Virman FF-MBBS Part-3 updated pg-5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX
part 1- pg 1
PM list-pg2
part 2-pg 2
part 3- pg 5


PART-1
A NEW BEGINNING

OMG its 7 am. I need to rush. I quickly got ready in 10 min and rushed to the metro station. Luckily i didn't missed my train. I was excited as well as nervous for my first day my first day to THE best medical college in india- AIIMS. How will i make new frnds, will i be able to make my place in dis metropolitan city n wat abt ragging?? i hope only gals will take my ragging plz god no boys plz plz plz . I am reluctant to admit it but i fear boys dere s no explanation as to why .. i myself don no maybe becoz i m a shy, introvert type of gal whose only dream was to become a doctor - cardiologist to be specific n becoz of dat i had made my own code of conduct- no frnds who r boys no boyfrnds no outing wid frnds. In short i was an absolute nerd at school. But to my astonishent still dat stupid aakash proposed me omg how could he??

ooh sorry i forgot to give my intro. Hi every1 i am manvi choudhary n i m frm ajmer in rajasthan. As u knw i have cu to delhi fo mbbs n am on cloud 9 - mbbs frm aiims. After 2 years of pain , hard work n determination. i m finally here. bit what upsets me is ragging- u knw m not a seedhi sadhi chote sheher ki ladki bt d thing s dat m gud in nthin - dance, painting, singing nthin. The reason is i was so absorbed to achieve my goal dat i overlooked al dese things- god ab bhuktooo... But mere 1-2 frnds h wo janti h dat though i require lil bit of tym to make frnds n i m shy, sensitive bt once i make frnds i m a total RIOT...

Just den a familiar voice brought me back to reality... none other den my only and best frnd Ayushee.Though we were nt in the same school bt we were in the same coaching for medical entrance. She was totally opposite of me- extrovert, amiable n wat not but we were still best frnds. We used to talk make fun of others , share our secrets in short we were d best buddies.


But for the past 5 min she was shouting like hell.

Ayushee A- Are jaldi kar apna station a gya h. Metro k sawari krne ka irada h kya?

Manvi M- OOhh sorry!! chal jaldi chal.

Within 5 min we were in frnt of our clg.

A- pahuch gye yar .i am damm excited yar aj hamara clg ka 1 day h.

M- Excited to m bhi hu yar bt nervous bhi hu ragging ho gyi to. Aur tujhe to pta hi h na yaha k ragging kase hoti h.

A- tu bhi na puri ke puri fattoo h.

M-Shut up! M koi fattoo nhi hu. M kaha darr rhi. Bhool gyi manvi choudhary kise se nhi darti.

A- ha bt boys se darti h

M- chup kar poori duniya mein aisa koi nhi h jo mujse pangaa le sake ...understand. Chal ab late ho rha h.

the next 2 hours we were roasted and fried by the boring speeches of the professors giving us instructions. finally we had a break I, Ayushee n Sakshi (our new frnd) decided to go to the canteen.
But then a guy arrived n told us that principal has called us.On hearing this mere to parro tale zameen kishak gyi. Never in my lyf i was called in the principals office. We reluctantly made our way dere. But i felt sumthin strange ws going on. I could see clearly some unfamiliar faces secrettly laughing at us. They told us to move in a room which was definitely nt the principals office n locked us.
Just den ayushee whispered in my ears-"ragging.. ".








guys i have nt yet decided the name of dis ff. So your suggestions are welcome. Also plz tell if i should continue or not. Please be honest. I dont mind negative feedback.😊😊😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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differnt conceptt,and i am loving it,,,ya ofcrsee do cntinueee!!!! virman dil mil gaye😊 cntinuee soon!!!!!!!
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First of all thank u soo much for liking my work. I will try to update ASAP.
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