refuses and then finally agrees..
Background music : *Tu hi Tu hai*

Virat calls viren n asks bhai where r u? Did u find bhabi?
Viren with smile says yes i found her but we are not gonna cum back..
Saying this he cut the phone
Virat tells this to manvi and manvi gets shocked..

Manvi calls jeevika
Manu : Di where r u? U n jiju come back home
J : No manu if u should be happy in ur sasural then i shouldn't be there..
M : Di plz stop this n come back..
J : no we are in train..leaving for Mumbai :)
Manvi cries n cuts the call n tells virat..
Virat Says if they both dont wanna come then we'll also leave for Mumbai and i'll continue my singing carrier there. Manvi agrees.. And they pack their clothes and all and about leave

Dadaji and Swamini bua stop them and ask where they are going ..
Virat rude to Swamini says that it is bcoz of u bhai and bhabhi. Left our home and went away.. Till you call them back we are not going to come back..
Saying this they leave...
Manvi in tension in railway station...
Virat hug her and say everything will be fine..
Conversation begin

Manvi : Thanks a lot for sacrifising everything and taking to my di..
Virat : C'mon manvi he is my bro also so i should support him also..
VirMan cute fight..
M : So u did this for your brother but not me?
V(laughing) : Yup its for my brother but not you..
M sad n goes away from there
Virat goes behind her and says
Oye ded futiya..its for you only..
M : How dare u say ded futiya..
Cute fight and train comes and they get in and call Virika and say they are coming to Mumbai..

Virika shocked..

Hows this part guys? Do comment pleasee :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum...continue soon waitin to see virman romance!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its very cool!!!
Virika and Virman in mumbai... and that too without any Vadhera rules!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome dear...loved it...thnx for d PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum update
really loved it...
especially the virman fight
👏😛 😊

do PM me when u write the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum blosom
pm me wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simply superb!! Continue!! Pm me ayu!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u very much every1..:)

Wil comtinue and do PM :)
Thanks a lot again
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start cannot wait to read more please pm me when you update next thanks

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