virman ss pyar aur dosti.. part 29 (LAST) updt - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
A really cute update...
Loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
hey lovely updt...pls cont soon...n pls pls pls pm me next time...i also send u a buddy req
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Aww it was just awesome!!
Loved it!!
Continue soon
And thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
just read all ur updates...great story..
plz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
It was cho cuteee update... chutku k papa 😆 how sweet virat calls her manna:) thanx for pm:) update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
aww...dat wz a real suercute update...
plzz cont soon n dont 4gt to pm me wen ya update...thnx in advance!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 8

next morning manvi woke up only to find virat looking at her giving her his magical smile...
virat : good morning manna...
manvi : good morning chutku k papa...!!!
virat : chutku nahi manna chutki... or to be more precise and clear princess...
he then places his hand on manvi's stomach and says good morning to u my princess... hope that you are having a good time... and papa loves you...
manvi : apna saara pyar apni princess par hi luta doge kya... princess ki mama se pyar nahi karoge...
virat (chukkles) : princess ki mama toh uske papa ka first love hai until...
manvi : until what...???
virat : until my princess comes into my arms...
manvi slaps virat's biceps and says same here...

they both got up, had their breakfast and virat was going somewhere when manvi screams... VIRRAATTT
virat gets scared and came to her...
virat : kya hua manvi...??? tum ... tum theek ho...???
manvi : i hate you...
virat : what...?? come again...
manvi : tum mujhe chod ke jaa rahe ho despite the fact that last night you made some promise to me...
virat : manvi... i have to... its important...!!
manvi : yeah... evrything is important to you except me and my happiness (doing her pet melo drama stuff)
all the others were too confused listening to virman's conversation... and were trying to figure out what were they talking about...
kadambari chachi : haye ni... kya ho gya mere srk aur kajol k beech...???
manvi : chachi bewaffa sanam...
chachi : haay ni... usme toh salman tha na manvi...
manvi : haan chachi... par apke ghar ki tope bhi bewaffa hai...
dadaji really loved manvi and cannot see her upset... he literally allowed manvi to do whatever she wished to do... and now all this was getting on his nerves...
dadaji : virat... kya ho raha hai ye sab...??? kya promise kia tha tumne bahu se...???
virat : dadaji wo... actually maine manvi ko promise kia tha k aaj main usko shopping pe lekar jaunga... bahar bhi ghumanga... kyunki wo ghar baithe baithe bahut bore ho gayi hai...
dadaji : toh jao na... apna waada nibhao
virat : wo mujhe office mein important kaam hai dadaji...
dadaji : bahu ki khushi se zyada impt kuch nai hai... aur ab toh wo humare khandan k waaris ko bhi janam dene waali hai...
virat : par... bhai..
dadaji : virat ek vadera kbhi apne waade se nahi mukarta hai... so no going office today...
manvi was very happy, she stood up and went to dadaji...
manvi : thank you boyfriend...
dadaji : u are welcome girl friend... now go and enjoy with your husband...
manvi gave her million dollar smile to all...
manvi : jeth ji...
viren : bolo ji...!!
manvi : aaj na mere virat ko office se chutti dedo and...
viren : and what...?? continue dear
manvi : aur aap meri di ke saath romance kal kar lena... aaj its mine turn to do so with my husband...
viren : okk... meri pyaari hone wali saali sahiba
manvi : thank u mere jiju cum jeth ji...
virat : ab toh tum khush ho na bandriya...??? sabne tumhari baat jo maan li hai...!!!
manvi : dekhno na maa... dadaji...
vanshika and dadaji : virat... stop it...!!!
manvi : main na ready ho kar aati hu chep... kahin jaana mat
virat : dekha jab woh apki pyari bahu mujhe chep kehti hai na toh koi bhi usko kuch nai kehta... aur jab main bol doon toh sab naah dho kar mere piche padh jaate hain... not fair...
swamini : everything is fair in love and war... and we all really love manvi... may be more than you also... aur waise bhi uski wajah se hum sab ka promotion hone jaa raha hai...
virat : hawww... toh aap log bhool rahe that its becos of me and khaali woh maa ni banne wali main bhi toh papa banne wala hoon...
swamini : ohhh god... kaun kahega that they are soon going to be parents...??? and i wonder what will u two teach your child - to skip meals and have pizza instead of healthy food . to laugh and talk as loud as possible, or calling people by strange and different nicknames...???
shlok : bua ji is ryt... virat bhaiya u should start behaving maturely and also ask bhabhi to do it... you now what yesterday bhabhi cme into my room and asked me whether i have some intresting magazines like tom and jerry, chacha chuadhary, champak and what not... i think she should read some good books at this time bhai...
virat : cheeni ki bori... my manvi is not boring like you... you keep your books to yourself only... i will myself get books for manvi...
manvi : m ready... virat lets go...!!!!
virat : come baby lets go...
virat held manvi's hand went to the car.. on the way virat was quiet and manvi was wondering what was keeping virat so occupied...
virat : tumko champak padhni hai...????
manvi : kya...???
virat : abhi shlok ne btaya yaar...
manvi : haan wo main bore ho rahi thi... isliye..
virat : issliye tumne shlok se puchha... wo encyclopedia kisi kaam nahi h manvi... chote dadaji kahin ka...
manvi : dont call him that... he is your younger brother virat... n waise bhi cheeni ki bori suits him well and its apt also...
with this they both started laughing their haeds off and gave each other a high five...!!!

it was three hours now and manvi was still busying shopping and virat was getting worried about her health and his princess...
virat : manvi... do it fast dear... its not safe for you to stand for that long...
manvi : virat plss... okk last time haan... ill go n try thesssee on...
virat was standing there thinking how he got that lucky... and his phone started ringing...
virat : haan bhai...
viren : bhai kahan ho tum dono...??? lunch ka time bhi go hya hai... and evrybody is asking about u both...
virat : bhai you are so lucky i must tell u...
viren : lucky... kyun...???
virat : bcos u are getting married to my one and only saali ji who is my soon to be bhabhiji... jeevika is vry sweet and simple and not fussy like my dearest wife...
viren : u r ryt mere bhai... par ab kuch kia kya manvi ne...???
virat : man kar raha hai apna sar phod lu... pichle 3 ghanto se mall k saari shops ghuma chuki hai n darjano (dozens) kapde try kar chuki hai...
viren : girls are like that only... what to do..??
virat : girl... she is not longer a girl bhai, she is a mrried woman who is pregnant...
viren : tu samajhdaar ho gya hai... i m proud of u...
virat : aapko pta hai... kabse yeh ladki kya kar rahi h...??? isko kuch pasand nahi aa raha hai... kbhi kehti hai main moti lag rahi hoon... kbhi ye kapre baad mein kaam nai ayege... kabhi baby hone ke baad ye mujhe suit nai karege... i am fed up... and want to run away...
viren : hehehe...
virat : stop giggling bhai...!!! apka bhi time aayega aur then i will happy along with my princess...
viren : yeah ... u and ur princess...
virat : bhai main rakhta hoon... dekhu toh sahi k manvi kahan rah gayi...
viren : hmm... waise tujhe yaad hai aaj kta din hai...???
virat : yaad hai... kaise bhool sakta hoon. aur mujhe pta hai manvi ko bhi yaad hoga and dats why she made this plan... bye tc
viren : bye... tc

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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣 🤣 Manvi wanting to read comics.. Only r mannu can be tat cute.. Seriously how will virman kids be if dey r so immature... 🤣 da way virat said Hawww!! 🤣 n den Manvi being fussy abt da clothes not suitting or fitting her aftr da baby was so cute... Had a gr8 tym reading... Very cute 😳 wat day is it btw?? Thanx for da pm update soon dear 🤗
Edited by shona_virman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
wowww it was amazing :)

cant wait for the next part now😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Really this is a fabulous part. Every one loves manvi a lot, especially swamini's love for manvi amaze me. Continue soon an thnx for the pm.

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