Megz's Fantasy SS: Jeet, chapter 5, pg20

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@-happilyunknown

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

thanks!😊 hope i can keep you interested!

I have read all your other works. trust me..you can..!!😃 so dis is virat doing a favour for his brodr..ryt?
and killing??!!!😲cant wait for the next update!

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Megha

@IndigoBlues

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: jia123sagar
nice concept amazing
continue soon

thanks a lot! adding you to my buddy list!😊

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Megha

@IndigoBlues

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -happilyunknown

I have read all your other works. trust me..you can..!!😃 so dis is virat doing a favour for his brodr..ryt?
and killing??!!!😲cant wait for the next update!

oh that's great...it's kinda hard to keep the same amount of readers you started out with😆 Yep...this is Virat helping Viren out by marrying Maanvi...but trust me, it's not at all melodramatic..i mean i hope this SS comes across as a thriller and not as a saas-bahu drama...😆

Yep...the Vadheras are the stereotypical cut-throat lawyers in this one...Viren is the only exception😆

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

woahhh...this was awsome...i have always been stalking ur work and i noticed that u were missing for quite some time now so welcome back...plz update asap and if possible plz pm me...btw my favourite fantasy will always be Swamini gets Virman Married...no matter how much better u write 😆

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Ahw, this is awesome -just like always- Is just

me or were you absent for a long while?

I missed your work, and is there any index of

your work, I kind of have the feeling that I haven't

read everything of you yet.

Okay so about you first part; It is briljant, really.

I mean your view on this, is just briljannt, how you

described how Viren was saved from the playboy

or spoilt brat tag, it is so true, but somehow you

are able to bring is so well and funny. Just like the

rest, serious things like getting drunk, getting marries

to the wrong person, making plans to kill your to-be-

sister-in-law after you married her, you made them

funny with your beautiful way of writing. I love the

concept, the couples getting exchanged and stuff.

And already, out of Viren's thought, Jeevika's words

reflected how much she cares about Maanvi, sacrifising

her love. Ahw, I want to say so much, I want to tell

you how good it is, though I am still amazed and words

are falling short. So I guess this is all you will get from me.

Edited by BrunoMars - 13 years ago

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

You are back... Wow.. Awesome start.

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Aysha

@aysha1989

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

You wouldn't know how Happy I felt when I saw your pm... 😃
I missed your writing so much that last few days I was stalking for your fantasies... I don't know how many times I have read the same thing over and over again... I know I'm crazy... 😳
This is wonderful... I loved it... and now I can't wait to read more 😍
Thank you so much for the pm 🤗

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Megha

@IndigoBlues

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: pankhuri.gupta
woahhh...this was awsome...i have always been stalking ur work and i noticed that u were missing for quite some time now so welcome back...plz update asap and if possible plz pm me...btw my favourite fantasy will always be Swamini gets Virman Married...no matter how much better u write 😆

well i'm glad..even if i write worse, you can remember that fantasy of mine..😆 added to my list!😉 thanks a lot for commenting!😳

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Megha

@IndigoBlues

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: aysha1989
You wouldn't know how Happy I felt when I saw your pm... 😃
I missed your writing so much that last few days I was stalking for your fantasies... I don't know how many times I have read the same thing over and over again... I know I'm crazy... 😳
This is wonderful... I loved it... and now I can't wait to read more 😍
Thank you so much for the pm 🤗

thanks a lot!