Maanvi's POV during Confession...In Shayri Format.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maanvi's POV-

Wo Peela Pattha Jo uss shaakh par latka tha.

Hawa se Gir parta Kamjor seere se atka tha

Meri Tarah hai wo Maine Tumse Uss pal Kaha tha

Wo pal Tham gaya Tha tumhare liye,Wo bas wahan Tha

Andheri raat mein ,Tez Aandhi Toofan aur Baarish mein

Wo Pattha Na gire tum Ruke Rahe Bas Isi Khwaaish mein

Ye pyaar ki Intehaa Thi,Tumhara Pyaar Kitna ghehra hai

Bhigte Khade the Tum,Masoom sa Tumhara chehra hai

Maine kai Baar Tumhe Dhikkara...Laut jao kehke pukara

Tum Patthe ko pakde Khade rahe Dete rahe usse Sahara

Jhujhla kar Main Palti Uss Jagah se Ghar ki aur chal padi

Kaun hoon main tumhari Ye keh diya jhatak ke nikal padi

'Tumhara sawaal...Main tumhara kuch nahi lagta hoon

Sun ke Ruk Gayi main Andar mein jami barf Pighal padi...

Khud ko Rok paana phir Mere Liye tha nahi asaan

Tum mere sabkuch ho..meri saansien meri jaan

Keh Bethi sab Jisse Sunne ke liye tum Taras Rahe They

Sayad Hamri khusi mein hi Rimjhim Paani Baras rahe they..

thanks..Divya...

Commnts Awaited...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏wowww👏

loved the lastv line especially...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lakshm

👏wowww👏


loved the lastv line especially...

Thanks lakshm,,,,,😳

Hope others like it too...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww...Its nice ! did you write that ? :)! Reallly good indeed !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SweetGirl-

Aww...Its nice ! did you write that ? :)! Reallly good indeed !

Yup ofcourse i wrote that...😳..Thanks for Liking it...😊..wats your name?

Edited by rabzonedge - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Yup ofcourse i wrote that...😳..Thanks for Liking it...😊..wats your name?



Its really good one :D ! and I m Hetu :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SweetGirl-



Its really good one :D ! and I m Hetu :)

Thanks hetu..Quite Unique name Hun...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG!!! thats so so so beautiful dear😊.It just touched my heart.coudn't b expressed more beautifully .How can u write such beautiful shayri dear?

Main to teri fan ho gayi. 😊👏

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