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saggitarius687

@saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: fehmida
i loved it !! you are so talented ! i liked the idea u had to introduce swamini past and how much it can explain her behaviour now !!

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thank you so much...😊 glad you liked it😊

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mika17

@mika17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Awesome superfast updates, ur doing n Amazin job

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shona v p

@Shona1907

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Thanx a lot for so many updates in a day... I'm loving it... Poor swamini:( she had a bad past bt finally she agrees to virman marriage... N we had da lovely confession too... Looking fwd to Manvi's reaction to da marriage discussion i mean i hope she cums to noe abt it... Thanx 4 da pms...

Edited by shona_virman - 13 years ago

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

awesome dear...i read all parts at a tym and must say...u indeed r very talented:):):)

i m eagerly waiting 4 ur next update:):):)

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

thanks for ur amazing updates

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Dania

@Daniaax3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Lovely and thank you for updating so fast ! And update soon

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saggitarius687

@saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Everybody...Virat, Viren, Jeevika, Maanvi come to the breakfast table...Viren and Jeevika too are unaware of Maanvi's confession and also of the fact that Swamini agree to Virat-Maanvi's relationship...Maanvi and Virat stare at each other...with Jeevika pulling the chair for herself they break their look-look...Maanvi makes faces while having all the boiled vegetables...
Kadambari:Hai ni Maanvi...tumhe ye kya hua...tumhara chehra utra kyun hai...
Maanvi:chachi aap log sab itna tasty khana kha rahi ho...muje...yeh sab ubla hua sabji...(mocking...as if she wants to puke)...yeh sab khana par raha hai...
Vanshika:kuch hi dino ki toh baat hai...beta...ab kuch mahino mein tum bilkul theek ho jaogi...tab hum sab ki tarah tum sab kha paogi...
they finish their breakfast...and all are back to their room...
Vanshika:Virat beta aaj tumhara sabse important recording hai...all the best...(Virat bows down to take her blessings)...
Virat turns to Dadaji...
dadaji:Virat tumne hamesha apni manmani kiya hai...aur aaj bhi wahi kar rahe ho...aapne man se insaan jo kaam karta hai...woh hamesha achcha hota hai...aur usme insaan safal hota hai...kyunki...woh kam woh uski marzi se karta hai...all the best beta...(Virat bows down...they hug)...
Inder Chachu...:all the best Virat...dekhna tumhara gaana sunke dil chu jayega sabka...(hug)
Chachi:hai ni...main na kehti thi...tum toh top ho...iss ghar ke hope ho...(hug)...
Viren:bhai mera...all the very best(hug)...(in his ears)...dekh yeh tera mauka hai...meri saali ko impress karne ka...apna mauka gawana mat...
Jeevika:all the best Virat...(hug)...
Virat:main woh bua se...milkar aata hu
Swamini:koi zaroorat nahi...bua khud hi tumhare paas aa rahi hai...all the best Virat...mera ashirwaad hamesha tumhare saath hai...
Virat:Bua...i am sorry...uss din...
Swamini:(sternly)...dekho Virat...tum ne aaj tak koi kam dhang se nahi kiya...aaj to kam se kam...apna kam theek se karo...apna yeh sorry alaap bandh karo...aur...jaldi jao...
Virat Swamini...hug...
he is ready to leave...but Maanvi is not around...he looks back to find Maanvi...but she isn't there...Despair...Virat leaves...Outside he sees Maanvi...
Maanvi:all the best partner...
Virat:main chahta tha ki tum mere saath recording ke liye chalo...last time tumne promise kiya tha...par ja nahi payi...
Maanvi:Virat main toh hamesha tumhare saath hu...apna aankhen bandh karoge tu mujhe mehsoos kar paoge...
all the family members are outside...Jeevika and Viren is kind of happily surprised but at the same time Jeevika is paranoid about the entire situation...
Jeevika:(to herself)...pata nahi mujhe itna darr kyun lag raha hai...Mannu ke baat sunne ke baad main toh yahi chahti thi...toh aaj main kyu...buaji pata nahi kaise...
An excited Viren...holds Jeevika's hand...she fakes a smile...
Swamini:Maanvi tum Virat ke saath uske recording ke liye jao...shayad isse use hausla mile...
Maanvi:par Buaji...
Swamini:itna toh tum apni partner ke liye...
Vanshika:ha beta...tum usske saath jao...aggar tum Virat ke saath rahogi...toh woh apne kam mein kamyab hogi...
Maanvi (looks at Jeevika):Di...
Viren:ab saali sahiba...tumhari Di tumse kya kahegi badi maa aur maa ne tumse jaane ke liye kaha hai...ab aap mere bhai ka time waste mat kijiye aur jaiye...
Maanvi:ji...they are in the car...
all:bye, all the best...

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Sanam

@meant4uonlie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

OMG !!! u wont believe what ur OS has done to me lol ... i was eagerly waiting for ur ext part ... every timei wud come to IF to see if you hv updated hehehe...

You are too good dear ...

waiting for the recording session ... :D

Edited by meant4uonlie - 13 years ago

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saggitarius687

@saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Viren is in Swamini's room...
Viren:badi maa...Virat Maanvi se behadh pyaar karta hai...aur aaj un logo ki baatein sunkar mujhe laga ki Maanvi bhi viraat se bohot pyaar karti hai...badi maa hum sab Virat ki khushi chahte hai...aur Maanvi hi Virat ki khushi hai...
Swamini:janti hu...
Viren:badi maa...main woh...woh main
Swamini:Viren tum kabse...mujhse baat karne se itna hesitate karne lag gaye...??main janti hun tum kis baare mein baat karna chahte ho...yahi na...ki Maanvi ke siva Virat ko koi aur khush nahi rakh payegi...Viren...Maanvi itne dino tak humare saath rahi...toh Virat aur Maanvi ka ek doosre ke liye concern dekhkar itna toh humein pata chal hi chuka hai...
Viren:matlab badi maa aapko ab Maanvi aur Viraat ke rishte se koi...shikayat...
Swamini:nahi hai...
Viren:woah badi maa main abhi...sabko...
Swamini:sabko pata hai...
Viren:matlab Jeevika, Virat, Maanvi...
Swamini:nahi un logo ko iss bare mein kuch nahi pata...aur main nahi chahti ki Virat aur Maanvi ko abhi is baare mein pata chale...main nahi chahti ki Maanvi ko yeh lage ki Virat ke saath uska rishta jod ke...hum uss par koi ehsaan kar rahe hai...
Viren:ok badi maa...par Jeevika ko toh main iss baare mein bata sakta hu na...please mana mat karna...please please please badi ma
Swamini:ok...par yaad rakhna Maanvi aur Virat ko pata nahi chalna chahiye...
Scene shift...
Jeevika's room
Jeevika(to herself):pata nahi isske baad bua ji kaise rect karenge...mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai...
Viren:(he enters)...toh iss mein nayi baat kya hai...
Jeevika:ji..??
Viren:ha, tumhe toh har baat pe hi darr ya fikr karne ki aadat hai...
Jeevika:nahi Viren ji...aaj Maanvi ne Virat se jo bhi kuch kaha usse mujhe jitna khushi mili hai...usse kaafi zyaada darr...mujhe iss baat se hai ki gharwale kaise react karenge...
Viren:Jeevika...tum na...iss baat ko lekar fikr karna chor do...aur kuch mahine baad meri saali aur apni devrani ka is ghar mein permanently...swagat karne ke liye taiyyar raho...
Jeevika:ji yeh aap kya...
Viren:ha jEevika...badi maa ko lagta hai ki...Virat aur maanvi ek doosre ke liye hi bane hai...aur...issi liye woh bhi khush hai...Maanvi aur Virat ke rishte se unhe koi problem nahi hai...
Jeevika:kya...Mannu yeh sunegi toh...kitna...khush...
Viren:nahi...tumhari Mannu ko iss baare mein kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye...
Jeevika:par kyun...Viren ji...
Viren:dekho Jeevika...Maanvi jis daur se guzar rahi hai...uss halat mein humein Maanvi ko yeh ehsaas bilkul nahi dilana hai...ki hum ya koi uss par kisi tarah ka koi ehsaan kar rahe...hai...toh please jab tak Maanvi theek nahi ho jati tum Maanvi se iss bare mein kuch nahi kahogi...
Scene shift
Virat over with his recording...
Maanvi:wah Virat...mujhe pata nahi tha tumhare gale mein Kishore Kumar, Shaan , Sonu Nigam, George Michelle,...sab bas te hai...
Virat:tum aur bhi bohot kuch nahi janti mere baare main Ms Maanvi Chaudhaary...
Maanvi:kya ki tumhare gale mein Shakira, Beyonce yaha tak ki Lata Mangeshkar bhi baste hai...???
Virat:woh tumhe waqt aane par pata chal jayega...chalo mere saath tumhe kuch surprise dena hai...
Maanvi:SURPRISE?????wow...kya hai...??
Virat:Surprise hai...Chalo...
he takes Maanvi outside...there is a bike standing...
Maanvi:wowww...bike...???(she looks at Virat)
Virat:nahi road roller
Maanvi makes a face...
Maanvi:kiska hai yeh...????
Virat:tumhe ise matlab...tumhe bike ride ke liye jana hai...ya bike wale ka bip data chahiye...???
Maanvi:kya hum bike ride ke liye jayenge...??
Viraat :yess...yehi hai na tumhari wish list ka doosra wish...
Maanvi:thank you Virat...
Virat:uh huh...partnership mein no thank you...

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

wwoww m lovin it yrrr
great oging yrr!!!

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