virman FF You are my everything PART 7(pg 15)

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avika

@avika26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Aise point pe koi rukhta hai kya?pls update soon. .

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shona v p

@Shona1907

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Oh no da story is going at da ryt pace plz dont speed up or Sumthng... Dis way as a reader i can visualise da story n njoy more... Its going gr8 n u r not boring us at all... Ok so dis was i nice update... HaHa Manvi blurted out tat she'd dressed up for him... Oh virat's test is now disturbed... Looking fwd for nxt part... Thanx for da pm:)

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Aysha

@aysha1989

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Nice update... Wonder who the new guy is..
Thank you 😊

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

it was aussum

shashank will he play cupid or seprate them whatever it maybe i guess we r gonna see jealous viraat yesss i love jealousy part in lovestories

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abhilasha143

@abhilasha143

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Nice part...so we can see jealous Virat...wow...continue soon.

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fehmida

@fehmida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

very nice update !! love theirnok jok !! they are so sweet !!

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Jaya

@screen22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

I Just read the five chapters of your story, i must have missed a bit because virat and maanvi were in the bedroom and then next maanvi was getting ready for the party, did i miss a chapter?

You are taking the time to explain the feelings and thoughts of virat and maanvi which is very nice, you are taking your time to set the layout of the story, so please take your time in writing the story?

Please continue and pm me when you do?