Taming of the Sherni FF/SS... Page55 NOTE - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago
wohoo super fast update
ur brilliant writer girlie
awesome part
keep pming me
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a short update yar...n it seemed to be a bit disconnected with da story...dnt knw y bt it made me wnder if im reading an os? lolz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohk this was good update...manvi's feeling was well described nd yeah her behaviour towards her father well ummm its understandable
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES ( I will unres after having read all the parts since the beginning, I didn't red this FF before, tfs for the PM 😃)
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Posted: 12 years ago

The lenght is a shocker !!

*Reserved*
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update 👍🏼
fnx 4 d pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
You amazed me with the length..I had to check if it's your story😆

It was a very descriptive chapter about Manvi especially, how she looks at life, what people mean to her, what's her behavior ..everything!
Loved the part where she tries to hide her face with her hair but then stumbles over 😆.
This isn't fair! You should make VirMan meet each other soon...how long am I supposed to wait?

Hope the next chap would fulfill what I've asked for! Be a Santa 😊
BTW Merry Christmas hun!
Hope you had fun!



Edited by ITrustMyHeart - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg... awesome part!👍🏼

btw... u call dat a long chapter?! lol... no offense, its a bit short but dat's k.. i enjoy ur updates.. i luv ur ff, will be waiting for ur next update...

thanks for da pm...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!!!

Wish u a very Happy New Year!!!
Have fun!! 🥳

And do give our new year installment soon!!! 😆
Waiting!!!

~Dee~
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hah ! Finally read it... tell u college is blessing in disguise sometimes...
The Update was Fab !
I was not expecting Manvi at all in this update but u surprised me and I loved it.
It was so real and practical... I could imagine lil Manvi with her mom soaked , that was beautiful.
Awww.. I seriously felt bad for her ...she was surely in worst scenario right now with nothing helping her at ol.
But the fact goes...I felt bad for mr. chaudhary tooo .. ! I have no stand to take right now.
The whole hiding and avoiding thing was perfectly penned down.. It was Classic !
My hands are freezing now. and I.hate winters...
Update next sooonnn and Happy New Year hun... Hope u had a blast !!!!

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